My Clone Is in the Ming Dynasty

I came here to read a novel. Is this a novel you wrote? This is writing a diary, and most of the chapter is devoted to popularizing historical knowledge.

? ? ? Does this count as a novel? If you're not popularizing science, you're playing poker.

What a pity for this subject matter, alas...

I gave up the book when I saw the protagonist telling his father the secret. Even if you just talk about the golden pupil's superpower, it's better than revealing it all. If one person knows it, it's a secret, but if two people know it, it's no longer a secret. Aren't you afraid that the protagonist's father will brag and tell it when he's drunk?

And you sell tens of billions of antiques, but you think the antiques are petroleum, coal, iron ore. Your novel is like Once upon a time, there was a mountain, and there was a temple in the mountain. In the temple, there was an old monk and a young monk. The old monk told the young monk a story and said: Once upon a time, there was a mountain. There was a temple in the mountain. In the temple, there was an old monk and a young monk. The old monk told the young monk a story and said:...

Can any brother rewrite this article based on this writing outline?

To be honest, the author's writing technique is quite inferior. Just ask me if you have eaten, and you replied that it is just as white as eating. You have no desire to read on.

It's so disgusting, I haven't seen such a vulgar novel in a long time.

Bro, what a story! You go to Shanghai to fight against the Japanese and it's over in half a chapter. Most of the chapter is about sleeping with women in modern times, talking to your father, and just a few sentences about the Ming Dynasty. Since it's a novel, you write the plot! Let readers figure it out!

If the king is not secret, the country will be lost. If the minister is not secret, he will lose himself. If a few things are not secret, it will be harmful! It seems that the author knows too little about China's old traditions! Still need to study more?

I can't blame the author, I can only blame me for being blind and looking in. Everyone, I'll go ahead and wash my eyes.

A complete running account... It looks like the outline of a story, without any content at all.

What age is it and this setting still exists? Will anyone really subscribe to it once it is released?

Brother, you are not good at this. Such a good subject has been turned into a chronicle by you.

To put it roughly: the interesting content of this book is in ancient times, but only 40% of the interesting content in ancient times is useful. The other content is just an introduction to history. The protagonist has two identities, one in the 21st world and one in the Ming Dynasty. In the 21st world, the main characters are mainly about fucking women (80%) and selling antiques (20%), so as long as the protagonist's perspective is brought back to the 21st world, just skip it, because the content is exactly the same, so there is no need to read it at all.

Do you find this subject interesting? After reading the introduction and title of the book, I lost interest.

The book is basically finished in the first chapter.

Add some finesse

I think it can be more refined

Books with few reviews basically don't care about their quality.

What is this? You don't have enough characters. I don't want to read it after two chapters. There are only eighty less characters. What do you want me to think?

Interesting setting, but unfortunately poorly writtenbaba

It's so funny that I gave the employees a red envelope of RMB 6,600.

After reading a few chapters, first of all, there is a problem with the setting of the characters. One of them goes to sleep and the other wakes up. An old monster who has been practicing immortality for tens of thousands of years does not have the mental power. He has been like this since he was a child. Isn't this a mental breakdown? Can you grow up? I started to look at writing character introductions, covering the year, month and day, thinking that the key points would be highlighted later. Later I continued to write a diary, only to realize that I was thinking too much. It seemed that I was overestimating the number of words, but in fact I was still underestimating the number of words. The world on both sides is so rich that people no longer have the heart to strive for strength. Readers like novels about the weak becoming strong. The story of a running account is unattractive. This novel is destined to be a eunuch.