I Live Forever in History

The beginning is too abrupt. It jumps right into the main topic without any sense of involvement at all, or it just jumps to the next scene with a dividing line, which is really dramatic. Also, the character creation and description are too poor. The characters such as Zhao Gao, Liu Bang, Xiang Yu and Fan Zeng are too stereotyped Not to mention the protagonist, the image cannot be established at all. I guess the author wants to Make the protagonist an invincible expert and then come out to give advice from time to time In general, there are many reasons, which I will not explain one by one here, so the book looks very weird The conclusion is that it is a fast-food novel. When reading this book, just don't use your brain to read it. Just forget about the various logics and descriptions of things in the book. It is a refreshing article

The introduction is not domineering enough, I suggest you give Confucius a lesson instead, pull Bai Qi to trick others, take Kong Ming to drink, and let Li Bai be too arrogant. Isn't this feeling coming?

To put it bluntly, the early stages of this book only slightly changed the lives of some people. It was not until the Wang Mang period that history was released. The style is completely different from "Poor Ghost", and it doesn't have the flavor of Sister Nan. Reference: Korean history book

If you don't change history, then why are you traveling through time? Do you want to learn from Yi Xiaochuan?

Therefore, the main plot of this book highlights a scourge that has lasted for thousands of years.

The previous Sima Qian's writing was good, but when he took in the young man of the same name "Su Chen", things changed. When the painter saw Wang Zhaojun's beauty, he couldn't walk, and he abducted his wife to enjoy it by himself. It also continued to train historical celebrities to serve as officials in the imperial court, causing harm to the legacy for thousands of years. The protagonist becomes stronger by devouring the national destiny of past dynasties. He supports the new dynasty with one hand and buries the old dynasty with the other hand. This setting is not good and makes readers outside the screen feel creepy. He is a national destiny monster living on the timeline.

If you give it to a woman, you can live forever, but if you give it to a man, it won't work. Isn't this author a licker?

This kind of plot is rotten on the street. The civil and military masters have lived for countless years. After reading a few chapters, they started to change their masters and show their abilities to make the leaders pay attention to this. However, the next second, they showed too much and turned into a fierce and brave warrior. His young blood and a person who has lived for an unknown amount of time are a bit out of character. This is my opinion.

I feel like it's a bit uninteresting... Or I could write it from the perspective of immortal immortality. Then, like a poor man, experience life and go deep into history to become a passer-by and a participant. From what I can see so far... It's all about pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, with unclear intentions and character interaction templates.

I'm afraid of comparison in everything. The starting point was The Poor Man's Two Thousand Years. Although it was unfinished, it still set a standard for this type of subject matter.

If you don't change history, will you be Yi Xiaochuan?

It's not Yi Xiaochuan, it's Zhao Gao's Immortal

It almost tastes bad. The setting of the national destiny is not good.

Brothers, this is so beautiful, and it has written what I consider to be the immortality essay!

Why is there no update? A eunuch?

It's too philistine to write about immortality and immortality.

The author is so handsome, I love him so much😍