Becoming an Immortal Starting in the Northern Song Dynasty

The author can't write, so he might as well copy Journey to the West, scare the upper class people, and then preach. Those who take the lower-class route are the Yellow Turban Army and the White Lotus Sect. Those are not preachers but rebels.

This book's biggest failure is the theory of demons. As the existence of a unique law in the world, it naturally has the final right of interpretation. In addition, it is the feudal ancient times. A real 'true immortal', especially the 'real fairy law', has been passed down. It is not easy to gain faith. As a result, we still need to engage in demon theory to gain faith and preach. Tsk, taking off your pants and farting is nothing more than that.

What are the basic settings? The system collapsed from the beginning. The Qi refining period is also called immortal cultivation? The word "xian" is used in everything, and "xian" has almost become a derogatory term. A qi practitioner is a qi practitioner, and you can fly just by practicing qi. How do you look down on flying skills?

... Well, pig's trotters might as well support a puppet to be the emperor and use his strength to defeat all laws and make a country believe in pig's trotters. It's not like modern pig's trotters can't defeat it. In ancient times, it took so much time and energy to act, is it tiring? Or has the author read too many modern prophetic novels? Modern is not ancient! All you need to do is control a few high-level officials. This looks really stupid!

Starting from Chapter 106, the author is not his own, but someone who wrote it for him. The protagonist is no longer a cultivator, but an ordinary time traveler engaged in industrial construction. After reading Chapter 108, I have no motivation to read anymore. It is completely out of touch with the previous chapters. The author should read it himself.

The most poisonous point of this book is that Pig's Foot treats itself as a child, just like a retarded opponent turns Pig's Foot into a retard, and uses its rich experience to defeat Pig's Foot. Pig's Foot has completely forgotten the power it possesses, and cannot play intrigues with ordinary people. It's so funny that normal people directly control several high-level people to declare the national faith. There are many people who believe it, and even those who don't believe it. I have written hundreds of chapters and are still playing house with ordinary people.

One bad thing is that the protagonist talks too much in the Song Dynasty, which is not good

I thought it was a story about underworld cultivating immortals, but I didn't expect it to be a story about industrialization and construction.

After reading dozens of chapters, I was so embarrassed that I almost got cancer from embarrassment and ran away.

The protagonist has been around for so long and is still in the middle of Qi training. The author should not focus entirely on industrial construction.