Shoji: Gentian Is Going to Conquer the World

The world of Little Master is more realistic and is the result of the combination of money and power. But Shi Ji is weak and wants to achieve the status of a big chaebol. Unless the food they make has buffs, it's about health and longevity.

How should I put it? It seems that the protagonist is particularly awkward. He clearly enjoys the benefits of rebirth, but his words keep resisting all this, as if the benefits are not what I want to enjoy, but are forced on me by you. In the old saying, you have to erect a memorial to be a cousin.

I feel like the author made a mistake in his positioning. . . Fans generally read the plot, and those who get good grades jump directly into the plot. However, the author has advanced the timeline many years, so then either he will jump back in time five or six years later, or he will be completely original. But Shokugeki is very niche. Unlike Naruto and Pirates, which has many characters and is written by many people. It already has a fan world view, so people will watch it early in the morning. However, as Shokugeki is early in the morning, I am afraid that few of the original characters will be able to appear. Not only is it difficult to write, but it will also not attract an audience. If we skip the timeline, it would be meaningless to set it five or six years ago. Moreover, what the author wrote before is a bit complicated. It can be explained by ordinary people's lack of understanding of the outside world. But in fact, wouldn't it be more reasonable for you to directly set the protagonist's clothes? As for the store, just arrange them directly for the system's gift package. Furthermore, it is now fashionable to fly. In the first chapter, everything about Golden Finger should be explained, instead of being left behind. That is the treatment only a great god can have. In the end, there is no need for Shokuji to deal with so many countries. People are very impetuous now. Just write about beating up Totsuki. That simple and refreshing novel about killing is about beating up + pushing girls did better. If you have to have a background, just use a mindless Chinese fierceness. If it is complicated, it will make people feel confused. And if there are many background settings, it is better to write an original one. By the way, there seems to be restrictions on fandoms here at Qidian. I heard that there will be fewer signings this month. The author just stepped on a big pit. Of course, I personally hope that the author can persevere. After all, Shoji is not like the sea of ​​​​death and there is no perfect background. If the author can come up with a general idea, as a niche true love party, I am really looking forward to it. If the author can create his own background without involving the background of the little master, and it can be consistent with the original work, I will reward the author 5,000 if he can write 100,000 words, and 10,000 if he writes 200,000 words, and put up a post as proof.

Disgusting protagonist, I have never seen such a loser, no ambition, lazy, garbage

The writing is very good and beautiful, but the recipes cannot be given randomly!

The protagonist is like an ignorant fool

Forget it, it's taken me so long to write a fantasy, let's stop here and abandon the book.

It's confirmed, Rgentian is the real protagonist, and the protagonist is just Rgentian's portable grandpa, good, good, come on, author.

After reading chapter 40, the main character is just a fw. The most disgusting thing is that he likes to find excuses to be lazy.

Start reading books and read them again after the fantasy is over. I hope I won't die of reading.

I feel it's too intellectual. A lot of the plot is caused by misunderstandings. Kobayashi Rgentan's strength, Luo Lin's identity, etc. These are basically impossible misunderstandings and then hidden. I don't know how to complain about it.

The author probably has never seen money and thinks that five million yen is a lot for a top chef. I was speechless when I saw it

Not only does the protagonist no longer appear, but even Gentian no longer appears. Is this the prisoner of delicious food rewritten by Totsuki Collective?

I write too many fantasies while eating 😅

It's already over 100,000 words, and I still haven't seen the original characters. The author's progress is too slow.

Dear author, this fantasy should come to an end soon. Fantasy is just fantasy after all, isn't it? I really want to see what story the 11-year-old Kobayashi Rgentan will have with the protagonist.

How long will the protagonist remain hidden?

I read more than a hundred chapters in one go today, and I happened to be chatting with someone about the idea of ​​the article, so I just mentioned it in passing. This is obviously a "travel-style" novel where you write wherever you think, and it is also a common problem in most novels. The two most basic points are why I write (starting point) and what I want to write (end point). They are firmly clear and clear together and end. Then work backwards from the end point to form a path to form the backbone. Then slowly move from the starting point to the end point, adding scenery along the way. This writing was originally a bit of personal innovation. It seemed okay to ignore some details at first, but as it was written, where was the destination? What is the purpose of improving so many personal secondary settings? Explaining so much background, what does it have to do with the storyline? Seeing the back, I even want to ask, what do you want to write? The hero's journey with Gentian? Gentian's own journey? Suppress the world by force? Food conquers the world? Eliminate all kinds of conspiracies and conspiracies and bring peace to the world? Why are you involved in so many power struggles? Do you want to break the blockade and make everyone like a dragon? Do you want the world to fight fiercely, with war drums roaring in the sky, making us fight in pain? Even if you want to write something based on the World of Shoji, wouldn't it be a mess? There are many metaphorical novels in Dian Niang, and I can still read them, but you... Or, was it originally intended to use an original character (protagonist) to influence the plot character (gentian), and then use gentian to participate in the story to reflect the protagonist's awesomeness? At the very least, if the "main line" is this fantasy, then what will happen in the end? Like the ending of the fairy tale, "The illusion is broken, and the 11-year-old Gentian returns to live a happy life with the protagonist"? There is no problem in implementing your own ideas and writing your own novels, but can you think clearly first and figure out the path yourself to ensure that you don't get lost or lose your destination?

Was there a reminder just now? ? ? Isn't the author cool? ? ?