Marriage by Agreement, I Made the Queen of Dirty Stuff Look Like a Queen

I really can't help but complain, can a person sing just one day after heart surgery? Doesn't it take any effort to sing? There is also a female protagonist who threatens someone's future and takes advantage of him, but the male protagonist softens her attitude after sleeping with her for a few days?

The first chapter was forced to retreat due to the author's imaginative opening. I would like to thank the author for saving my time...

I want to support the author. I took a look at the beginning. The author plans to play a reversal. He still has some ideas. I hope the writing will not collapse. In fact, the system with all-round settings is very outdated. I suggest you control the number of words and end the next book when you are most passionate.

The author's biggest flaw is naivety. According to the setting of the book, the male protagonist's sister should work hard to become a member of the capital. She is like a mentally retarded person who has gotten into the entertainment industry. It feels like she is being pushed to expose her weakness. Of course, I know this is for more dramatic conflicts in the future, so that the protagonist can pretend to be awesome and highlight his omnipotence. However, this kind of portrayal is really outdated. Today's readers want to see a human being, not an almighty god.

After reading 110,000 words, the author still deserves support. The writing is good, and the male and female characters are well portrayed. This is an advantage, and I hope to stick to it. The setting is a bit outdated, and the balance is broken at first glance. With the energy of an immortal enemy like Mr. Bai reaching such a level, I just bought the murderer and disappeared the protagonist and his family. What kind of childish blockade game is playing that cuts the grass without eradicating the roots? This kind of setting is particularly dramatic and particularly depressing. Forcibly explaining that political black forces will cause the boundaries of the book to expand indiscriminately and collapse. This is a poisonous point. There will be opportunities for adjustment later. I hope the author will seize it, otherwise it will be written as a eunuch. The main readers of this book are obviously here to read dog food. No one is interested in this kind of embarrassing low-level power struggle.