Bai Luo from Super Seminary

Don't be misled by the comment section. To be honest, I have read about 80 to 90 Super God fanfics, and this one is considered a masterpiece. The author's discussion of abilities and genes is really good. It's completely different from other fanfics that just briefly mention how awesome the protagonist is, but no one writes about the awesomeness. This author writes in great detail. In short, if you like super gods, don't miss it.

Chapter 132 Yan is a double-standard dog. It can attack the protagonist, but the protagonist cannot attack it back.

Let me put it this way, I actually don't feel anything like dark justice. You can have people withdraw just by saying that you don't have a heroine. The plot of this anime itself is just like that, and there is nothing else to watch except the girls in it. Your lack of heroine will turn off 80% of readers. That's it, farewell

The writing is good. If you want to write about darkness, you have to stick to it. Just let the hero do things like saving the world. The protagonist is an ordinary person who only needs to take care of himself. Live well until the end and you will be the winner. You don't need to have a female protagonist. Emotional lines are not something new authors can write well. Don't change halfway and write the protagonist as a virgin. This will not please both ends.

The protagonist is like a pig. Magic is similar to a genetic engine. They are both energy-based and technology-based. The protagonist has no idea of ​​his own except copying a little here and there. Energy shields, gamma rays, flight, illusions, mental attacks, soul attacks, energy exchanges, these are all creative ideas. With the basic Kamigawa language (magic is runes), the skills are all developed by people. The protagonist does nothing but eat and swallow jujube bookkeeping.

Why is the protagonist so frustrated? Has he been domesticated as a watchdog? Can any brother tell me about the follow-up plot? Has the protagonist risen to prominence? Isn't he still being treated like a dog?

The government of Super Seminary is just raising pigs! Raising the people like pigs is probably due to the lack of Mao Zedong, a weak country struggling to survive, and large-scale mobilization experience

She's so bored, why don't she go home to a stupid home? What's there to say back? Didn't you say that you are a god? You can't even see through this kind of thing. I really don't understand what attracts you to going home.

I can't understand Chapter 29. It's normal to run away due to the huge power gap. But the protagonist's sarcasm is hard to understand. He also claims to be in the evil camp. It is directly torn from the rational and self-interested character in the front. The protagonist is not stimulated and becomes black for the sake of being black.

Shi, the deserter protagonist also describes his inner feelings: he is a coward, quite a loser, quite selfish, he eats from the earth and does nothing.

It's so easy to join the devil, and your price will drop even more than the rose! It took them a long time to join and they were still trained according to their successors, so you have the same virtues as Thornton.

Leave the devil, Rose is looking for trouble again and again, Morgana can be said to be sidelined again and again, why are you still hanging around? You know, the protagonist and Morgana are on the same level.

I like this kind of fandom. There are so many people looking for a sense of presence. It's not the original country anymore, so why should we help them?

The few male losers of the Hero Company in the Super Seminary, except for the so-called potential they obtained from the principal's research results, are nothing to the Cosmic Angels and Demon Legions. In the later stage, Queen Kesha died, He Xi died, the Demon Queen died, Qiangwei almost died, etc., The so-called Hero Company could only play whack-a-mole on the earth, and it was completely useless. But it doesn't matter. Angels are all selfless people who love and fight evil for the sake of peace in the universe. They follow the arrangements and are equipped with a powerful female angel as their partner. They are like flowers on cow dung.

I have read more than 20 chapters of this book. The protagonist travels through time. His food, accommodation, food, and training are all provided by the Earth Super Seminary. But when he needs help, he stands by and watches tens of millions of people die in a city. If he said that he would die 100% if he went up there, you wouldn't help. It's still fair to say, after all, not everyone is afraid of death. The problem is that it's just a fight. The protagonist's ability at that time was stronger than Ge Xiaolun, but he ended up becoming a deserter. Therefore, this book is really unreadable. It is written by a white-eyed wolf author who has a wrong outlook on life.

You have been involved a lot, but you still follow the plot and force the plot to kill. Is it interesting? I keep saying I want to go back, but I put my money on the plot. I hope Yan, Ge Xiaolun, and Qiangwei will solve Grandpa Hua according to the plot. What about the protagonist? The little butterfly is useless?

Chapter 22: The Passing of Angels, what was the significance of writing it? The original plot of Angel's past has no nutrition at all. The only thing revealed is that Hexi is an old man. Why do you have to write about him? You have already written plainly enough about Morgana, so why bother writing about her? The devil was just a tool to fight with her sister in the beginning, but now he has developed some love over time. Do you really think Morgana thinks of him as a treasure? Bullshit depravity and freedom, you are almost arranged to have your soul sublimated. You have to be hanged here, right?

How should I put it? It's frustrating. Copying so many abilities turns out to be useless.

Some people always say that Super God should be patriotic hiss First of all, there is no my country in Super God. Sometimes there is a US card, but there is only one my country that looks almost like China The system inside is contracted by aliens There is a monkey in it, but this monkey He is also an alien He is also a castrated stupid monkey Anyway, there is no Tianhe City in reality The capital is not called Northern Star There is no main god who can override all things There is no so-called academy So why should we love their country every day?

After time travel, power, beauty, and the feeling of playing the human world under known conditions are all possible. The Super Seminary has no problem with the protagonist. It's time to upgrade, and the upgrade technology materials have been given. When I joined, it was said to be a bit deceptive. Overall, it's pretty good for the protagonist. It turns out that the main reason why the protagonist becomes stronger is to go home, which is awkward no matter how you look at it.

Leave the devil, you might as well go to Karl's side. Anyway, you are just going home and there is no conflict with Karl's wish for the void to come!

The writing is good, but to be honest, your description of the character Qiangwei is really disgusting, so many book friends later chose to abandon the book. In addition, she is a demanding person, as if she feels that the devil is born to owe her, and is as disgusting as a green tea bitch. She is completely different from the original work. In the original work, Qiangwei dares to do things and repays favors. Bai Luo in the book is similar to the original Qiangwei, and the Qiangwei in the book can be renamed Baiyanlang.

Why don't you write it so profoundly? Keep it simple and just promote the plot.

If you read a novel that looks like a bitch, it doesn't have a heroine. If you have the ability, write one yourself.

It looks great. Although the character of the protagonist is controversial, the author really integrated the protagonist into the story.

A bit strong, author. The back part perfectly fits the Honkai world view, and I feel like I can become a god.

Can you write a side story about Morgana in the first world? At that time, I said I would talk about it later, but now I don't even know which world Morgana went to.

Food, clothing, and supplies are all provided by others. In the end, even though your teammates sent you away to the battlefield, you can just run away. After you get out, you still mutter to yourself, what kind of evil does the child flaunt? How come you were not evil before but suddenly became evil after Chapter 29? No wonder they all say that the protagonist has a wrong outlook on life, even if he is watching Aiwen Heng, he can't stand it. This protagonist looks at the darkness for the villain, not the white-eyed wolf, so don't confuse it with the same thing. Nausea!

The author of the interpretation of the Emperor may be too much You must know that the Emperor initially led the Tower Keeper of Terra and then stepped into the forefront to become the Emperor of Terra. There is more than one universe or one star field in Warhammer. Even if the human form has different education and beliefs, the Emperor launched the Great Crusade and unified it. From 2K to 30.5K, he has always been an image of both good and evil, but he will never be called a bug It is not ruled out that this Emperor is no longer Him but the Fifth Evil God.

Who are the four major merchants coming back? A loving father is still a prince or a king, as long as he doesn't talk about adultery I don't think it's necessary for the heroine, but if you consider bringing a pet, Angel Chase and Leng are very good.