Comprehensive Martial Arts: Open the Gate of Heaven with One Sword and Marry Li Hanyi in Anger!

What are you writing, a few sentences here and there?

It turned out to be several books put together.

It's like a child playing house. You write really well.

I thought I really needed to modify it, but the content turned out to be the same. Is the author trying to prevent theft? There are seven chapters to prevent theft. Is this necessary?

In fact, the writing is quite good, but there are many details that have not been handled well. For example, the world of mixed martial arts appears, the words Black God Suit, Advanced God of War, Soul Sect, etc., Although they only appear once, they affect the perception.

I have finished reading it. The author uses flashback writing. All the stories take place in the protagonist's memories. The plot timeline is as follows: 1: Before the protagonist traveled through time, he was the assistant of the actress who played Li Hanyi. The investor harassed the actress. The protagonist dragged the investor into a river and died, and traveled through time. 2: Time travel as a child, without the addition of the system, and was rescued by Li Hanyi. Because he did not live long, he did not want to make Li Hanyi sad, so he left alone to wait for death. At this time, the system came and began to rise, but the system restricted him from knowing Li Hanyi for ten years. Later, he became a disciple of Wu Xin Sect, and met Wang Ye, the nephew of the Wangcheng Mountain Junior Master. 3: Ten years later, after growing up and going down the mountain, he changed his name to Han Jiangxue and disguised himself with pockmarks on his face. He met Lei Wujie, Xiao Se and others at Xueluo Villa, and walked through the original plot and pretended to be different. 4: Finally separated and unintentionally returned to Tianwaitian, everyone separated, the protagonist regained his true colors, Jiang Shaofeng, went to Wangcheng Mountain to find his nephew Wang Ye, went down the mountain, went to Xueyue City, met Sikong Qianluo to compete in a martial arts competition, met Xu Fengnian, Wang Ye was ordered by the Red King to plot against the Tang Clan and was poisoned, Lao Huang was killed by Anhe and Tang Clan, 5: In the end, the protagonist asked Jian Tianqi in anger, was ambushed, returned seriously injured, fell into a state of freedom, and became the storyteller of Tingfeng Tower in Xueyue City, telling the legendary stories that happened before. It's a pity that the author's writing skills are not good and he doesn't know how to tell stories. He moves here and there, and there are many places where the plot is incoherent, seemingly illogical, and messy. For example, Chapter 29: Killing Minghou and Receiving Yue Ji. Minghou is dead, but Minghou appears again in the 59th chapter...

I feel sick when I see the words "One sword opens the gate of heaven"