I Live and Die Pretending to Be an Immortal

Author, the book is a good book, but at the back of the monk, your treatment is too blunt. The protagonist only has one day, and you don't set the stage (why fight? Just for the house, no, you have to add a chapter where the protagonist wants to become an immortal and wants to know what an immortal is, why the dragon will die, and what he is afraid of) Without the ethereal feeling, it ruins the atmosphere too much. Also, you should deepen the sense of inaction.

Is this introduction cutting corners? It feels like the settings are not fully written.

Today is the first time in my life that I have been caught by an audit. It feels so uncomfortable.

I seem to have seen a similar one before, what is it called Fu Sheng?

It looked good in the beginning But things changed after Chapter 42 It didn't feel that interesting anymore, and it didn't have that fairy atmosphere.

The whole novel gives people a mysterious feeling at the beginning. However, in the next few pictures, the author places the protagonist in a third of an acre of land, and the novel suddenly feels like a backwater. The mystery is gone, it's like being trapped in a prison with no way out.

Um, after reading more than fifty chapters, I feel that the author's setting is not perfect or not very rigorous. He has never explained the ability setting and the ability to advance step by step in detail. The story feels like it has saved a lot of chapters. Novices can still understand it. I'll try my best next time.

Few updates, more efforts from the author

The author should still go out and advertise. This book is not bad and should have a group of readers. If it maintains this level, it should be fine. It's basically difficult to get ahead without publicity at Qidian.

If someone else kills the protagonist due to his abilities, will he still be able to survive?

Fortunately, the protagonist is self-aware and knows that he is a hypocritical person. The Pu family helped this time, and the protagonist must repay well.

It didn't look good after seeing Peach Blossom Spring. Did someone else write it? ? ? ?

Does the author still write? Why do you think there haven't been any updates for a day? It's pretty. Don't cut it.

It's pretty good-looking and not too toxic.

Beautiful... I'm exhausted again... I haven't updated in two days. . .

I remember there was a similar book, do you know the title?

Your verbal and picture curses are ineffective against me and my defense rebounds.

The setting in the front is pretty good, but in the back, I know what the content is just by looking at the chapter names. This kind of routine has been too much and I'm tired of aesthetics.

Just read the first few chapters and you will know the quality of the rest. In short, there are not many people who can write this well, and there is no sense of disobedience in switching to the system upgrade and face-slapping style. It doesn't have the flavor of that kind of subject matter

Conversations with Dragons made me abandon the book immediately

Alas, I pretended to be embarrassed. I can see the shadow of Lan Keqiyuan a little bit, but it is still a bit embarrassing.