Elf: Intimacy System Starts with Kapok Ball

It's a pure novel. The protagonist looks like a fool. It's better to change him to a native. Not recommended.

This article is suitable for kindergarten children to read

This writing is too immature The protagonist is from time travel. Since he knows the call system, he will not be too young in the original world. However, the protagonist's speech and behavior in the article are too childish and the sense of separation is serious The protagonist does know very little about Pokémon, but he is not I don't even know the thoughts of my partner who has been with me for several years. He is either really stupid or a scumbag. This can no longer be explained by slowness The psychological description is unreasonable, and the psychological description of Pokémon is redundant. I understand the inner psychological activities that I want to express, but the length is too lengthy. And that egg, even before it was born, had such a long space to describe its insignificant origins and mentality changes The description of the battle is unreasonable. Pikachu's electric shock belt restraint was seriously injured by the Spearow. Kapok's two fairy winds killed a group of Spearows and knocked the leader unconscious. Is this reasonable? Even though Kapok has been hanging out with the protagonist for several years, as mentioned before, the protagonist originally knew very little about the world of Pokémon, and there was basically no possibility of training. Pikachu also spent a few years in the wild before arriving at the research institute, but he still couldn't beat it.

By the way, the protagonist gave up the Yusan family, didn't Dr. Ohmu give him any compensation?

The writing is good, but the writing style is too naive. If it were the year when I first started reading novels, I might have liked to read this kind of novel. In short, I have read too much, and it is not interesting to me.

If there is Xiaomao, then there is Xiaozhi. He is still late for the elf. A doctoral research institute will not have a spare elf? Then where did Xiaozhi Pikachu come from? There are only three in the Yusan family, so it can be justified. The rest of the elves are suitable for novices, Dr. Oak must have them

Why let the elves, why the Virgin?

I couldn't stand it anymore and only lasted until chapter 15.

Personally, I felt that Chapter 3 was a bit embarrassing for Charmander. The next few chapters were too ordinary. I read too many similar Pokémon fanfics and it was boring.

Although the writing style is a bit novice, it reads like the feeling I had when watching the anime. The characters interact with each other very warmly, and the plot development is great. Isn't it just for the warmth when reading Pokémon novels? If it is too utilitarian and sophisticated, it will not be Pokémon. I was initially dissatisfied when I saw the protagonist handing over the Gosan family to others, but after watching it, I felt that it was handled very well. I couldn't help but reflect on my own utilitarianism. This is the world of Pokémon. There is nothing wrong with adults reading some fairy tales.

A complete Virgin bitch plus two idiots, how childish it must be to write this...

Recently, there are chapters that were released before they were polished. We are very sorry for causing trouble to readers! (Only the layout and reading smoothness have been modified, don't worry the plot has not changed!) 🌹🌹🌹

Single girl or multiple girls? ? ?

Because some chapters have been modified, some comments are missing. You can leave a message here. Due to my poor writing skills, you may have some misunderstandings, so I would like to state my disclaimer! Xiao Chun is not a licker! Jasmine is not green tea either! Everyone is great! I will continue to accept suggestions to polish the article in the future, thank you for your advice🌹

Come on, it has been collected and evaluated, and I hope to visit again and make progress together.

I don't know why I can't read this kind of elven literature without Gardevoir.

There are more than 300 chapters and the protagonist has very few Pokémon.

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