The Fourth Calamity: The Rise of the Dwarves

The author reduces the amount of player manipulation and directly sets behaviors that break the boundaries, such as breaking runes, provoking NPCs, and punishing them heavily or even deleting accounts. It is impossible to spend all your energy correcting player behavior all day long. In addition, write more about wars and things related to dwarves. Players are tools. The focus is on the rise of dwarves. Skipping the player's story will not affect the reading of the story. You have to focus on the key points. Otherwise, many chapters will be written about players, which is no fun to watch. They are all players' sarcastic behavior and affect the rhythm of the story.

No matter how handsome you look!

It's okay, come on, it's just the main character who is a bit shy about this and that. Don't write so many infighting plots. From the beginning to the end, let's see A doing something B and C doing something A?

It is the humans who call dwarves dwarfs and therefore accept this title, or the dwarves who see humans being taller than them and call themselves dwarves.

As a Stars player, I think if the other three natural disasters will not appear in this book, then it would be awkward to name the fourth natural disaster.

The writing and plot are promising. There are two shortcomings in the current novel that are not considered shortcomings. First, the medieval Warhammer world background is too grand and complicated. The historical plot of the Warhammer game is comparable to World of Warcraft, which is friendly to Warhammer fans. However, if the author cannot tell the story and detailed settings well, passers-by who have not played the game may be confused. The second is to summon the player's race. Appearance is justice. Currently, players can only choose the dwarf camp. For humans, the dwarves of Warhammer, to be honest, the men are not handsome and the women are not beautiful. For Old Serbi, if you can't choose an elf with long bear legs, the next best thing is to choose the human race. Dwarves are too limited. Overall, the book is very good. If it is put on the shelves, I will order it and support it.

Warhammer DLC comes with Chaos Dwarves! ! It's time for the author to discuss who is the orthodox dwarf

It's not easy to write about a dwarf as the protagonist.

What is the author's plan? Do you have the confidence to persevere? Can you write a million words? Do you feel that if you can keep it up, you will be worthy of becoming a god?

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