Devouring the Starry Sky: I Originally Wanted to Enjoy It

In the original work, all planets have names and surnames. It is outrageous to suddenly have a protagonist whose father is a planet. The key protagonist is also mentally retarded.

Such a protagonist is so disgusting that I can't stand it after reading a few chapters. It's so toxic.

There are too many narrations, sometimes in the first person, which is unbearable.

First person This book is most likely sent

Yy is too much, and it's in the first person. It's so uncomfortable. I'm writing a diary!

Thanks to readers for their valuable suggestions, it has been changed, thank you again! I hope you all like this book, your support is my motivation, thank you.

I have coded more than 3,000 codes today, and I spent all the remaining time correcting the article. Several friends suggested that I look back and see for myself. It is indeed true. It is embarrassing. As I write this, I remember that I have corrected it before. Now that I think about it, it turns out that I have made progress again. Thank you everyone! Really, thank you for your advice and support! Finally, please collect and recommend.

The writing style is stiff (specifically referring to the changes in the tone of speech), a bit like keeping a running account, but not quite. Author, you should have rewritten according to the outline from the beginning.

I'll give you a monthly pass. Come on and write.

Lord Snow Eagle. Swallow the stars. It's all a big world. The world that swallows the stars is called a spaceship. I forgot about Lord Snow Eagle. They all went together (met halfway) to Origin Continent. The true leader of the human race. The name is Yuan. Luo Feng and Lord Snow Eagle were just catching up from behind.