A Little Bit of Life Starting from Dou Po

I'm here to test the poison The start is unreasonable at the moment You have always been a waste and others will not care about you, otherwise there will be no option to assign work as an adult Different, he is the son of the patriarch first, and he has been a genius since he was a child, and he has reached a very high level at the age of 6, and he likes to show off since he was a child, he is the king of children. The higher you climb, the more painful the fall The protagonist is different. He has no patriarchal father or elder grandfather. He is completely an ordinary Xiao family member. He would be the most vicious if he was ridiculed.

You can still read what I wrote before, but after you write about Dou Luo, this book is already spent. Screen readers directly... The plot is too serious!

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This book belongs on the floor among Dou Po fandoms

It's not good to write anything, so I have to write about Douluo. Abandon the trap, abandon the trap! ! !

Douluo should end as soon as possible. According to what you wrote, it's disgusting (=_=). It doesn't matter whether you have a harem or not. What's important is that your character writing is a bit broken. The comparison between before the time travel and just after the time travel, and the personal behavior and image after the time, feels like being taken away. The lack of foreshadowing is pitiful, abrupt, and dissuaded.

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Why are you still trying so hard to suppress the protagonist's strength and brains?

What kind of stuff is this Douluo writing about? It's better not to write about it and just abuse food. There's something wrong with it.

No, the previous one was fine, but this time traveling to Douluo is too stupid, so I might as well not write it.

Why don't you take Gu Xun'er when you have the chance? At least try to stop him. The protagonist can't get it, and Xiao Yan can't get it either. It's really off-putting.

I have a question. You have written about the alien demon clan in Tianxuan Continent, but there is no Great Thousand Worlds behind it? Since you have followed the settings of Tudou's three books, you should know that the source of energy is from Zhou Yuan's side, right? With the Great Thousand Worlds, you should know that there are still plane fetuses, right? What nonsense did you write? Also, if Dou Qi Continent rises to Dou Emperor, it will no longer be possible? Your second creation should also follow the settings, right?

Is this book Dou Po? Why are the character columns all for Douluo?

What is the difference between basic attributes, strength and physical strength?

So many books could be written. Why write about Douluo? Douluo. This plot is too toxic.

What a scumbag, I'm so disgusting, can I die? I've never seen a woman, right? I'll grab every one I see.

The Douluo chapter is also too ex, the previous fight broke the rules, Douluo directly poisoned me to death, this is how third-rate novels are written

As soon as I saw someone using his strength to prove the Tao and playing with a big gun, and suddenly he was flying with a sword and playing with a sword, I felt that the novel was ruined.

Author, there is a place in your book where you persuade people to quit. I dare not say that you could persuade half of the people to quit, but I dare say that you can persuade 30% of the people to quit. I was the one who was persuaded to quit by your description in the third chapter. It's the third chapter "Anti-inflammation touched the nose and wiped out the booger" Xiao Xun'er and Nalan Yanran were in front. Boys generally hope to perform well in front of girls and gain favor. As a result, when you Anti-inflammation touched your nose and found out the boogers, you were almost discouraged. You can remove the action of touching your nose and picking out boogers, so that future readers of this book will not be scared away by your description.

How to put it, the protagonist always treats everyone with a condescending attitude. He looks down on Tang San and others. In fact, it's not that he thinks Tang San is worthy and upright, but that he is jealous that it is not him, so he kills Tang San and others and lives with Tang San's temperament. He is even worse than Tang San

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Why do I feel that the protagonist has been playing stand-alone games, and other characters are not written at all, Xiao Yan, Ye Fan, these are not written, the protagonist is like a game player, the protagonist is promoted too quickly, and he is alone all the time, which suppresses all the characters in the book. For example, Xiao Yan's growth process is not written, and Ye Fan is not written. The protagonist is surrounded by women except for women. If the starting point can be scored, I will give it a point.

I don't like the flow of all realms, it's a mess.

It would be much better if I wrote about the whole world instead of writing about collecting corpses to cover the sky.

The lightning strike at the beginning was really discouraging.

Isn't the protagonist's weapon a gun? Why is it turned into a glove?

Fans of other novels grow and progress together with the protagonist in the book. For example, the protagonist becomes the emperor first in Dou Po, and there is also Xiao Yan later, because he doesn't want Xiao Yan to have anything to do with you becoming the emperor.

The first three chapters of the author are completely unnecessary. It is completely unreasonable to write about magic stone bugs. If the body becomes stronger, it does not affect the overall situation. This is completely illogical. It is better to directly define it as physical recovery. Otherwise, there are no fighters. What kind of skills are there to practice? How can you improve quickly if you don't even have skills? The standard for Dou Po is that the Dou Qi stage is the slowest to practice. Once the Dou Qi stage is over, there will be a rapid growth stage at its peak. If you write it like this, the logic behind it will collapse. It is completely forced to write and restrict the protagonist from becoming stronger quickly.