High Martial: My Fate Is of the Primordial Mythic Grade

Seeing that Chapter 5 can eliminate 30% of readers, what kind of weird brain can come up with such a bloody plot?

A good hand is played poorly. Hiding his strength during the test, when asked about the origin of his strength, he also attributed the reason to an unexpected encounter. This is a school, not a world. It's so bloody. Feeling very frustrated

So far, the writing is quite good, but you can already see that the author is repeatedly relying on the protagonist's initial awakening stars to advance the plot. To be honest, I am already a little tired, and even after watching these reversal of the plot, I have begun to feel embarrassed. Especially when the protagonist deduces the first galaxy star, the bosses did not take various corresponding measures. If the author does not fill this hole in the future, people will still be ridiculed because of the initial stars. If you look down on it, the book will basically collapse The author should have imagined that when a person like the protagonist who can lead the entire cultivation system to sublime appears, the senior management will immediately treat him as a treasure and immediately take a series of measures There will be no such thing as in the latest chapter, where he was looked down upon by some campus recruiters who were kept in the dark, and then the protagonist ran to bet. Even I can guess the next part of the assessment, pretending to be slapped in the face, and then even if they are slapped in the face, those people will still I think the protagonist has no value in cultivating. In the end, either old man Min showed up to help the protagonist show off, or a certain top ten university invited the protagonist for some reason. The protagonist was also like a dumb idiot who was in the dark and was overjoyed ran The last is the plot of showing off before the big exam. After the big exam, he enters the university and is looked down upon by passers-by again. There is no room for development. He adjusts the ranking of college students and continues to show off. The author may even use the invasion of foreign enemies in front of him to make a trick. The protagonist enters. The pretentious plot after joining the army (this kind of poison is equivalent to the fact that the bosses sent the protagonist's further hope to go out for adventure, which has no practical significance) Having said so much, I hope the author can think more about the next plot and stop making those cookie-cutter but logically confusing plots. It is a very good novel. Don't write it. It is too late to revise the outline. The world view set by the author is very big. Don't limit your thinking to the small fights of high school students.

Yes, I thought it was just a short article, but as it unfolded later, it got better and better, and it became more and more beautiful. Please update it soon. Keep this level and put it on the shelves for full ordering.

The collapse of combat power is too exaggerated. It was said before that level 4 was already the best in the country in terms of combat power. But within a dozen chapters, all high school students were at level 5 or 6.

The settings are OK, and the writing is pure novice. There is just something wrong with the logic in some places, like when the protagonist wants a spot, this school doesn't work, and that school doesn't work. This is very problematic. For example, if a person with a bad temper is rejected by the school, then he is born in society, has opportunities, and his level is promoted to the middle and high level, do you think he will take revenge on the school? It is a staged reward in itself, and it does not require much money (after all, students are half-priced). If you hold grudges by then, the school will probably plummet by then, or even be unable to continue.

I specially rewarded you with 2 points and came to the comment section to tell the truth. Water and poison are not human beings.

This author is one of the most exaggerated and exaggerated in his reading of Qidian 😁

It's really poisonous. Those in middle school and high school can watch it. Otherwise, forget it, right? I'm afraid you won't be able to hold on. What about time travellers, and what about scientists? My brain was probably damaged during the time travel, all kinds of childish plots. . . .

I only read the title and the first few sentences every day, and there is nothing abrupt about it. On the contrary, it is very coherent.