Marvel: Starting with Dior

This piece written by Dior is deeply rooted in my heart. This is what a dick is, extremely evil. There is no reason for Dior's evil.

Chapter 44: Thanos attacks, Chapter 46: Infinite Power, Chapter 48: Mephitus. Those who don't know think it's a 0 less and it's going to be over.

I have a question, is Captain America suitable to be Big Joe? I don't think he has the golden spirit.

Don't be like the Marvel player next door, who beat all the decent villains for a long time without dying. Don't be like other novels, where after a long fight all the villains are dead, and the good guys are a little sweaty.

If there are any characters or items you want to see. You can introduce it in the comments and I will refer to it. Format: Name: xxx Source: xxxx Ability: xxxx Estimated level: xxx Character traits: xxxx You can also talk about the plot direction of this character, so I can refer to it 😌😌

When I see Ultraman, I want to laugh. In Weiman, you become Ultraman and can fly faster than light. Even Odin can't beat you. He can blow up the earth directly. Do you need any more intrigue? The earth has been blown up by you. Kill whoever is unhappy.

It is recommended to use more chaotic characters. For example, there is the crazy Fire Cloud Evil God in Kung Fu, the transsexual king in One Piece, and the evil wolf who challenges heroes everywhere in One Punch Man.

The initial attention of the entire book was all brought by Dior. Without Dior, the reputation of the entire book dropped significantly.

I think the dio article was the best written. Later, when I came to modern times, I felt that the events were too compact, and there were too many main characters, which made it seem very rushed. As a result, many characters' personalities were not established. Whether it was the protagonist's vest or the original character, it was just that I could tell what kind of character the character was, and it had to be a relatively major character to be able to see it. Therefore, I suggest that we discard some plots of unimportant and unpopular characters and use more words to describe the main characters. For example, the characters in the Saviors League are not novel in their abilities and not very popular. In addition, the characters mentioned above are not established well. As a result, when I saw the plot of the Saviors, I felt very indifferent and even wanted to skip it. Then when we got to Avengers and went to Russia, although the plot was a bit difficult to break down, maybe it was because there were fewer characters to write about, so the descriptions were better, and it felt very interesting. Although it was still too urgent, I stopped watching after I saw Nick die. Because of this big twist and the fact that one of my favorite characters died in an understatement, I was a little persuaded to give up and take it slow first. In the end, this book is not bad overall, although it is a bit toxic and the plot is too fast.

If we really compare Captain America and Big Joe in terms of golden spirit, then Big Joe's spirit is a hundred times stronger than Captain America🇺🇸

After looking at the catalog, I found it to be very watery, no different from the previous role-playing books. Also, is the progress too fast? Going directly from World War II to Mephisto, how many chapters are there?

The villain character cards have always been quite boring, and the character cards produced are also quite boring. They seem to be in the same mold as those role-playing novels. It would be interesting to have a Xiong Daxiong Erduo. Bald Qiang is not bad either. He has fun and strength.

We are here to watch the performances, not the love, hatred, and ideological struggle between superheroes. I've tasted enough, let's take it down.

I thought it would be the end of DIO, interspersed with the story of the pillar man, and then DIO was resurrected during the time period of Iron Man. The century-old (?) Feud between the Rogers family and DIO began 😰😰😰 but the map was changed 😭😭😭

Acting stream? I didn't expect that a new author would dare to touch this

I feel like the new map is boring and the evaluation is not as good as Dior at the beginning.

Changing the map is so confusing. The quality of this book suddenly dropped. I don't know what is written in the next part. I don't know what it means.

The early part of playing Dio was really exciting and well-characterized. Later, after Dior left the scene, it became a bit ordinary. I hope there will be exciting character-playing plots in the future.

The characters that appear later are getting stranger and stranger, and there is no sense of immersion at all. At the same time, some villains such as the Holy Lord suddenly stopped moving. What's the point of adding new characters like crazy all the time? I started skipping chapters as I read them, and now I have abandoned the book. I would like to ask all book friends if you have any recommendations for novels of the same type. Thank you🙏

Rather than saying that the protagonist is acting, it is better to say that the character is on the protagonist. The protagonist has no will of his own.

Suggestion 1: The biggest highlight of a variety comic-themed work is essentially Guan Gong fighting Qin Qiong. Although there are role factors in the setting, if the plot is copied from the original work, it will not be very interesting. For example, the scene of torturing Kaneki in "Tokyo Ghoul", such as Accardo VS the priest in "Knights of the Kingdom of the Kingdom", such a familiar combination will not be stimulating to readers when written. , It is recommended to write more character interactions and peak showdowns across works. For example, Dio VS Accardo is a good card, and it is no problem to write a few more chapters. However, the fight did not start, but the priest was sent away inexplicably. It is very, very regretful. Just writing Avengers Exclaim 666 has no meaning. The key is to make readers excited. Suggestion 2: The character design is too fast, and the characters fail before they are established. Especially for powerful characters like the priest and villains like Jason the ghoul, it is completely possible to increase the thickness of the good and villain benches, but in the end they are destroyed by themselves inexplicably. Is there any foreshadowing? I don't quite understand it. From the perspective of a tool maker, except for copying a wave of the original work process, the role in promoting the plot is not reflected and it became a unit drama. It feels very regretful. It is recommended that the plot should be written around the role played by the protagonist. Now that the book is written, why is it more attractive in the early stage? Because it revolves around how the protagonist plays Dio and how he becomes dark, and the second paragraph begins to inexplicably become a story about the growth of Daredevil and others, and also sacrifices the good and villain played by the protagonist. This is putting the cart before the horse. It means that I don't understand what I want to write. And it has been in this state since then. What is even more exaggerated is the latest plot. In it, even the role played by the protagonist is gone, and it has completely become the background of the villain in the new plot of Avengers. This is a bit unbearable. I hope that this state can be ended as soon as possible after a month-long break of updates, and I can organize my thoughts and revise the outline, and sort out what is most important about the theme of the comprehensive comic, and who is the protagonist.

The Dior chapter is really well written, and the various plots and characters are fleshed out. But then why does it suddenly become so chaotic? A character is played in just two or three chapters. Did the author write it carefully?

I'm alive again. If I don't want to write, I might as well just cut it off.

I ordered all of them. From chapter 150 onwards, there were dozens of boring chapters. After the major came out, it was no longer interesting. I thought I would directly attack the city and shout slogans about reviving Germany, but in the end, the arrests and escapes were mediocre. It was not as interesting as the previous chapters.

Don't be impatient, write steadily and slowly without being messy, follow your own ideas and don't be led away by other people's opinions. The quality of this first novel is very good 🤭🤭🤭.

It's all booked. Don't be in a hurry and write slowly.

Faster, faster, more, I can't sleep at night. The descriptions of these villains are too deep into my heart. I just hope that a positive character Rorschach can be produced.

Why does the main character have to play John Wick, but it suddenly becomes boring?

What a mess,,,,,,,

After raising it for a while, it died?