Siheyuan Starts from a Good Life

I laughed to death after reading the single chapter you wrote. It was originally written very well, but I didn't know that I was deceived by that one. Reincarnation is the biggest cheat? You couldn't get along well in your previous life, but will you be able to do well in your new life or just after the founding of the country? Without cheats, it is easier to arrange the plot later and it will not collapse easily. The question is, do you have the writing style to write a plot that can attract readers without cheats? To be honest, your writing style is really not that good. It seems that you just pointed out that you just started collecting materials on a large scale without being pretentious. After you changed it, your most attractive point was gone. There are so many people writing about Siheyuan. Why should I read yours if your core competitiveness is gone?

A thirty-year-old man doesn't understand anything? You didn't study political history when you were in school? Or a college student? How did you go to college? ! Don't you know that the family composition will be determined at the beginning of liberation? Didn't your parents tell you? ! Won't you tell you about the pain of the past? !

Are you going to build CNC machine tools in 60 years? Do you understand what CNC is? Before microelectronics became widespread, you used tens of thousands of electrons for control? They keep talking about cameras recording teaching videos, but there was a video recorder in the 1960s? He clearly said that he would bring a 16mm movie camera, but he kept saying that the camera would record the video and play it. . . Many people don't understand the scientific and technological process at all, but they insist on writing. . . At the Canton Fair, I had my desk calculator handy for calculations. . . 🤣There are many abacus in 60 years. . 🤣

Damn it, I suffered a big loss. I bought all the chapters at one time for a cheap price. I started to think that the more I read, the more rubbish I was getting. I wasted my money. I had to read it with tears in my eyes, otherwise I would lose more. And now, I wanted to die.

At the beginning, he whitewashed the deaf old lady and became an underground party member, but gave up.

It doesn't really matter who you lick or not. What I want to say is that this book is obviously not written by one person. It is like the product of a studio. They come up with an outline and find a group of gunmen to write it. There are too many inconsistencies, and the twists in some places are also very blunt. The Baji Quan practiced in the early stage later became the Xingyi Quan. In the early stage, the three uncles were poor and had great ambitions. It was not easy to support the family. Later, the tone changed and they wanted to kill the whole family. Some plots have just begun, and the next chapter ends in a hurry or even enters the next scene without explaining anything. It will be strange to watch. But what's even more strange is that it's written like this and it doesn't deviate from the outline. It's also awesome.

There is a plot in the back about designing CNC machine tools, my God! You don't even have a single-chip microcomputer, or even a chip, so you can design a stupid CNC machine tool!

What would it be like without plug-ins? Back in the past, even if you were extremely smart and your social environment and status were different and mismatched, you would not be able to turn over so quickly.

If you're interested, come in and take a look. In the first chapter, you realize that you can't watch it with your brain. I resisted and read a few more chapters. The fifth chapter directly cleans up the deaf old woman. Haha, farewell. Not only do you have to lose your brain to read this, but you also have to be a little sick to watch it.

It was very difficult to read. There were no punctuation marks when characters spoke. It was impossible to tell which paragraph was about characters speaking, narration or psychological description. This made it very uncomfortable to watch.

It's easy to make money. I can borrow it from other bookstores and collect it directly.

With such literary skills, he cannot even use the most basic symbols well. . .

I hope the author will study hard in the second and third grade of elementary school and stop playing around.

Licking the old deaf man, go to bed early

I started off as a deaf old woman. Do you want to laugh me to death? . .

What a rubbish book. . . . . .

I still can't accept that a ten-year-old boy beat an adult out of the sky with one punch, and knocked down another adult with one punch. It seems that I am not watching a historical novel, but a descendant of an ancient martial arts entering the city.

... I won't go into details about the plot. Can you put double quotation marks in your dialogue? I'm so tired watching it without double quotation marks!

What do you think about whitewashing an outsider to become an underground party at the beginning?

The threshold for authors nowadays is really low! You can write a book about any nonsense! A new type of wooden warehouse can be produced in two or three hours! The molds, materials, and heat treatment of your stamping parts are not done. Can this become a Mulun?

I really can't stand it anymore. The deaf old lady has become a fortress.