The Final General of One Piece

The simplest thing is to develop an ability that no reader has ever understood, and it can't be expressed clearly so no one can read it. You can't express a single ability, and if you express it, readers can't understand it! A skill that I don't even understand teaches readers how to feel immersed in it

Although I may be scolded, I still think the Navy is a just organization. There is no doubt that most of the people who sign up for the World Government's military or naval recruitment are enthusiastic people. Otherwise, instead of being a sailor, it would be better to be a pirate and get away with breaking the law without any moral baggage. The death rate of sailors is much higher than that of pirates, especially among pirates who are mostly killed directly, while the navy has to execute the pirates if they catch them. Building protection is always harder than destroying, but the navy is not completely righteous. After all, in the case of the world government, the Draco. In addition, as the largest organization in the pirate world, it is normal for there to be some rat shit in it.

Why is it said that the harem is moist? Are all the male videos in the harem poisonous now?

Since Akainu sacrifices to the sky, then all the pirates except the protagonist group should be sacrificed. They are not good people anyway. The protagonist group should also be crippled, captured, and rebuilt.

The nature of the navy is evil, and a few righteous people in the navy cannot conceal its nature. The navy exists to maintain the rule of the Celestial Dragons. Can all pirates be killed? Can't kill them all. Where do pirates come from? From among the common people. The latest chapters of T-Bone's Death tell us a result. As a civilian, there is a high probability of living in a small non-franchised country. He will either starve to death or become a pirate if he has some ability. Kaido was also forced to become a pirate. The more navies like Akainu and the stronger the navy, the more stable the rule of the Tianlong people will be, the more miserable the civilians will be, and the more pirates will be. Waiting for the day when there is no need to pay heavenly gold, how can there be so many people becoming pirates?

Why should Akainu sacrifice to the sky? Just let the protagonist be a naval hawk with a decent style. When the protagonist joins the dove faction, should he be promoted to Smoker first or the protagonist😥. Is it wrong to kill pirates and deserters in the pirate world? Ohala, there is a demon-slaying order, and by that definition, it is basically the world government that does not stick to the blame and pushes the responsibility down. Even if Akainu doesn't kill, there will be CP killing. More people died in the end

Find an animal type and eat it to strengthen your physique, and then use your conceptual ability to eliminate the shortcomings of the devil fruit.

The top war officials are collectively fishing, and it doesn't matter how many soldiers at the bottom die. Garp killed so many pregnant women for Ace. There are no good people in this anime. It makes sense to have a big fist. Akainu is a professional soldier, but he doesn't care how many lower-level soldiers die.

Don't you sacrifice the deserter king to heaven? No wonder you get trolled all the time? If you really kill Akainu, don't forget to kill Garp and the Straw Hat Fleet.

If you don't write about good pirates, what are you doing wrong? It's about singing Sailor and telling about the Romance of the Three Kingdoms. Isn't it funny?

🤭 Regarding the recent plot of One Piece, I feel that there is no need for plug-ins when people travel to the past. As long as they join the navy and train hard every day, the Shichibukai is not a problem for two years. Then they kowtow to Oden every day and then go to Kaido. Anyway, if they worship, they will not be beaten to death by Kaido. In addition, with Kaido's teachings, the Yonko will not be a problem for half a month. Then we will see what Oda does. I feel like Pirates has become an easy difficulty dungeon.

The general is not as good as the old four emperors 😅. Although the general possesses the devil fruit that destroys the world, 1vs1 is not as good as the emperor with full domineering skills, because the emperor has the color of overlord. The overlord color clashes with the navy, which pays attention to order. Because the overlord color itself is a person's courage, because after entering the navy, even if you have the overlord color, your overlord color will not grow If you have to compare the strength Emperor level 4 billion+ The general only has 2-3 billion.

Why does Akainu sacrifice to the sky? As long as you kill pirates, you guarantee the military revenue and expenditure of the navy. There is a high probability that Akainu will not care about other affairs. If you give an order, he will execute it.

There is a difference between romance and obscenity, and most harem novels will destroy the original characters. It would be better not to write.

It was originally a good new-generation navy, but since the killing of Vergo, the subsequent series has become very nonsense. The explanation is blunt, and the protagonist is suspected at the end, and the time traveler only knows the plot. In order to better complete the previous explanation, it is disguised as saying that the magic eye can see the past and the future. The writing of the book from the beginning to the eagle eye part is very good, but I personally think it has started to be nonsense.

Abandon books about empresses or harems (maximum two heroines). If there are too many heroines, the plot will be uninteresting. There are a lot of running stories.

If you like pirates, I beg you to be born in an ordinary country in the world of One Piece, with no system or cheats, and just be a normal person. I like you and continue to like Pirates.

Do you want to give the protagonist a barrier fruit? This fruit goes well with the Death Eye😎

The writing got worse and worse. I was so weak that I fell in love with Hawkeye Xiao Ming. There were dozens of chapters in a dozen, and I paid a heavy price. If I hadn't read the beginning, I would have thought you wrote an indigenous protagonist.

Dasqi

Pirates are a worse world. The navy is at least willing to do some justice.

Did someone change the writing? Why is it so vicious from the beginning of the Empress? She is a novice and embarrassing. The writing was so good when I met Hawkeye earlier.

The emotional line is so poorly written that the author might as well have just skipped it and made the protagonist look like a retard.

Injure the enemy a thousand times and damage yourself a thousand times. After every fight, the protagonist lies like a dead dog. Goldfinger has created hidden dangers all over his body. He doesn't dare to hit anyone hard.

There is so much nonsense about killing a pirate on Xiangbo Island.

On a whim, I wanted to read some anime fan fiction, but after searching, most of them were unsatisfactory. Let me talk about my feelings below. First, the conflict in settings. For example, if I want to watch One Piece, I will first agree with the setting of "One Piece". There are two most outstanding settings of this anime, one is the power of Devil Fruit, and the other is the conflict between pirates and the navy. These two settings are very interesting. The novel setting of Devil Fruit makes people think a lot. I won't talk about this for now, but we will discuss it later. The other one is the intensification point of the main contradiction. The open line is the navy and the pirates, and the hidden line is the rebel army and world conquest. The dark line is to purify the setting of the bright line and build the foundation for the development of the bright line. There is nothing to say. Therefore, the most important thing is the conflict between bright lines. A pirate is not a thief, and a navy is not like an army. This is a commonly used setting in any story, that is, villains do not do evil, and decent people can also be evil. The six major factions besieging Guangmingding is one of the best. In this way, there are two ways of writing about pirates and navy. In my opinion, the way of writing about navy makes me want to read more. Because the vision of the original novel is based on pirates, so there is a novel with the vision of navy, which makes me want to read. Second, based on the above point, the setting of the protagonist's abilities. One Piece is based on Devil Fruit as its ability, and some other force settings will appear in the later period, but what you want to see may be based on Devil Fruit. I think most fan fiction will introduce a system setting, which I feel is really inappropriate. When I read corresponding novels, whether it's Pirates or Konoha fan fiction, I want to see the corresponding abilities. Otherwise, why would I read fan fiction? A pirate fanfic, you join the system. I came to see the devil fruits, but not the system. How do you want me to continue reading? Every genre has its own golden finger. For example, the golden finger of martial arts is adventure. What readers see is the novel story of the protagonist's adventure. If you don't understand this setting and randomly replace the system with cheats, there will be many unsatisfactory factors. The so-called unsatisfaction means that readers will feel unsatisfied when reading it. Because the system setting result is one, the result you get will not become two. However, what readers read is the thrill of this process, and the subsequent result is not one or two, it may be three, which is a surprise. In my opinion, the system is a controlled life. Everything is fixed and there is no change. It should not appear in various types of novels. The most consistent one is the virtual game novel. The game has system settings, which is very logical, otherwise it cannot be explained logically. Just like this book, the pupil ability possessed by the protagonist can be completely replaced by Devil Fruit, because the biggest variable in the original book is the natural devil fruit. The protagonist has the original foundation, and it is completely defensible to use the "pupil fruit" to develop the direct gaze magic eye. There is no need to open a golden finger. Because once the balance of this ability is broken, there will be many things that are difficult to explain. Another thing is, I came to watch the world view of One Piece, which is directly integrated and unchanged. Should I watch the world view of One Piece, or the world view of other anime? There will be a nondescript sense. To use an inappropriate analogy, I originally planned to watch the world view of One Piece, but the protagonist has all kinds of ninjutsu flying all over the sky. How can I watch this? The above is just a personal understanding and is not representative.

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