One Person's Reincarnation Paradise

The writing is messy and disgusting. Didn't you say reincarnation paradise? It was put on the leather cover of Samsara Paradise to divert traffic, but the content was not at all, and the writing was rubbish. It was impossible to tell how smart the protagonist was. Maybe the author was not smart and could not write a smart protagonist 😅

He can beat ten old masters 😂😂😂, this Internet cafe guy is also amazing

Xiaosheng will add science to fantasy profiles, and will use some scientific terms to explain, such as the top immortal cultivator is a four-dimensional creature, the scientific explanation of the origin of ghouls, etc. Thank you bosses for your support. It's not easy to be a junior student. I have to code every day after work🥰🥰🥰

As proof, this book must be a eunuch

I thought I was a fan of Samsara Paradise

This... I have worked really hard😫😫😫, the latest chapter - the technological version of the Immortal Killing Formation... Please accept it.

Why should one person be ranked fifth in the cycle of reincarnation?

But the protagonist's force is the Umbrella Company, and the tyrant route appears in the later chapter of the Reborn, which always feels like the one from Resident Evil.

It looked okay at first, but the author sewed too much. Not that it was bad, but the sewing was too fast, and the movements of all parties involved in the conflict were too chaotic.

The author gives you a piece of advice. If your writing is not good, don't write too much content if you can't grasp it. Don't make the background so big. Many of the forces, characters, emergencies, etc. You describe seem to appear out of nowhere. There is no connection at all. It gives the impression that there is no outline. You write whatever comes to mind. After you finish writing, you can find a way to connect the characters with the previous content. It is too abrupt and uncomfortable to see.

It's a bit too messy, with a lot of messy things stitched in. Can the author really control it?

I don't even know why I recommended this book in The Dark Document of Qidian. When I saw the protagonist saying "it's this world that's wrong", I could bear to read it. In Chapter 13, the sect master trained him, and he repaid his kindness with a drop of water and a spring. This was really unbearable. G next book

Well, it should be dead, no need to raise it anymore

Tsk, haven't you done it yet? But I feel like I'm going to collapse sooner or later, so I need to take care of myself.

Is this a eunuch? How many days have it passed without an update?

Parallel import yy text, so messy that no one else can see it byebye

Just kill the good guy and chase him, no need for emotional strings

Let the protagonist go to Shuguang Paradise, and then be beaten by the group leader and Su Xiao together. 😏 It's interesting. Can he sustain Su Xiao's set of slashes?

If the author doesn't come out and explain, why is it still repeated over and over again after so many days?

Boss, hurry up and raise it. It's been a long time since I couldn't bear to look at it and it's gone.

There are three comments that are scrolled back and forth on the book details page, two of which are particularly easy to misunderstand. Also, if there is too much content for one person, you can state it in the introduction. The content of the park is the expansion map in the middle and late stages. Also, stitching is an early selling point, so if you don't like it, there's no need to pursue it. As for it being a bit of a trick to get into the park early. , what is very realistic is that the few Samsara Paradise fanfics that are still available to read are relatively average in the early stage. I remember that the plot seems to be okay, but the fights stretch my hips. On the whole, it is better to write a world with peace of mind like the author. Even if An has this tendency and enters the paradise, he will never be able to remain a level 1 contractor. Writing original development with Shuguang Paradise is not as good as the world under one person, and the requirements for the author are not of the same order of magnitude. Now the plot is rich in content, plus possible melee in the park, darkness falling, etc. There is no need to look far away