Douluo: Awakening the Chinese Dragon at the Beginning

After reading it, generally speaking, there are less poisonous points, but the heroine should not have too many emotional lines that you cannot grasp (it is unlikely for Xiao Wu, after all, there are too many troubles, and she is also having a brother-sister relationship with Tang San). The heroine prefers Rong Ningning + Silver Dragon King (but it is best not to have more than 4 heroines), or without a heroine, just start writing happily! Or it is possible for the protagonist to build an empire later. After all, Dou 1 is backward and has corrupt thinking. There are too many things that can be done. It is estimated that there are only two old god kings in the God Realm who cannot be the protagonist (life + destruction, as long as the goddess of life intends to establish peace with the soul beast, destruction will not be the protagonist) anyway. The other three There is a high probability that the protagonist will not tolerate the protagonist's attempts to mess with him because they are all petty. In comparison, what the old good and evil did to the next good and evil is outrageous. He has not given the artifact yet, so the good and evil are just vases in the back... The old Shura will definitely mess with the protagonist, but he will definitely not be able to defeat the protagonist. The protagonist suggests that he just create a super god himself...

After reading it so far, it's generally okay. There are some flaws in the middle, but it's okay. It's not particularly affecting. Let me tell you my opinion. I feel that the emotional scene is a bit awkward, and I think the protagonist you are describing can be either without a heroine or with a single heroine. Personally, I think it is best without a heroine. Having more female protagonists will look very awkward. Unless you establish the image of the protagonist in front of you, that is, you want multiple female protagonists, otherwise I think the image of the protagonist may collapse if you have multiple female protagonists. It seems that the protagonist currently wants to take the Shrek route? I don't understand it a bit. I feel like I'm trying to create conflicts to make Shrek fall apart. But I also said that Shrek is my second home. I hope I can make it clear as soon as possible, otherwise some people will feel very poisonous. Just some suggestions, it depends on your own arrangements, go for it

As for the follow-up, there is no more. There's no such thing as a lie behind the Killing City. It's hard to find a good one.

I hope the author will write less about the techniques of other worlds. Otherwise, it feels like there is nothing to write about, and he will just be reckless. After all, at the level of Douluo, the techniques of other worlds are dimensionality reduction strikes.