Dou Po: Xiao Yan Who Was Abducted to Other Worlds

The author's idea is good, but the story is too messy, and there are often skipped plots. It doesn't mean that you can't skip some unimportant plots, but at least the changes before and after must be clearly stated. This problem started during the Douluo period, such as the City Lord's Mansion, Alone Cultivating, and Netherworld Grand Duke. Furthermore, there is a problem with grasping the protagonist's strength and specific plot. If you cannot write a plot in which the protagonist's strength exceeds the current environment, do not increase the protagonist's combat power. This problem has already made me give up temporarily on the three-year contract and Canaan Academy... First of all, after the protagonist comes back, after integrating the alien fire + restoring the fighting spirit, the strength can be at the level of a first-time Dou Zun at any time. So what are you wasting in the northwest continent? Even if you want to complete this plot, you can just get the strange fire early, conquer the entire Yunlan Sect, and then kill the guardian of the Soul Palace. How can you play with Nalan Yanran and the Gama Empire? At this time, a Dou Zun is completely capable of being honored as an ancestor in the northwest corner. As long as you don't make the Xiao family too prominent, there will be no problem. It's not direct to pass through the Black Corner Territory later🦈 Han Feng, and it's not direct to Fallen Heart Flame to enter Canaan Academy. A seventh-level alchemist who is equivalent to a first-time Dou Zun, playing pig and eating tiger with a bunch of great Dou Masters and Dou Ling... Ah? The problem was that they didn't hide it. Someone from the Soul Palace came directly to the Xiao family. Furthermore, with the soul power in the middle stage of the spiritual realm, you can just disguise your identity and make a deal with Canaan College. Without Mang Tianzhi coming back, Canaan College has no room to refuse, and those who are really related to the protagonist have no shortage of fallen heart flames to help them practice in the past few years. I kept dawdling like this, and then I looked at the table of contents, and after a few chapters I went to Wu Da Qian Kun again. Are you planning to come back and do this kind of Dou Zong level plot?

I have read it four times, but apart from watching it carefully the first time, I only watched the Douluo and Dou Po parts in the next few times. The writing is very good, especially the grasp of the characters' personalities, and the plot advancement is okay. I personally think it is quite coherent. Except that I personally don't like the emotional lines of multiple female protagonists (maybe because I don't like female fans), there is no problem. In fact, I feel that it would be a little messy if there were too many emotional lines, but the purely career part is very enjoyable to watch! I suggest that Xiao and Lin have more scenes in their careers! Even if there are multiple female protagonists' love lines, they can be touched upon in one stroke (I feel like the author needs to practice more on writing love lines).

The real black spots refer to the important factors in the formation of the protagonist's image, and the flaw black spots are the supplementary factors to the protagonist's image Douluo Yi's real black spots are behaviors that affect the protagonist's stance: 1. In the admission incident, he was tempted to kill just because the guard made things difficult. There are only two people present, who could be the suspect? Also, if you don't understand the intelligence, what if a passing expert sees it (sees the hidden weapon/sees the attacker)? Also, when I left the killing city to go to Yuexuan Pavilion, I beat the guard without taking care of myself, and even beat one to death for the sake of my relatives (referring to my subordinates). 2. In the sunset forest massacre, if you don't get it, destroy it, right? The act of farting against Xiao Wu's evil spirit beast oath caused the image to further collapse, and became an important factor in the fandom for Tang San to selfishly attack the people around him 3. Shrek's school motto "Those who dare not cause trouble are mediocre", which established an important factor in Shrek's image of bullying the weak and fearing the strong 4. Xiao Wu's double standard principle, whenever Xiao Wu is injured, he will definitely have murderous intentions. Whether Xiao Wu is causing trouble or participating in a competition, you™ still let 🐇 go up. This forms a logical relationship with the subsequent conspiracy theory that the identity was revealed intentionally, and is the key cornerstone of the conspiracy theory. 5. The Dugu Bo incident, Dugu Bo's attitude towards the protagonist is a disaster that turns into a blessing. From an antagonist to a savior, Dugu Bo became Tang San's life and death friend after the transformation. However, Tang San's behavior of pulling out the fairy grass is generally called repaying a favor or severing a favor in China. First of all, it only gave a temporary solution, and secondly, it pulled out all the fairy grass. Later, after Dugu Bo became a patron, he didn't see Tang San do anything to him. For example, he helped Dugu Yan evolve, and it didn't matter if he didn't give some inferiority to the fairy grass, but it didn't. In addition, Jian Chen didn't get anything from his sacrifice to the Queen, so it can be said that his image has really plummeted. 6. Telling lies with your eyes open. Normal people's double standards are mostly to prevent themselves from falling under the moral bottom line or to do what others do. Tang San's double standards refer to making demands on others under the moral bottom line. Flaws and black spots (compared to the SB protagonists who were all gangsters in the web articles of that period): 1. Double-standard behavior towards the villain, which refers to sneak attacks, deceptions, and massacres of affiliated personnel (you can only do it yourself, not the other side) 2. Exploding the Killing City does not involve the subsequent films 3. He talks about innocence, but he still eats it, which is the normal behavior of the gangster protagonist. For example, in the later stage, he accepted the kiss from Ning Rongrong and Zhu Zhuqing (this character was OOC and rushed towards the waste pendant after accepting Dai Mubai) in front of Dai Mubai's Oscar. It was normal 4. The evolution of the Eight Spider Spears is pure evil soul master behavior 5. He had just said that once he was a teacher, he would always be a father, and he immediately wanted to kill Yu Xiaogang, but it was normal for that period, and the character had just debuted and there was no obvious personality. 6. Regarding Tang Hao's stupid filial piety, some people here want to say that it is an ancient character. So in ancient times, men and women had different seats at the age of seven, and Tang San slept with the rabbit for several years.

Is it possible that Emperor Yan is still afraid of the entanglement of blue silver?᷄ࡇ•᷅

In the whole Shrek, Zhu Zhuqing is the most interesting person. If you don't want to be horny, you might as well discuss the training system with Lin Dong and the two idiots.

These chapters are getting more and more boring. It's uncreative to follow the protagonist group all the time. I don't understand why it's just for Ning Rongrong. Then it's better to go to Blazing Academy to learn how to use fire in multiple ways, or follow Lin Dong to explore more training systems and then leave. Shrek has nothing to learn.

The writing is really good. I really hate reading fanfics where someone travels to Dou Po or a new person replaces Xiao Yan. Xiao Yan is Xiao Yan Maybe it's because I was younger when I read the book Dou Po and the impression was too deep in my heart Xiao Yan has a deep impression on me Unlike other novels, the protagonist gives me the feeling that he is someone else Xiao Yan is like my friend, brother, or myself in my heart So I can't accept that an unrelated person comes to steal his opportunity Or by reading Use the plot to steal the opportunity and then give it to Xiao Yan or exchange it in a condescending or pretentious manner So this is still the original Xiao Yan. It just gives some new things. I really like it. I really feel that this is the best written book so far. "The Fight from Genius" So far, your book is not inferior to this one in terms of creativity And the character descriptions of Xiao Yan and Yao Lao Huan Lin Dong are very consistent with the original work. Come on, keep an eye on you. Xiao Yan is the best.

I don't understand the meaning of arranging the communication between Ying Huanhuan and Xiao Yan. May I ask the author what your thoughts were in arranging this plot?

Getting mixed up with Shrek, for a bullshit Ning Rongrong, it seems more and more different. It feels like it is completely different from what I wrote before.

This wave slapped the fan author in the face. Tudou made it clear that he was the Supreme Emperor. When you enter the world, you can become a supreme being by changing your aura.

I really want to ask, does the author really think that Lin Dong has no fans?

Tmd This trend really makes Xiao Yan brothers peach blossoms and they will be bullied away.

So far, the writing is pretty good. Tang San doesn't use too much force just for the sake of being black. The interaction with Lin Dong is also very interesting. How are the two brothers? It's fun to see it, but in the last few chapters, it has started to get weird again after meeting Shrek. Now I want to know, author, have you not given up on the idea of ​​Ning Rongrong being the heroine? I don't mean to be mean. When I read the comic version of Douluo, I actually had a good impression of Ning Rongrong. She was a pretty good girl, but that was all. To be honest, if the protagonist is someone else in the world who is equal to or not as good as Douluo, or even just someone else in Douluo, I wouldn't be so opposed to it. First of all, we must know who Xiao Yan is, the future Emperor Yan. His experience and achievements have destined him to never be with a girl like Ning Rongrong. If I remember correctly, Xiao Yan in this book was a teenager before he came here, which means he has been with Xun'er for a long time. If he had been in Douluo since he was a child, it would be okay, but growing up in Dou Po, and having Xun'er around him who always cared about him when he became a "waste", Xun'er was destined to be unique. Even if Ning Rongrong had a good impression on him, it was not a good impression. After all, in Douluo, he was still a genius. It is precisely after experiencing the trough of cold eyes that Dou Po's family and Xun'er are more important. Secondly, what Xiao Yan will go through in the future, not to mention the hardships of the original work, are the creations of the future author. I don't believe there are really no ups and downs, and Xiao Yan is destined to move forward despite the wind and waves. He has his own power and his own pursuits. The beauties in the original work all have their own characteristics and strength. Those who can be with him, Medusa is the Snake Queen, with her own ruthlessness, courage, and ambition. She is still the Snake Queen even when she is with Xiao Yan, while Xun'er is the eldest lady of the ancient tribe. She has her own vision, the background of her rich family, and she has high potential to catch up with Xiao Yan, not to mention the companionship of the lows. None of these are comparable to Ning Rongrong. Just imagine, if Ning Rongrong and Xiao Yan are really together, what will they do after they come to a wider world with a higher limit? Even if she doesn't care about the sect, she still has to adapt, right? Then she has to chase Xiao Yan, but honestly, can she catch up? Xiao Yan would not stop and wait for her. In the original work, Xun'er still let Xiao Yan chase her at the beginning, but Ning Rongrong couldn't find her. And what should we do when we face Xun'er after reaching Doupo? No matter in terms of personality, experience, vision, etc., How does she compare? Ning Rongrong is a good child, but she is not worthy of Xiao Yan. This is the fact. Also, if the author has no intention of settling on Ning Rongrong, I would like to ask what is the situation of the "son-in-law" of the Qibao Glazed Sect in the latest chapter? Even if it was a rumor spread on purpose, Xiao Yan should know it by now. According to Xiao Yan's character, wouldn't he be a person who is procrastinating and deliberately leaving things ambiguous? It's just boring. He knows all the rumors, so he will at least clarify them, right? Although she has grown again, Ning Rongrong should be just a little girl in his opinion, so he won't let such rosy rumors go unchecked, right? I don't quite understand the author's insistence on creating ambiguity between Ning Rongrong and Xiao Yan. They don't value love or ambiguity when they are fighting each other. At least I think it's pretty sweet to have love openly and openly. This is really weird. I think I would rather see Xiao Yan training and upgrading all the way to defeat monsters, slap his face, take revenge, and pretend to be cool? In short, it shouldn't be here to have an affair or love with someone from Douluo, right? In short, I just hope that the author will be accurate, either confirming the identity of the heroine and trying to get the logic back to life, or completely eliminating the identity of the heroine and doing it neatly. Instead of doing this, why not write more about Xiao Yan and Lin Dong's interactions

During the Douluo period, although Xiao Yan was slightly better than Lin Dong, he could still be said to be twice as strong. During the martial arts period, it seems that Xiao Yan wore Lin Dong's vest and did Dongzi's original work. This left me speechless. It feels like a different person in the martial arts stage. As a reader, of course I can understand and accept that Xiao Yan is the strongest, but it is obvious that the Douluo era can be written to give the feeling of two strong people, but later on, it is very confusing to skip the picture and make the mover become the background board. You said you can't open a line, but when I looked at it today, I saw the Moro Line again. A master of flames. (Of course, there is nothing wrong with the previous logic line. The Ancient Formation of Heaven and Earth and the Flame Ancestral Talisman are indeed extremely important. The main reason is that it is not the best way to join the Dao Sect after the Hundred Dynasties War. I think it would be great to open a new line at this time. Entering for the purpose of investigation, but Lin Dong himself only has the Dao Sect to choose from, which is completely fine Entrust the mover. As for not opening the Moro line, if it is defeated after this game, then pretend that I didn't say it 😜) As for the urgency issue, I said before that the pace is slightly slow, and I have accumulated almost 20 chapters. This feeling still exists, and I feel quite disappointed. When I first came here, I hoped to increase my strength as soon as possible. I always knew this. Although Huohuo's strength is also steadily advancing and has been sufficiently strengthened, overall it gives me a feeling of being able to walk around with ease. The Huohuo fight has a three-year agreement and must be pursued desperately. After it is over, the family will be targeted. After it is over, the Black Corner Region will become a gangster. After it is over, the alien fire riot will have to be desperate. This is almost suffocating from beginning to end. Compared to Wudong Huohuo, his strength is already crushing the three little kings of the Yuanmen of the previous generation, but the object of the game is obviously still the three little kings of the Yuanmen of this generation. (Writing this, I think of the part where Ying Huanhuan helped with the piano. Xiao Yan could kill the Yuanmen gang who were the back-up men, so why did he bring Ying Huanhuan along with him? It was an internal act initiated by members of a small group, and the suspicion of Daozong had not been completely ruled out at this time. Why was the news so openly revealed?) Of course, what he insisted on saying was that he was plotting against the three masters of the Yuanmen, but it also led to the escort of Moro, and the pressure fell off a cliff. Our own side, which was originally at a slight disadvantage, was brave and resourceful even if we planned these arrangements in advance. The most exciting part about drawing cards is the cutscene. Regardless of whether the outcome is good or bad, it will never be more exciting than this moment. Now this Moro is the result, just a big guarantee, and it will be difficult to have any suspense in the next plot... How can I say that the fan cheating must be to gain an advantage and crush the game, there is nothing wrong with it. But how can you raise this level of excitement without the slightest unexpected situation? Both Huohuo and Dongzi have been strengthened. It turns out that Dongzi and the others can do things (thrilling), and with the addition of Huohuo (plain narrative), the ups and downs have become declarative sentences The writing is very messy 😅, and I deeply apologize for lowering everyone's level.

Muchen should be the one to deal with Tang San😏 Let the little Zha San know what cheating is😏

Don't bring the impression of the later series. Douluo comics can be considered my childhood. Since Douluo 4 came out, the image has been completely ruined. Nowadays, Douluo fans basically humiliate Tang San. At present, it seems that Tang San's selfishness is only written, but he still looks like a human being. He must be like a human being. I really don't want to watch Douluo fans who gave birth to Tang San.

It feels like the protagonist has been playing house

I would like to ask, does the author intend to make Ning Rongrong the heroine or one of the heroines? When I was thinking about fusion skills in the latest picture, I might have thought too much. I always felt that it was alluding to Ning Rongrong, which was a bit confusing. I think this book is quite well written. I personally don't have any objections to the group style, and the portrayal of Xiao Yan in this book is just right. As another book friend said before, I read the book about Xiao Yan's rebirth as Tang San's brother a little too hard, but this one feels quite normal. I hope you can work harder. However, although I don't mind joining the group, I still think it's better not to use Ning Rongrong as a reason (the following are my thoughts after I feel that Da Da seems to be a little inclined to Rongrong) I think Ning Rongrong or in terms of Dou Yi's world view, there are really not many people that Xiao Yan can pay special attention to. I personally think it is more suitable to discuss the training system with Lin Dong. To be honest, I think Xiao Yan's choice to go to Shrek is a bit deliberate, especially when combined with the reason for his acquaintance with Ning Rongrong. How should I put it, it even makes me feel that in order to let Xiao Yan go to Shrek, he deliberately made Ning Rongrong exposed? The scene feels a little bit poisonous in a subtle way. Shrek's plot is generally okay so far, but it still feels the same. I hope the author doesn't regard Ning Rongrong as a heroine-oriented character. To put it mildly, I think they are not from the same world. I think it would be great to be a beauty friend. I don't know how you will deal with the problem of inter-world travel in the future. I only want to make one point. The strength of the two sides is seriously unequal, and the cultivation systems are different. Although Xiao Yan and Lin Dong claim to be Douluo's system, their respective cultivation methods still have their own time. Although they can practice in Douluo, they are not sure what will happen if Douluo people go to their time. Is there always a process of retaining the realm but re-polishing the strength. In short, if there is really any important bond with Douluo, it is nothing more than taking people away or opening up roads on both sides, opening up the world wall. To be honest, I find it difficult to say, but when taking people away, you have to consider whether you also need to take your family with you (otherwise, if it is really Ning Rongrong, you have to consider her father and the entire sect, and have already considered the impact of the person disappearing). In short, it is very troublesome, and Xiao Yan's bond in the original world is hard to say. The attitude of the people he suddenly brought back. Nothing else. If there really is a new heroine in Douluo, Xun'er will definitely have a secret relationship with her when she returns. Xiao Yan may still treat her like a younger sister, but I think Xun'er should have already thought about it at this time. Furthermore, I whispered, I think that in the case of Love Brain Continent, no one is really worthy of the Emperor Yan of my world. Medusa in the original work is the queen of the original snake people, and Xun'er is also the eldest lady of the ancient tribe. In the world view based on Dou Qi Continent, they have great abilities and world view patterns. How can I say Douluo Continent? I feel that most of them don't have that pattern. If I can give Bibi Dong a love brain, maybe I can discuss with Xiao Yan the issues of governance and helping the people. Finally, there is the issue of martial soul fusion in the latest chapter. My personal opinion is that people like Yao Lao who have reached this point on their own and people like Xiao Yan who have experienced losing their strength will never put the method of becoming stronger on others. After all, it is impossible to determine what others think, and there is no guarantee that people will be around when they need to improve their strength. Even Xun'er in the original novel or other trusted people Xiao Yan will not do this. Not to mention changing yourself in order to improve your strength and cooperate with others. Once you change many of your skills, you have to change them accordingly. In addition to the above-mentioned shortcomings, it is completely uneconomical. Even if other people really want help from others, they have to find information and decent character to let them practice and change it from the beginning. How can you cooperate with others by yourself? It is not because you are not strong enough to seek shelter. Of course, these are just my personal opinions, and they are not intended to guide writing. I will respect the author no matter how he writes, but I just hope there is a logical explanation for this. I hope you can work hard, my writing is really good now (◦˙▽˙◦)

I never expected that when I encountered a fraudulent book title, I would actually have a dog fight.

It's a fucking mistake to set up a battle, it's a grind, it's obviously stronger than them, it's a grind.

I don't understand what this introduction mainly expresses. It's too confusing. Is this novel good? Brothers who have seen it please answer it!

You can transcend time, but are you afraid that you can't defeat the evil clan?

It's over... There are a lot of things that are unfinished 😥 Haven't you written anything about the world? 😥

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