This Star Is Legal but Sick

I've been reading this book for a while. What can I say about this book? It was quite fresh at the beginning. As you get to the end, you feel more and more tired of aesthetics. Although the theme is the male protagonist's illness, the protagonist does not lack a little bit of his usual emotional value in the end, right? So it doesn't matter if you occasionally write about the serious mode on weekdays, right? For example, acting independently is called a disease only if you do it occasionally. Later, you didn't see your normal appearance a few times, and it felt like you were exerting too much force. The next part is the songs. The author's song list is really too niche. It's not that I can't listen to it, but it feels more like it was picked out to separate it from other entertainment playlists. It can only be said that it is a pity to abandon so many classic songs in order to distinguish it. Finally, the emotional aspect. Although I feel very tired watching it, it's good that you are happy. Occasionally abstraction is the remedy, being sick all day long is just torture. Finally, there are some female supporting characters. To be honest, removing those colorful descriptions is more conducive to reading. I don't know why I want to add those metaphors. I just think it is awkward. I also like the color, but it doesn't feel that way if it is forced into it That's it.

Seeing a picture, I feel that this is definitely something Xu Ye might do. He should be detained by the traffic police

Xu Ye's entertainment industry is booming, and he is happily traveling through parallel worlds. The entire entertainment system is turned on, and lottery points are available at your fingertips. Xu Ye has a unique style in the entertainment industry, and Mudslide has created a new style. Play your cards without following the rules and make the entertainment industry lively! [Recommendation]: The protagonist traveled to a parallel world and became a trainee preparing to debut in a talent show. One day when he was practicing, he was bound to a live-action system. By relying on the live-action to gain points and draw prizes, Mr. Wenzhao rose to the top of the entertainment industry. The various social tasks and scenes are hilarious, and the close-ups of others make it even more social and make people tap their toes to the ground. ————Dividing Line———— Book title: "This Star is Legal but Sick" Author: Pluto Talker (Lv.1) Type: Urban Entertainment, Time Travel, Relaxation, System Flow Status: 100,000 words (serialized) ————Dividing line———— [Points to watch]: ★Fake survival system and real disease system Assign various social tasks to the protagonist and require the protagonist to complete them, but in the eyes of others, the protagonist's behavior is no different from that of a disease. ★Different versions of the same work For example, in the first lottery in the early stage, the song "Love You 105°" was given to the protagonist, but it was Mr. Tengger's version. ★The content of memes is extremely large and dense At the beginning, the memes are hot and the faces are highlighted, with the personal introductions of Kun Kun and Wang Ziyi, and the follow-up "Brother Thumb". The introduction also plays with popular memes such as "Who understands my family" and "My brother". {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}

Beautiful, so beautiful! Thanks to the previous comments for keeping me going. This system may seem a bit awkward in the early stages, but it is actually a setting that makes the subsequent plot more reasonable. There is almost no sense of presence later on, and it does not affect the plot experience at all. The author does a good job writing and the quality has remained stable. At least I have fully ordered it now and there is no problem that the plot is too homogeneous to watch, and the pacing is also very good. Moreover, this work itself tends to be light-hearted and the connection between each plot is not very strong. If you don't want to see it, it doesn't matter if you skip it. The most important thing is that I feel that my mind is really aligned with the dean's, and I can't help but want to keep watching. Overall, there is no doubt that it is a good work, but the early stage of the work is a bit long, but it will soon start to race all the way on the road of sand sculpture.

Since this parallel world is very different from the literary and artistic works in the previous world, can the protagonist and his fellow celebrities like Wang Baoqiang in this world, who are basically unable to collapse, engage in a series of comedies between Star Lord and the golden supporting actor Ng Man-tat? It is also quite age-appropriate, after all, there are a lot of tricks in it.

"This Celebrity Is Legal But Is Sick" is a systematic urban article. After awakening [Revitalizing Entertainment System], the time traveler Xu Ye has the capital to become famous in the parallel world. The author uses humorous language to show readers a completely different entertainment industry. The reading experience is light-hearted and often makes you laugh out loud. Writer's Experience The speaker of Pluto is currently a Level 1 writer of China Literature Group. He started his writing career at Qidian less than a year ago and currently has accumulated over one million code words. Brief Description of the Work Xu Ye traveled to a parallel world, and with the help of the Golden Finger Entertainment System, he stood out from the program "Tomorrow's Superstars" and then made a name for himself in the entertainment industry. World Background This is a parallel universe with the same level of technology as Earth and similar to modern society. Blue Star, Huaxia, Anseong TV rehearsal room, this is where our story begins. Character Analysis The protagonist Xu Ye is very handsome, with clear lines on his face and a pair of deep eyes. The only problem is that I seem to have some serious mental illness. He often does unexpected and strange actions, euphemistically called: Troubleshooting! There is a reason for the system mission, but looking at the way Xu Ye enjoys it, we can reasonably doubt the mental health of the protagonist before time travel. Writing Characteristics The humorous writing style is a highlight of this article. Many ridiculous tasks play a role in promoting the funny plot. Similar Recommendations "Rebirth in 1981 Starts with Pig Killing" "China Entertainment's Success" "City Becomes a Principal from College" "Deyun's Salted Fish China Entertainment" The superstar god of the game circle" {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}

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It is recommended that when writing the protagonist, you should not be too influenced by other people. For example, you can write a song specifically for a certain person's remarks. You can write it, but not too much, that is, don't be too blunt. Always remember that the protagonist is a mental character, not a serious person.

This book can still be read without thinking, but there are too many songs about Second-hand Rose. It is understandable that the author wants to highlight a mental illness, but a few such rubbish songs from time to time will definitely lose fans, especially on a big platform like Shaking Hands, how can it accept such vulgar noises as monkey tricks?

People can live without living, but they cannot live without living. Come on, author!

I feel that the song "My Motherland" during the National Day is much better than the song "Lone Warrior". Putting aside all the buffs, the song "Lone Warrior" is not good at all. That is the most basic problem. It is not good enough. I don't know whether it is a problem with the lyrics or the music, or the two do not match well. Anyway, it does not sound good to the ear.

This book is not good at all, it's very embarrassing. I've read a novel in which the main character is a psychopath, so it's not of the same genre, but the whole thing wasn't embarrassing. In that book, the protagonist went to live with the heroine at her house and found her living alone. Then he called the teacher and the heroine's mother. He first pretended to be a perverted stalker to attract her mother, and then introduced a mature and steady boy in front of her mother and asked her to agree to live with the heroine. Before leaving, he said in front of her mother in the voice of a perverted stalker, "Auntie, am I good?"

When I see entertainment articles, I can't help but think of how big a star I am, so incomparable that I can't stand any comparison.

After reading this book, I suddenly thought of what if the protagonist was tricked by his agent! He said he was mentally ill and was afraid that he would be sent to a mental hospital for forced treatment. Since the agent was his client, could he embezzle the protagonist's property? Because the main character seems to be crazy!

After chasing it all in one go, the whole thing is actually a bit awkward at the beginning, and it really seems that the male protagonist is crazy. It gets better in the middle, and gets better as you go to the back. The heroine is also pretty good.

Why. I don't want to read it! The author has really lost face in the plot in recent months. TV series plots and movie plots are described in detail. Does the author think we haven't seen it? The lyrics are also copied in large sections. I can understand it sometimes! The author has basically gone through all the lyrics of the songs he has ever written, some more than once. If you don't want to write anymore, just finish it! Author, have you yourself read the plot in recent months? The purpose of reading this book is to see how the protagonist gets sick. The result is that the more I write, the more I write! The author now feels like it's just bad money. But I don't want to buy it anymore. Gone!

The protagonist is completely insane

After reading the introduction, you will know that you can't read it with your brain. The author uses TikTok too much! Treat Douyin jokes as reality! 🤓

There is no need to always choose second-hand music to make a living. To be honest, it is considered a niche. Only the so-called experts will think it is explosive. There are not many people who listen to it. If you are not outside the circle, it just doesn't sound good. Don't talk about other things that are not there.

Let me tell you, the book is good, the author's taste is really bad, and he is good at handling things, but no one really thinks that little life tips are funny. It feels like it was just written to make up the plot, including inserting a batch of milk tea upside down and getting out of the car in the trunk. It feels like the kind of thing where staring at people in the elevator is the kind of thing. It's relatively normal. The plot is so embarrassing that I could think of three bedrooms and five living rooms with my toes. But for some people, this is just fairy grass. I personally feel that it's half-grain. It's not the kind of book that can't be thrown away. I would give it a 4 out of 5 points regardless of myself. For some people, it's not an exaggeration to give it a 5. Zhang, I'd give it a 2 and a half points regardless of myself. I can look forward to the author's next book. I hope my taste can be improved. It's time to work hard and be serious. It's all boring. I haven't read the paid version yet. I guess it's missing some poisonous points. I'll polish it first. This book is still recommended. It's worth it. It depends on your personal taste. I'm looking forward to the author's next book. It's best for entertainment industry figures to be original, and then add some personal stuff. If I can't think of a representative work, I will apply some suitable and personal suggestions from reality. The author will give me a kick when I start a new book.

Nowadays novels are like the Spring Festival Gala. In the past, novels created jokes to create fun, but now novels incorporate some popular memes into novels and treat you as fun.

If you are not crazy enough, you will be embarrassed; if you are crazy too deliberately, you will be indifferent.

I always feel that the author is not writing a novel, but wants to popularize or show off his own aesthetic preferences. It has a look at how interesting and advanced it is, and then directly transplants the relatively private performance effect of a real concert to the show stage. The audience in the snow distance video was also very enthusiastic. Will there be people cheering for it on the show?

How is this book going? The whole job was pretty good, very interesting. I turned on the computer specially and listened to music and read novels. It was quite fun. But then I jumped into animation and novels, and all of a sudden I got into trouble. Isn't this too big a leap for you? To be honest, this is a common problem with many entertainment books. They jump too early, and the people who do it are not prepared at all, and the whole book is directly divided. It feels like it has no core. East is a hammer, west is a hammer, the whole life is gone. In the past, the audience who mainly came to watch songs, movies, and the entertainment industry also found the article uninteresting. It can be said that a high-quality book will directly become ordinary, and may even turn into poison later. You have to figure out what your core is. Even if you want to cross other lines later, you must first take the main body as the core, write it first and then consider extending it. You just go on like this, hard and broad? I'm just watching you give me oral poison? Hey, I just got to Chapter 120 or so, and then I felt like I couldn't get into the plot anymore. Let's take a look at the follow-up development! Anyway, it was a very happy work before 120. It was really good. It told the truth, the legend of Nezha, and the part where the ghost blows out the lantern. I really couldn't bear it. Later, it felt tasteless. Maybe it's because I've grown a brain. 🙂 The author should make adjustments, otherwise I feel that your book will collapse later.

Xu Nanjia

The author's rhythm is very comfortable to follow, and it is refreshing and not too procrastinating. In addition, entertainment must have the same taste to be good. It happens that the things the author likes are very similar to mine. Basically, he chooses classic songs, classic film and television works, and classic animations. Recently, he has started to write sketches, which are also the memories of a generation. Even if they are not classics, they are still masterpieces recognized by most people, such as That Rabbit and Cyclonus. I hope the author will continue to maintain this style of topic selection. Many entertainment articles are bad because the author believes too much in his own niche taste. Also, the emotional line of this book is quite cute. The female protagonist is the kind of cute character who joins in when the male protagonist goes crazy. The female protagonist's best friend is also very cute. Although it is still difficult to get rid of some common problems of male authors writing female characters, among the many Qidian works I have read, she is the one who is better at writing emotional dramas. The existence of the heroine should be for the development of the plot, because many songs are not suitable for men to sing, so adding the heroine and the girl group will make many things easier. The whole story is very relaxed. Even if there is a slap-in-the-face scene, the male protagonist will not let readers feel aggrieved when he takes revenge on the spot. The villains are basically funny and fun. The villains are described in a moderate way, and they are given a clown image, which will not arouse the readers' anger, but become a part of the comedy. I have to complain about this. I have read a lot of cultural and entertainment articles, and they all arranged inexplicable and aggrieved past relationships for the protagonists. Most of them are that the protagonist used to be a licker and then wanted to slap his ex-girlfriend in the face. To be honest, that kind of plot design is very tiring to watch, and it also makes people feel that the overall structure is very small. This book's portrayal of the protagonist who is "psychotic but law-abiding and patriotic" is very good. On the one hand, it is funny and relaxing, and on the other hand, it seems to be very valuable. Moreover, the fact that "the celebrity is law-abiding and patriotic" is very funny and funny, especially with various clown-type villains as a foil, combined with the villains that everyone knows, it will be very interesting. And I feel that this kind of book that uses comedy to weaken the aggressiveness and does not deliberately provoke readers' emotions is very suitable for a tired social animal like me. Every day I browse the web and videos, all of which are highly emotional content that wants to squeeze people's anger. Coming here is like walking into a lively river. Long live happiness!

It's funny, but it's so brainless. I once gave up on the book and read it in a hurry.

I think the author's strongest point is that the choreography becomes more and more natural. By the later stage, the protagonist's choreography has become very smooth and natural, and looks relaxed and happy. Especially when doing the chores at the heroine's house, the size is quite right, and on the stage, she can also perform the chores seriously in serious situations. But there are still a few issues that have to be said. 1. The show-off plot tends to be rigid. The protagonist takes action, but everyone is disdainful and slaps him in the face. Although this method works well. But I feel a little sick to my stomach after reading too much. I suggest the author read so-and-so's book to improve it. 2. You, the author, have started to be lazy. Not only is there less description of the protagonist's psychology, but also the description of the environment. For example, if you look back at the first chapter, the protagonist just enters the elevator and starts to live, and you write about everyone's reaction, the protagonist's heart speeds up, the protagonist's psychological activities, the protagonist's movements and eyes, and the environment. But as the plot progresses, these are gone. It's a bit like expanding the outline by a few sentences to catch up with the plot. Although it is readable, it is not that good. This is a common problem in long-form serials, and it is also the watershed between ordinary and great.

Dear authors and fellow patients, this audio version is online in West Malaysia, and it should be available at the starting point in a few days. Patients can go and take a look👀 and relive the early and tender Huohuaba~❤️

It's been two months, right? The donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this.