Undercover Demon Sect? Good Birds Choose Trees to Roost In

This,,, the 8-year golden elixir is too childish. If it's nonsensical, it's okay if it's a comedy. In addition, after all, I have cultivated to the golden elixir, but I am still a puppet on strings. Is it just a matter of dispersing my kung fu?

The ideas are good and the plot flows smoothly. 😍😍😍

There are too many unreasonable features, perhaps because it is the author's first book! How to say it? If I kill a woman in my first life, I will never fall in love with her under any circumstances in my second life. There is something inherently wrong with this tone. Female channels will find it very romantic, while male channels will find it very reasonable. But no one has ever considered what a weird setting it is to sleep with someone you have killed.

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There is also the practice efficiency, the commonly used practice realms such as the Golden Pill Yuanying and the like do not match this book, and there are some dramas. Because most readers have read other immortality novels (after all, novels such as Misty Journey and Mortal Cultivation of Immortality are too famous), they have a certain degree of recognition of these cultivation realms. You have been cultivating the golden elixir for 8 years, and it will be an eyesore no matter how you look at it (no matter how you explain this point, and add a few more physical exercises or exercises, there will be something weird). It is recommended that you change your cultivation level. If you create a Martial Lord, no one will be able to act like a Martial King.

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Is this the end of the book? So irresponsible