The Interstellar Boss Dressed as a Poor Boy from the 90S

The book looks great overall, but there are two places that need to be changed. I haven't read much now, but there are two places that need to be changed. First of all, high school students don't understand that much about the wine tasting section. In fact, you have to write a transition, and it's difficult to write too much. Red wine was only introduced during that period. Secondly, don't let the following one go to waste. I wrote very well at the beginning before I went to get lunch after school. Why can't you change your temper now? You can also write that you can't eat it with a smile and let me pack it, and then you can eat the rest and give it to the kittens and puppies. As for saying it with a cold face, you are just a high school student pretending to be a boss, and you don't respect others in that way. The man named Jiang was originally suspicious of you, but you were afraid that they wouldn't investigate you. I hope the author will be more cautious when writing novels.

The female lead taught her classmates that if they were in a relationship with a man, they should not accept anything from him unless they were getting married. However, after the female lead taught her, she accepted all kinds of things bought by the old man. Later, when she found out about the break-in, the old man asked him to go to his house. Then he said that the house was bought for the heroine. The heroine resisted for a while and accepted it. Oh my God, if you hadn't taught your classmates, I would have read it without thinking. Now I am really speechless. There are too many things in this book that ruined my outlook on life, so I still withdrew it.

Because it's a free entry, I've read about 100 pictures, and I'm a little bit annoyed. If there is a CP, I think the author forced the 30-year-old named Jiang to be the male protagonist. The female protagonist was probably under 18 at the time. She was still in the third year of high school, malnourished, and not yet developed. She was a female. When the protagonist traveled back in time, the male protagonist fell ill on the mountain, and he saw it, so I won't spoil this. Later, when the man named Jiang got sick, the heroine used her mental power to help him sort out his headache. Later, when Jiang was reminded, he began to treat the heroine a little differently. At first, it was out of suspicion. , And later forcibly intervened in the heroine's life, using small favors to force the heroine to accept (buy breakfast, eat various snacks), if this man named Jiang was the male protagonist, it would be really disgusting. My writing is limited, so I can't express it, but the comments left by readers are very fond of this man. He often hates it. The heroine calls him uncle. He forcefully forces the heroine to accept his small favors when she is taking the college entrance examination. The heroine refuses even if she refuses. This kind of behavior that ignores other people's wishes and has no sense of boundaries is really disgusting. He also opens a room for the heroine in a hotel and helps the heroine find a room. The heroine of the courtyard house has no money to buy, so I introduced her to a building. After reading novels for so many years, I think the description of this man is the most stingy. I may have read too many novels. Many male protagonists in novels are extremely wealthy. Such stingy male protagonists are really rare. The name Jiang There are a lot of properties. If he is the male protagonist, he does not have the previous routine of selling one of his houses to the female protagonist at a low price. The main reason is that this man has begun to position himself as an uncle, and he is too old, so readers are dissatisfied with this surnamed Jiang. Some readers above said, This male protagonist is stingy and clingy. It is true. There are many times when the male protagonist buys 1.0 Food and forcefully feeds it to the female protagonist. It's not like the female protagonist has no money. She refuses as if she doesn't understand. It feels like a forced intervention, so it's quite unpleasant to watch. To be honest, If there was a boy who was more than ten years younger than me, it would be absolutely impossible for me to have any feelings for him. The heroine used genetic fluid, and when the boy saw that the heroine became more and more beautiful, his possessiveness would become stronger and stronger. He also interfered with the heroine's friends, saying that he would get involved in other people's disputes. So have you ever thought about your affairs? It's not the same as being involved in the disputes over your place. I don't feel happy for the time being. The cheating is too big. I am already very poor. My grandmother just died. I can't even eat enough. So I taste red wine in front of Jiang. I can't stand the investigation. Without the halo of the heroine, I really can't live for three days. And this computer repairer is so awesome. In the 90s, the heroine had never touched a computer and was just a super hacker. I can't complain.

It still looks pretty good now, I hope there is no cp

A script like this with a female protagonist really doesn't need a male protagonist, and having one would be useless. Focusing on your career is the right way to go.

This guy named Jiang is no good, he's clingy and stingy