Douluo: Transformed into a Young Dragon and Was Taken Home by Qian Renxue

The first few dozen chapters were pretty good, but once the protagonist turned into a human, I lost the patience to read them. The various characters in it have improved too quickly. It can be slower.

Half Zhang retreated ①, Qian Renxue should have been an undercover agent in the Tiandou Empire at the age of nine, but you are still here at the age of 12! ② Qian Renxue is 12 years old, and her soul power is level 32. How funny is that? He was born at level 20, and he also absorbed a 99999-year-old head soul bone. As a result, in the early stages of training, he only improved to level 2 every year, right? It also includes three soul rings and at least level five soul power brought by a high-end soul bone. Take Zhu Zhuqing, who is the least talented among the Shrek Seven Monsters, for example. He was born at level 7 and was at level 27 when he signed up. In six years, he improved by more than three levels every year. Do you mean that Qian Renxue's cultivation speed brought by his innate level 20 talent cannot compare to Zhu Zhuqing's level 7 innate talent? Even if it is the original work, when someone goes to lurk at the age of nine, let us calculate based on the lowest standard. An innate talent of level 20 will be improved by at least four levels every year. Awakening level 20 at the age of six + level 12 in three years + level 3 brought by three soul rings + at least level 2 brought by the soul bone in ninety-nine thousand nine hundred and ninety-nine years, 20 + 12 + 3 + 2 = 37, so everyone is at least level 37 when they are nine years old. Don't say that the original work has many loopholes. When you write a fan novel, you should check for the loopholes and fill them in, so that everyone will feel that it is the way it should be, instead of being defeated immediately after reading a few sentences. . . . . . It is recommended that the author change this level.

I am also drunk when I write this. Why doesn't a person from Wuhun Academy dare to go to the worship hall to go to heaven?

The writing is a bit childish (; 1_1)

It's really disgusting, extremely disgusting

Looking at the replies from readers in the comment area, I didn't even dare to read them. I just ran away. So many people said they were not good-looking and toxic. One or two were probably accidental, but a bunch of them were problematic.

I don't understand what the author is thinking? Want to help Shrek

A very rubbish novel. Only elementary school students like to watch it.

I think overall it's pretty good, except that Qian Renxue could have more scenes in the later stages and Gu Yuena could have less of them, and the explanation at the end is not very clear.

The plot is a bit rubbish at the end (personal feeling). You can think about the plot in advance and clarify your ideas before writing. Secondly, there are a lot of typos. Because I was listening and reading at the same time, it felt obvious. I hope that the author can read the manuscript once or twice to check it by himself after writing the manuscript (he will also be more serious when writing other books in the future).

The first thing to do when reading a novel is to uninstall your brain

It's Douluo's Second Creation, and the system is indeed a system. As for the passion... There is a little bit of passion "on top", but the IQ is online, definitely not, but the IQ is online and hung up. Don't be too smart, otherwise you will feel stupid, why are you watching.

There are also people who have adapted, adapted and adapted the important things three times. Do you think the adapted things can be the same as those in the original text? Then there are some people out there who are insulting this book and saying something bad, so don't read it!

What a bunch of nonsense written in a mess

The more I read, the more something is wrong. The male protagonist only likes to penetrate girls and smell them. The author who wrote this book is designated as LSP. He does not have such thoughts and cannot write such content.

This kind of thing can also be on the completion ranking list. How good is this ranking list?

The further you get to the back, the more water you get. I'm really speechless.