Just Treat It as the Wind Comes

February 15th Today is a memorable day I finally have a fan to achieve a qualitative change from 0 to 1 Thank you Qianqian (her unique nickname) for this lovely fan Love you~

Hello everyone who is reading this book This is Wutong's first work Thank you for your support to Wutong (๑>؂<๑) "Just When the Wind Comes" I plan to write it as a short story, no more than 40,000 words at most, so it is convenient for everyone to read. What I would also like to thank here is my dear, thank you for your support to me (//∇//) Manually compare your feelings to everyone (*˘˘*).｡.:*♡

The wind will take away all the memories, and there will be only melancholy after they are broken. Youth will not be stolen by time, but forgotten by the soul.

Why is Wutongda updated so slowly? The number of words is still small, which is not enough to read. I will give you the votes to update quickly.

How to say it? For a first book, it is very good. There are almost no problems that many newcomers have, such as sentence breaking, paragraphing, and chapter cutting (this is very good). The other is the writing style. Most girls are good at these delicate inner and emotional descriptions. This is an advantage, and small details are handled very well. The overall writing style feels a bit green (originally this is not a strength), but when paired with this type of story, it is extremely suitable, which is actually a plus. As for the final plot, first of all, some scenes will be quite bad. How can I say that everyone writes it like this (admittedly, it is because it is a classic enough that it is so popular, but I personally feel that the newcomer's imagination is more important than the writing style), and then it is better to add more emphasis. It would be better if the main and supporting characters have a stronger priority (personal suggestion.) In general, as a newcomer's first book, it can be given 90 points (at least 5 points will be deducted for typos). As a romance novel, the beginning can be given 80 points. In the eyes of an online bookworm, it can only be given 50 points (the length is too short, not exciting enough, etc.), But in the eyes of a romance bookworm, it can be given 70 points. Well, to sum up, come on! The future is promising!

Obviously their two names already tell us the ending...

What should I do, what should I do, what should I do? Wu Tong wants to be lazy tomorrow Please forgive her, wuwuwu Her small body cannot withstand beatings Be gentle (╥ω╥`)

I was originally stuck and thought not to write today, but suddenly inspiration came and I wrote it immediately. Did you have any doubts about Xia Lu when you were a child? Anyway, there are phoenix trees.

Hahaha Everyone realized that there was no exactly 7,000 words Wu Tong didn't expect it to be so good Hahahaha

Boss, I love you. Please update quickly. I love you. I love you.

The last and the last!!!! Thank you again, Roubao!!! This is the only time If you want to vote, please don't vote too much Because if you vote again, more updates will be added to the end Please, please Wutong doesn't want to be a novice writer who adds updates to the whole network and writes about sudden death (╥ω╥`)

I've already voted. Good luck. Where did you get this cover? Did you upload it yourself using your computer?

Ask me to write a book review. I have also read the book reviews of Baozi Daozi. There are too many friends asking for reviews. I still have my own articles to write. I could only watch the plot in one go, without having time to read it in detail. (There are still five or six books waiting to be read) Generally speaking, the opinions are the same. Because it is a warm, delicate and beautiful little lucky writing, it is inevitable that there is insufficient conflict and some attractive hooks. But let me ask, who didn't have someone hidden in their heart when they were young that they wanted to be with regardless of their own safety? After first meeting, the story begins with appearance, talent, and finally character, which are all described in detail. The author has a sweet but not greasy girl's heart. Very good. I won't go into the repeated comments, but will add a few others. 1. When the male and female protagonists meet for the first time, the female protagonist thinks he is too good-looking, but there is no positive description of the male protagonist's appearance. It is not until he returns to the classroom that there is further profile description, which weakens the sense of substitution and surprise. It is recommended to make fine adjustments. 2. I noticed that the author deliberately described the throbbing of the heroine when she saw the hero from various angles. This is very good and very delicate, but compared with the heroine's small thoughts and expressions, including psychological activities, reactions, and psychological activities under the feedback of the hero, there are less. Female readers of the same age or younger who can take on the role of the heroine will feel sour, sweet, timid and shy. But an old aunt like me may sometimes want to see more details about the male protagonist pampering the female protagonist, or the details (preference) that he treats her differently from others. I suggest you polish the male protagonist's expressions, movements and demeanor. Enhance interaction. 3. In general romance novels, in addition to the interaction between the male and female protagonists, the female best friend assists. Some necessary villains or other peripheral characters are also essential. But considering the tone of this article, if there is any kind of violence or a vicious female lead, it would defeat the original intention of the creation. It's just that without the support of other characters, you can't feel how the male and female protagonists get along in an environment where other people are present. As a youth campus novel, the reality has declined. It feels like the two of them are secretly in love in a mysterious grid, and others are living campus or studying in another grid. (I don't know if I made it clear or not) It is recommended to add some details of school life to enhance the sense of reality. I just came back from another friend. Although her writing about throbbing is not as delicate and sweet as yours, the texture of the campus is still quite good. You two can learn from each other. Having said that, I am not a professional, and I am not that good at romance, so I just rushed the comments. If there is anything inappropriate, don't take it personally. Come on!

The separation will not be permanent, everything lost will come back in another way

Come on, author~ support from the front row (*/ω＼*)

Little Wutong, open a new book quickly, alas, that's not right, read more books (you know which ones), hahaha

Come on, Fengfeng baby＾0＾~

Is it love, love, love, love that I have given up on love? Happy, cruel, perfunctory but lifelike kiss Our ending is so unbearable that we can't tell the difference between true and false love and hate.

One vote for support, come on Wutong.