I Trade Proficiency for Skills

When I read the second chapter, I kept wanting to complain, but I couldn't hold it back. Forgive me for reading the book at a glance, maybe I didn't read it carefully. First of all, the writing style is very stiff, which can be forgiven by a new author.        ，，，，，，，？ Is this really really really true? Faced with the irregular tide of beasts, don't the residents of Sunyin City need to improve their survival skills?

Chapter 2 It is true that poisonous ants still live an ignoble existence. Even if they live in a slum, they will not give up the chance to live. If they really wanted to die, they would have committed suicide long ago. Living in a slum does not mean that everyone wants to die.

How does it feel like the world of Monster Hunter. .

What can I say? The male protagonist feels like he has no goals and just follows the circumstances and hits wherever he goes.

Dear author, you assume that the first female partner you meet is in a special profession. Will she have a role in the future? It's a bit different.

I think it would be interesting to have a monster hunter travel into this world. You can also mix various hunting elements together.

It's tender + not exciting. As a game-type novel, at least it gives the protagonist a little bit of fun in killing enemies in the early stage. The feeling is just plain and then comes an invincible roll. It is neither restrained nor uplifting. The audience is also very bland towards the prostitute. They only think that the protagonist, the Virgin, is bland and tasteless.

What the hell? ? ? ? ? ? ?

It's so miserable for newbies. I'm trying to write it, but I haven't straightened it out yet, so I haven't posted it yet. After reading ten chapters, I did feel a bit like a stream of consciousness. I have the same problem. It jumps back and forth too much and the plot is incoherent. It feels like it doesn't matter whether the protagonist is there or not. 😥I don't know if it's because there are too few supporting characters or something else, I can't analyze it. Then there are invincible frames, and the protagonist should be very naughty, because it is the mentality of the game world, not a reasonable world.

Dry, too dry, no water at all

Very well written, keep it up.