Red Dead Redemption: Golden Empire

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I was persuaded to quit when I saw the name of the protagonist!

This game has so much stamina 😭😭😭. I passed the level a few days ago and I still haven't regained my composure. Thanks to the author! Although some plots in the previous chapters have flaws, the flaws are not concealed. The author is also working hard to update. I hope to see more and more exciting chapters in the future😍😍😍

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The scene where the gang breaks up is really stiff, and the pure protagonist's bastard spirit is overwhelming. It seems that the protagonist is strategizing, but in fact everyone is wise. A few points to mention: 1. Arthur and John took the protagonist to question Dutch in the tavern because the protagonist said that Dutch had hidden money. Not to mention that Arthur still trusts Dutch at this time. Your protagonist has only known Arthur for a long time. Why should Arthur trust your protagonist but not his boss? 2. Bring the protagonist to a face-to-face showdown. It is said that there is a problem within the gang, why do you need to bring you as an outsider to participate? From Arthur's perspective, bring an outsider to question the boss in front of the whole gang. If what the protagonist tells is a lie, what will Arthur do? The Arthur in me is not that stupid. 3. Shadi Valkyrie leaves. Dutch just saved your life, Sadie, and gave you food, shelter, and psychological counseling. But to add insult to injury, you patted your butt and left on the spot. You wanted to slap your savior in the face, right? And even if Dutch doesn't go to Tahiti, Dutch and the Odrix gang are sworn enemies. Sadie and Dutch have a common enemy. Why should they join you as the protagonist? 4. John's family. If I remember correctly, John had little contact with the protagonist before, and at best he was just a familiar face. But the protagonist's bastard temper was shaken, and John's family followed the protagonist. To be honest. John's family had just received a large amount of money, so they followed the stranger. They were still an unknown gang and were not afraid of being blamed. 5. Arthur leaves. I haven't read the rest of it, so I don't know how the author arranged Arthur, so I won't comment. I don't know what the author means by being so hurried🤷‍♂️. Scenes like gang breakup should be better arranged, with gang characters confronting each other, and emotional entanglements. Of course, if the author just gathers the gang members around him as tool men like stamp collectors, and then comes up with a passionate adventure story, I didn't say it, it's just the second Dutch.

The author's own surname is Song? Otherwise, I would not be able to understand why so many readers suggested changing the name of the protagonist in the early stage, so why did they insist on not changing it. This name probably won't be supported by many readers. It's not consistent with the name and it's not convenient for people to join the Party (white people in the West in the 1900s used Chinese names).

I like to read western cowboy novels, but I don't like to see so much romance. As a result, the heroine appeared in Chapter 26, and she was forced to do it. Wouldn't it be possible to write without a woman? Take an adventure and take a woman with you. A bounty hunter brings a woman with him. I don't mean to look down on women. A normal team would be great, no problem, but you lick one of them hard. It was really unpleasant to watch.

Just the name of the protagonist eliminated 80% of the people

You can kill about 20 bandits by yourself, and then let the sheriff block the door of a bar. How ridiculous is this logic? !

A Chinese name suddenly popped up in Western Cowboy, which is similar to the Chinese emperor's name Johnson.

Those who haven't played Big Cousin won't have any feelings for it. The author still needs to think more about how to tell a good story to people who have never played the game.

In fact, I was more interested in watching it at first, but when I saw the name of the protagonist, it really stuck in my mouth and I was unhappy. . . Which fairy tale novel has the protagonists named John Zhao and George Qian? It's okay to dissuade most of the readers with just one name, maybe there is some obsession. 😰😰😰

It would be great to go directly through the white people. Did Piggy understand when the Chinese were in the United States? Not to mention the Chinese Exclusion Act, what about basic common sense?

The slogans are so loud that it controls the West and goes global, but in the end, Cornwall and Pinkerton threaten to use it as thugs. I don't know why the protagonist is still involved with Dutch's gang of wanted criminals. The government building holds meetings like an angry clown. There is no shadow of the gangster godfather. I have been really disappointed in what I have watched recently.

1: It is best for the protagonist to be a white man. The combination of Chinese and contemporary background is too fragmented 2: I don't agree that the heroine is not a Valkyrie.

I vomited just looking at the name of the protagonist...

Everyday Arthur, or if Arthur really shows up. There is a high probability that it will be this image. Traveling around and working hard.

Start with a Chinese name

Starting from the first chapter, the author focuses on a poisonous person who refuses to listen to advice 😁

I saw more than 20 pictures. . . Feel like writing a report? It's not that fun anyway

How it looked in the beginning.

I clicked in many times, but I was put off by the name every time. Really, change the name. This is necessary work. If you want to attract readers, it will take a day at most. The longer you delay, the more trouble you will have.

This book should be scrapped. The author should insist on finishing it. Don't let the eunuch be unfinished. This is a loss of character. Conceive the next book carefully and focus on the poisonous points of this book. Don't do it again in the next book. There are very few gods in one book. Most of them are scraps. Don't be discouraged and work hard. Popular games may not be read by anyone in the novel world. Try Cyberpunk 2077. The two writers who wrote it are particularly good. The audience of this subject is more Red Dead Redemption is more extensive. As for the GTA fandom mentioned before, forget it. You can't joke about your grades. This one is really unpopular. Unless you are confident that you can write a great original story in the original game world view. I think your writing and originality are still good. The reason why this book is not popular is probably because it is relatively unpopular and has too many poisonous points. One name can persuade too many people. This is true for all new authors. It's okay. Come on.

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Either you have traveled through time and played the game, or you are a native. This way you are traveling through time and do not know the plot. It is really uncomfortable to watch.

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Regarding the poisonous points of this book, I don't think it is poisonous when it comes to the name of the protagonist, and I don't think it is a poisonous point in Chapter 22. The comments section is full of venom. Anyway, just read the comment section and you don't need to read the novel.

No, it would be fine if I skipped over a major poisonous point, but issues like the protagonist's name appear all the time in the article, and it's really hard to read.

Is the protagonist an individualist who works alone and alone? Or is it the protagonist who builds a force? Can anyone tell me Wouldn't it be nice to play games by myself instead of reading novels?