When Getting Married

I'm not a professional, so I can only briefly post it like this. Come on, Baozi, it's okay~

Although it is just an outline, there are still some problems and typos, but this is okay. Then there is the segmentation. If it is important, it is better to segment it separately. The description is also good, it has a lot of feeling, a delicate and soft feeling. All in all, other issues are minor and the writing is not bad, as long as it is written well.