Elf Sandstorm Lord

Not bad, the new concept and new battle system are eye-catching. Different from the traditional Pokémon online articles, for a Pokémon bookworm like me, it is really like honey. Although the writing style needs to be improved, it is still considered to be above average among peers. If I work hard, I can even surpass the seniors.

I have been reading this book for a long time, and for a while I felt that the author was too lazy. I didn't expect the author to persevere. Although updating every two days is indeed too little, I still want to encourage the author 😁😁😁

The following is just my personal opinion, the author can just pick out some useful ones for reference. The author can open a single chapter at the front to introduce the level system and the levels of heavenly materials and earthly treasures. In addition, the author should also explain how those energy gems are produced.                                                                                                                                                                        The author should work hard on shaping the characters now. The characters who appear now feel that they are not established. The biggest problem facing the game should be at the back. As the protagonist's status increases, the background will become more open. Whether it is war or political games, if the language is thin, it will look very boring. The author writes about territory development plus elf flow. Different from the traditional travel adventure flow and cultivation flow, territory development also has a lot of highlights and can be written more appropriately. However, if it is not handled well, it will appear as if the main player is pulling the development of the territory alone. Without the protagonist of the territory, it will soar into the sky, so the interaction between the territory and the protagonist and even other people under the protagonist is very important. What can others gain by contributing to the territory, and what can the territory provide to the protagonist, whether it is money, social status, or protection under the rules of order. The protagonist can now work hard to become stronger, and what will he do after becoming stronger? At the same time, goals must be established, otherwise it will be easy to write a matryoshka doll. In addition, the protagonist must have a certain degree of subjective initiative. His status in the early stage should be underground. He can be affected by the situation and grasp the situation in the later stage. Finally, the author should pay attention to the fact that if the writing is not handled well in the later stage, it is easy for the writing to collapse. In the end, if one person conquers the world, what's the point of claiming territory? If one person cannot defeat ten thousand armies, then the part about writing about elves will easily be compressed by the development part. This setting requires the author to come up with the ending himself.

The introduction is not bad, this type of elf theme is also quite novel, but the plot is really messed up. As soon as I pick up an elf at the beginning, I can't wait to arrange a cliched hero to save the beauty for the protagonist. The most important thing is that the protagonist is not smart enough to take action without considering the consequences? The other party had already made a killing move and made it clear that they wanted to take revenge. Why not just bury him and wait for him? It would be difficult to start the book like this without changing the portraits, but the subject matter is still worth learning from, which is a pity.

There are very few people writing about this worldview. It's quite attractive to me.

If you were reborn into the Pokémon world, what starting Pokémon would you most want? (Please exclude the major mythical beasts, it is logical, it is best to see them commonly)

In Chapter 5, the protagonist is originally a fruit tree farmer, but he somehow offends a fiefdom knight with a girl. The plot connection is really awkward.

The popularity of the elves that the author accepted is too low. I don't even look at the game in normal games. I came here for the Sandstorm team. As a result, there are not many powerful elves in the Sandstorm team. I am still thinking about the Dragon King Crab. If you want to write about the Dragon King Crab, why should you write about the Sandstorm Team?

The skin of Pokémon, the core of the beast, and the system of the Western Knights are a hodgepodge. Eat pineapple dumplings with ketchup with a knife and fork. People who don't know Pokémon may like it

A few chapters into the game, another female character appears 😅 who often follows her around.

At the beginning of the plot, the hero is asked to quit 😐 and the hero saves the beauty, right? It's too cliche.

Except for the Umbrella Electric Lizard, other evolutions of these elves are very good for farming

In order to contribute a little bit, come to Idiom Solitaire ————The Spirit of Dragon Horse

Everything else is fine, but when you catch the elves, just say "Since you have nowhere to go, come home with me." Then the elves will listen to you and help you fight, which is a bit outrageous. You have to confess your love to get recognition.

Sun Rock

It looks good, please update more, it will become popular

I only watched the beginning, but I have an indescribable feeling, and I can't say there's anything sinister about it, but I just don't have the patience to read on.

In the elf world, the pursuit of immortality can be done by transplanting elf hearts and other organs for experiments

I haven't read it yet, but I'd like to ask, who is Captain Sandstorm? Who are the Sandstorm Brothers?

Let's briefly summarize this book: Four Unlikenesses

What kind of spirits are there in pig's feet now? I read this book as soon as it came out, and I've been reading it until now after reading dozens of chapters.

Now that goblins are rampant, the Sandstorm team is in decline.

I originally wanted to post a fanfic, but the author did not create a character thread here, so I could only post a discussion. When the fanfic was written, it was updated to chapter 213, which is only for everyone to see Sandstorm Lord fanfic Anton Town. In the Lord's Mansion, Su Yan was making final preparations for the recruitment, when he saw Gu Hong coming to report to him. "Lord, my subordinates found someone fighting in Anxi above Yanxi Village. Judging from the movement, the strength is not weak!" Since the last incident in Yanxi Village where the Catfish King caused damage, Su Yan has increased the patrol scope of the territory, including Anxi above Yanxi Village. After all, Anxi is the main source of water for the fish ponds in Yanxi Village. "Oh?" Su Yan stopped what he was doing. As Gu Hong, who has three classified elves, is among the best in the territory. If he can be said to be not weak in strength, then it is necessary to investigate! It was obvious that there was not enough time to go to the Bird Valley in Fluorescence Village to find the Steel-Armored Crow, so he simply released the Sun Rock and quickly flew towards Anxi with the help of the Sun Rock's telepathy. At this time, a young man and two elves were standing in the turbulent Anxi River. One of them was covered with dark blue shells, and its curved shape was like layers of waves. There are burgundy patterns on the shell, and the same burgundy toes reveal a hint of majesty. It also has a fin-shaped figure-eight tail, but its innermost layer is dark blue. The armor on the front feet seems to be a huge sword, and it is swinging powerfully. It is the Great Sword Demon (Xicui form). The other elf's hair is beige, and his eyes look very determined. It has white patterns on its body, mainly concentrated on the head and above the chest. There are also white hairs hanging on the back of the head. It looks like it is wearing a white turban, and it looks like a bear standing on two legs. It is the Bear Apprentice, the initial form of the legendary Pokémon Martial Arts Bear Master. He and the young man were constantly pumping their fists and sparring with each other, but they seemed to be at a disadvantage. Su Yan quietly landed behind a reef with Sun Yan, and squinted his eyes to observe. Whether it was the Great Sword Demon or the Bear Disciple, their strength was at the peak of the rank. What was even more incredible was that the young man's fists that kept swinging turned into afterimages, putting the Bear Disciple at a disadvantage. "Speed, bring me up the speed, Abao, I know this is not your limit." The young man kept talking to stimulate the apprentice Xiong, "Where is the strength? Don't just speed up, use your strength." The young man turned slightly to avoid the punch of the apprentice bear, and quickly blocked another punch with his hand, and moved away slightly, feeling extremely relaxed and freehand. At the same time, he kept scolding the apprentice bear: "What about the rhythm? The combo flow is not random. Get pumped up and play your rhythm. It should be as continuous as the gurgling water, as continuous as the turbulent waves! " The young man's face suddenly changed, and he glanced at the reef where Su Yan was hiding not far away, and palmed his hand. With a fierce force, he punched out directly, and the straight-line movement exploded with a powerful momentum like an elite level. The apprentice Xiong was instantly knocked away from the river, fell to the bank, and slowly got up while rubbing his butt with a grin on his face. "Your Majesty, have you been observing here for a long time?" The young man turned to the reef. Upon hearing this, the Great Sword Demon quickly waved his forelimb like a giant sword, instantly breaking through the waves and appearing in front of the young man, staring closely at the reef like a guard. Hearing this, Su Yan didn't know that he had been exposed, so he calmly walked out from behind the reef. "Your Excellency is so skilled, even the apprentice Xiong is no match for you. I wonder if he is a stranger?" Sun Rock next to him followed closely, exuding an elite-level majestic aura. The young man's face couldn't help but change. He didn't expect that in this remote Qinchuan County, someone could actually know apprentice Xiong. However, when he observed carefully, he felt relieved. Because he was born with supernatural powers since he was a child, he had been training with a martial arts master Xiong who was at the peak of the overlord level very early. The results of his training The biggest gain is not the ability to control one's huge power, nor the perfect control of one-hit tactics, but the perception of human souls. Elves can keenly feel human emotions and feel the goodwill or malice brought by emotions. Among them, emotional Pokémon are the most important. Although he is not an emotional Pokémon, or even a Pokémon, after spending a long time with Pokémon, he can still sense it slightly through careful observation. At least he felt no malice in the man in front of him. It's not that Su Yan doesn't care about Apprentice Bear. He is a powerful helper after all. After evolving, he became the Legendary Pokémon Martial Arts Bear Master. However, first of all, Martial Arts Bear Master is not in line with the Sandstorm system, and he already has the future core of Sandstorm Bangira. Secondly, Apprentice Bear obviously has a deep bond with the young man in front of him. He is not the kind of character who will snatch other people's Pokémon, so he wants to win over the young man in front of him. Not to mention the future, the present alone is a powerful force. "What kind of alien is that? He is just born with some brute strength." The young man shook his head lonely, "Besides, I have already felt the limit. After all, the human body is no better than Pokémon." The young man looked at the bear apprentice again, "And his journey has just begun." The bear apprentice had also arrived at the young man's side. The young man fondly touched its head: "You have almost mastered the strength and speed now. The biggest problem is the rhythm. When will you be able to advance and retreat in a controlled manner and move freely, your combo style will be a beginner and you will be able to evolve into a martial arts bear master." The bear apprentice waved his fist excitedly, but his stomach growled unsatisfactorily. "Gu~gu~" Su Yan couldn't help but smile and said: "I am the lord nearby. Why don't you go to my territory to repair it? My territory happens to produce honey from three bees, honey from the giant needle bee, and honey from the plump honey dragon. Honey, Yo-Yo ball maltose, etc., I believe that apprentice Xiong will be very satisfied." The young man pondered for a moment and did not refuse. In addition to his confidence in his own strength, more importantly, there was an elite night demon in his shadow. The capable general who was once the overlord-level peak martial arts bear master. With the help of the martial arts bear master, he obtained the cloth of the spirit world, evolved into a night demon, and successfully broke through to the elite level. However, the martial arts bear master in his prime felt that he had reached a bottleneck and could not break through, so he entrusted the bear apprentice to himself to find and challenge the past. There was a sword fighter Terrakion whom they met once, and the Night Demon was ordered to protect the bear apprentice and himself. When the bear apprentice officially evolved into a martial arts master, that is when the Night Demon officially followed him. In addition, he really needed to rest, so he nodded and agreed

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Your random classification has caused many people to be unable to stand it.

Can't you figure out the names of Pokémon such as Bear Apprentice and Armored Warrior? Laoban can also say that childhood filters like to use old translations. Disciple Xiong can make mistakes. . .

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