Martial Action Begins with the Lin Family in Qingyang Town

If you don't practice the top-level world's first-life skills, but practice the rubbish skills of a small plane, then don't write about it at the beginning. The suppression of fan fiction is really disgusting, and sooner or later it will be too prison

You might as well delete the first chapter. It's completely unnecessary. You didn't get anything after going to the world of the Supreme Being. What's the point of writing this? Goldfinger doesn't understand. Isn't it just a time travel?

The co-author doesn't mention the good things given by Daode Tianzun at all? Compared to the plane spirit fetus, I feel that the skills given by Daode Tianzun are more powerful. It's a bit like picking up sesame seeds and losing the watermelon. The spiritual fetus can only help break through the Heavenly Supreme Being. I don't believe that the Heavenly Supreme Being is worse than this. The Heavenly Supreme Being is a person who wants to transcend.

This book is probably useless. It has 180,000 words and 100 chapters in 3 months. The plot is not outstanding. It is either a eunuch or just for entertainment. The author is not the material to eat this kind of food.

So what about the exercises and martial arts skills you got from the Supreme Being? Magic weapons and elixirs cannot be worn, but the protagonist should remember the exercises and martial arts he has seen, right? ? ? ? ? ? ?

Why do some people think that Emperor Dou is aiming for the Ancestral Realm? The original work is very clear. Fuzu wants the fetus of the plane to break through. Combined with the Great Master Mu Chen's breakthrough to Tianzhizun, Fuzu came to Tianxuan Continent because he wanted to break through Tianzhuang. Therefore, Lin Dong's breakthrough to the Martial Ancestor means that he has reached the realm of Heavenly Supreme. However, because Fuzu cultivates spiritual power and is stronger than the locals, Fuzu can reach the local ancestral realm with the cultivation of the Earth Supreme. Therefore, Lin Dong is equal to the realm of the Heavenly Supreme, but before he has cultivated spiritual power, he only has the perfect level of the Earth Supreme in the Great Thousand World. Let's take a look at Dou Po. Breaking through Dou Emperor is not that difficult at all. As long as you have the source power, you can break through. When there was source power in the past, there were still many Dou Emperors. Lin Dong was the only one in the Ancestral Realm continent (Fu Zu does not count, he only has combat power but no realm). Dou Emperor does not have this limitation. It is difficult to break through the Heavenly Supreme in the world. It is obvious that Dou Emperor is lower than the Ancestral Realm.

Regardless of the level of the author, I would call him a warrior. Wu Dong Qian Kun is obviously the second work after Dou Po's sequel to Dou Po, but the creation of subsequent fan derivative works is not even a bit worse than Dou Po. In terms of the starting point, the whole starting point I can't find a Wudong fanfic that I can read. Besides, the author's writing skills in this book are good. No matter how I write the Dou Po Douluo fanfic, Qiami is better than Wudong. The author seems to really like Wudong. I hope this book can be completed without interruption. Come on, author.

Why do fans who write potato novels like to have a relationship with the original protagonists? The protagonists in eight of the ten Dou Po novels all go to the Xiao family for time travel and rebirth, as if they can't write novels without being reborn into the Xiao family and don't have the surname Xiao. Wudong fans also all go to the Lin family for time travel and rebirth.

All martial arts fans have updated their crotch extensions. 😓

The treasure technique of Daodetianzun is not powerful enough for martial arts.

Lin Dong's character is not too bad, unlike the protagonist of Sanshui in the Tang family who makes people feel disgusted just looking at him, so there is really no need for the author to write other people's fan stories to try to force Lin Dong's opportunities. Why can't he create some opportunities for the protagonist that are not available in the original work? What's the difference between always relying on the original protagonist's opportunities and changing the original protagonist's skin? Let the author think about it.

The writing is good, but I want to know if Aya Qingzhu is the heroine. If not, I will hide it.

Brother author, although your writing is good, the pace is a bit slow. To be honest, although you didn't do much to suppress the protagonist, you obviously tied the protagonist to Lin Dong's side and moved around. There is no problem with the group, but you are still competing among the clan after 96 chapters. . . I remember I was only fourteen or fifteen years old when the Dongzi clan competed, and you are a fan, Dongzi is no longer the protagonist, and the opportunities are far inferior to the original work. Now Dongzi can't even see the threshold of the Earth Element Realm. . . The way you write it, I think you won't even see the heroine Aya Qingzhu before at least 1560 chapters. It's a fan-written original work. Besides, you are still Zhu Tianwen, brother, and you will go to the world later. It is really speeding up.

Received the signing information. Hmm.

Come on, author, but please write longer.

It's a pity that the investment has been used up this month 😒