Daluo Jinxian, I Don't Want to Work Hard Anymore

Is this protagonist mentally ill? Or a pervert?

After reading five chapters, I just want to say, where did you learn how to write dialogues? You're just pretending, and you don't even think about whether your writing can support it? Slipped away

This author writes so much rubbish, please don't read it😁

What the hell is the Nine Orifices Exquisite Tower? Whose tower has nine holes?

After reading a few chapters, the protagonist's character is not likeable. He is just reckless and completely lacks the emotions and sophistication of normal people!

Really good, good-looking, faster and faster

It can be seen that I tried my best, the plot is very creative, but I am a little anxious, and the writing is too immature.

This author has a very clear self-awareness.