Pindao's Game of Cultivating Immortals Has Come True

Damn, I wish I had read this book two years later. Too little.

Ever since the protagonist has cultivated some magic power, he has looked down upon this and that in the real world. He does not look like a cultivator in classical mythology at all, and he looks aloof.

The protagonist doesn't look like a cultivator at all. He is a profit-driven behavior from the beginning to the end. He has a birth behavior every time, exactly like Tang San. He calls me senior when needed, and when he has reached a higher level, he calls me Taoist. Blue Silver Winding asks you if you are afraid.

Damn, I'm so happy. I thought it was pretty good, but when I saw the chapter about the Meteorological Bureau, I didn't feel nervous. It turned out that I was so happy to see something in my professional direction being so imagined by others.

I read part of it and talk about my feelings First of all, from the content of the book, the author must have worked hard to understand it. I also gained a lot of knowledge in the process of reading and learned some knowledge about Taoism Secondly, I feel that the language of this book is not bad, but it is not good. The author may be a newbie, and his writing skills are not yet proficient. The characters of the main and supporting characters It is relatively simple, and there is still room for shaping Furthermore, I feel that some of the routines used by the author are relatively old. Maybe I can try to innovate. I might as well think about the outline and open my mind a little In general, this book is not bad. It can be considered above average among all the novels in Qidian. However, the author still does not have enough experience in writing books. He can take his time and write more books.

I'm ready to give up. The more I look at it, the worse it looks. It's too low quality.

How did such a novice article get so many comments?

I thought I looked ten years younger.

I haven't read the rest anymore. The real world is just a pig farm with pig feet, cutting off one crop after another.

This reality is so retro that the protagonist can take the initiative to help others instead of being a reporter clinging to the protagonist.

The protagonist asked the old man to eat ginseng fruit. This part is poisonous. I won't say anything else. As one of the ten spiritual roots, ginseng fruit contains the energy of chaos, which is very useful to the protagonist. The author just picks some ordinary spiritual fruits and they are better than ginseng fruits. He also helps the old man to become a human being. Farewell to the author. I won't read it later. Don't say what it is for. I will give various reasons. I don't really want to hear it, so let's leave it like that.

It's 2023 and there are still people writing this kind of routine. I'm speechless.

Author: Your Journey to the West is a low-end version, right?

Pig's feet are like a watch, and words are like a basket. Really? 😅

My evaluation is vulgar, many classic routines, a little bit poisonous

Resume: No brainless slap in the face plot! Aba Aba Aba Aba Aba Aba

Has the author ever written a female channel before? Why are there people everywhere who are surprised by the appearance of the protagonist?

In fact, writing this kind of novel in which I am the only one in the real world does not mean that people with other abilities cannot appear. But there is a premise, that is, these ability users are created by the protagonist, or taught by the protagonist. In other words, before there was a protagonist in this world, there was no extraordinary ability. Otherwise, in the later stages, there will be nothing to write about and nothing to watch. After all, in the later stage, the protagonist can directly withstand the atomic bomb, so who in the real world can show off? So in the later stage, the focus is not on the protagonist, but on the disciples that the protagonist takes, or the ability users who conduct experiments to verify the creation of something. When these people gained abilities, they went out into the world and brought the first real superpowers to the world. The highlight is the various collisions between these people and the ordinary world after they venture into the world. Then gradually change the whole world. ………… For example, because of the protagonist's time travel and rebirth, not only is his soul and spirit several times higher than that of a normal person, but he also has a photographic memory. Because of time travel and rebirth, the protagonist has a little more faith in things like gods and ghosts. Then the protagonist has developed inner energy and true energy for more than ten or twenty years through various experiments and research from childhood to adulthood, coupled with his own talent that is beyond the reach of ordinary people. Then he made great progress in research all the way. In his 30s, he broke through the innate and entered the golden elixir. Not only can he fly, but he can also reach three to five times the speed of sound. Even if he cannot withstand an atomic bomb head-on, he can still run away. At this point you can find some reasons. For example, the protagonist is not afraid of any country in a real sense. In a sense, the earth is invincible. Then suddenly on a whim, he accepted a few disciples. (Anyway, just find the reasonable reason yourself) However, the disciple's cultivation talent is slower than your abnormality. After a few years of practice, he will reach the peak of his inner strength. Your experience tells you that they must make a breakthrough in artistic conception before they can enter the next stage, so you prevent them from entering the world of mortal experience. Then you can write about how they accidentally revealed their kung fu during their training, and then their conflicts with the ordinary world society, etc.

Author, do you want the protagonist to become a murderer and go to jail in the real world? Or is it that the author wrote and forgot what he wrote? Are you sure that the 400-year-old spiritual ginseng provided by this land is suitable for sale in the real world? Aren't you afraid of poisoning people? At first I thought I was wrong, but I turned to the front again to make sure. Ordinary people can't eat this stuff. Doesn't the protagonist know?

What is the author's conscience for repeating chapters to defraud starting coins? This comment will definitely be deleted! But I'm so angry! ! !

Isn't it a coincidence that the mountain gate I opened in a mini-game of cultivating immortals is called Xuanqing

The Poliu Golden Eyes were worn out by training, and the smoke turned into "old and sick eyes", flaming eyes, like a weak chicken. Is it time for you to become a monkey? Kind of funny.

This novel is okay, not as bad as the reviews said. Anyway, I just threw away my monthly pass that was about to expire.

Hurry up, or the foreigner next door will think that we look down on books.

Five-star praise, worth recommending. Although it is a bit cliche, it does not rub the reader's IQ into the ground like other articles. This is worthy of recognition. It is not like some authors who write urban immortality articles and add a buff to the readers to make them stupid. Come on! Author

There is basically nothing to see after entering the universe, so finish it as soon as possible

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6Ah! I haven't found such a good book for a long time! Bookworm passing by! ! ! !

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