Hokage, the Rich People of the Village Force the Hidden Village of Sand

In fact, there is no need to whitewash Luo Sha. The protagonists are all time-travelers anyway. What does what Luo Sha does have to do with the protagonist 🤔

The main line of the novel was originally about getting stronger through cheats, but now he has gone to Konoha to be a fun man? There is no benefit, no getting stronger, and no enjoyment. What's the point of a cool article that deviates from the main line of a cool article?

Naruto fanfics, except for Konoha, are difficult to write about other ninja villages. The plots are basically original, and most of them have poor grades. I just don't know how long the author can keep writing.

You analyze two or three chapters in a row. Water is not like you. You analyze and write two or three chapters. Who will read it?

The biggest point of dissuasion in this book is to tamper with the timeline. Doesn't the author know that tampering with the timeline will 90% dissuade people from quitting? Because that poisonous point can make the reader uncomfortable until the whole book is finished! So many people will give up after reading it because they don't want to make themselves uncomfortable with a book.

Being dragged down by the local political struggle, he staged a Sagakure version of the Uchiha coup. He couldn't figure out why he didn't just kill the leader, and then bring the divisions together to break up and evolve peacefully, which not only preserved his strength but also achieved stability and transition.

After writing and writing, you went to the Hokage Village to cause trouble. You are the Kazekage! And you still have a plug-in. If you run to grab the Sharingan, you just don't have confidence that your plug-in power can surpass them. 😅😅😅

It's written in such damn ink, I won't follow it anymore

I subscribed to all the chapters when I saw them, and now I have 100 chapters. I just want to say can I get a refund? Cried

When Senju Hashirama said that I would kill anyone who dared to attack the village, even my close friends and relatives, and ended Uchiha Madara with a sword, we should all understand: that day, the first Hokage killed Senju Hashirama and Uchiha Madara.

I really can't bear to look at Gaara, I feel like a little girl

This one is like Tomato's book The Working Man in the Kingdom of the Wind. That book was very well written and I really enjoyed reading it.

In fact, after the three gods came out and helped to take back Shigulin, the plot of this book actually developed a bit strangely (I can't explain it a bit). The subsequent plot is probably the original work with a little originality. If you become the Six Paths and continue to stay in this world, the book will be almost finished 🙂

The combat power collapsed, it started to have no logic, and it became a completely brainless and cool article. There is obviously a lot of room for improvement in Ninja War, but... ... Sigh😮‍💨 What a pity

So you really don't consider accepting Mei Mei?

I regret booking all of them 😭

Something doesn't feel right when you write it later. Please change it.

It would be best to finish Naruto, but I chose to write about Pirates. I feel that the power system is not equal and the rhythm is about to collapse.

Gegen is still very young, at most 12 years older than Xiaoqiang, 1-2 years old

Why didn't you see 👄Naruto and just make a sneak attack and directly poke the bones and scatter the ashes?