Nibelungen Outside Konoha Village

When it comes to the issue of splitting up the Hyuga clan, I feel like you have to die if I want you to die? I control your life and death and say I am for your own good. Can you accept my control? In this case, even the dog is inferior, and the dog can still resist.

The creativity is good, but the characters in Naruto are a bit broken. It's not a problem with the second design. You can say that it borrowed the background of Naruto, but the original characters are not the original characters, and it would not be inconsistent if they were replaced by others.

Personally, I don't think it looks very good, but I can feel the author's writing and intention. It's not a pure white text to fool Quanqin, but it is difficult to satisfy the public's appetite 1. In the first chapter of law-abiding, the protagonist's character is rigid and sluggish, like a machine that can only fight back and lacks self-esteem. He clearly endures years of lonely lovesickness. The pain of abiding by future laws in an era that does not meet the requirements 2. Since the protagonist, the Dragon King, has to be a dragon king, except for the invulnerable body and the weak speech spirit that cannot suppress the young ninja, I don't see the abilities that a dragon king should have, and he is still trapped in the Nibelungen. It's better not to play this trick.

I felt like I was writing a lot of ink, but the plot basically didn't advance. I always wrote about some ideas, concepts, thoughts and the like. You can't simply say why you write about so many philosophical issues.

The introduction attracted me, but to be honest, the world background introduction at the beginning confused me. In a nutshell, the status of the ninja clan is too high. It can be said that he is a noble with real power. Naruto's world view is very distorted. The powerless noble name treats the powerful ninja like dogs. In their impression, ninjas are "the ones who do dirty work." As a result, in this book, the ninjas can even control the residents of a place and collect taxes. They are the management class under the daimyo. Aren't they just nobles with territory and real power? Why do we need to build a village in this kind of background? Isn't my land nice?

Here, I set a small goal and update it every day...

There is no such thing as a Dragon King. It is just a fantasy of a mentally broken man before his death.

Isn't the Nibelungen the land of the dead in Nordic mythology? It wasn't proposed by the Dragon Clan. You can write it as the Nibelungen among the Dragon Clan in your introduction. At first glance, I thought it was the Dragon Clan who proposed the concept of Nibelungen.

My thoughts on Hinata's caged bird system. My comment was deleted a few minutes after I posted it. I don't know if it's the author's problem or the platform's, because I didn't involve insults or other factors. If you are not allowed to express your opinion, what is the difference between it and self-pleasure? I personally do not support Hinata's caged bird. The main points are as follows. 1. Both sides of the conflict. The original conflict between the caged bird and the white-eyed hunter is written by the author. After the actual caged bird, there is the Zong family and the white-eyed hunter without the dragon bird. Later, the white-eyed hunter disappears, and the main body of the conflict moves internally. At this time, it is the clan family and the branch family. 2. Rights and status. Initially, Caged Bird was voluntarily shot to protect Byakugan. The clan is divided into cages and becomes a bird. Both parties have equal status, and the separation of families is a sign of self-sacrifice that outweighs the rewards. Later, the Zong family used the caged bird to force the separated families into cages, and it was natural. Moreover, the cages of the separated families were also electrified. If they didn't obey, they would be electrified. From this point on the caged bird begins to deteriorate. The status became that of the clan and became the master, and the clan was divided into slaves. 3. Development. Being a caged bird will cause the family to have obvious shortcomings and lose the possibility of evolution. Although it has white eyes, it lacks resources and has a high lower limit of strength. The Zong family, who is not good at fighting, has the most resources. How strong do you expect him to be? Therefore, the Zong family will limit the upper limit of the strength of the branch families to consolidate their dominant position. The branch family became cannon fodder, while the clan family enjoyed themselves and engaged in internal fighting. So my conclusion is: If you support caged birds, all caged birds will be included to achieve fairness. Or change the caged bird so he has the key. Caged birds are not supported, because caged birds are escaping from problems rather than solving them. The main reason why Byakugan hunters hunt Byakugan is that Hinata is not strong enough. As the saying goes, the truth is only within the range of a cannon. But if everyone reincarnates, this problem still exists. Besides, of the Otsutsuki clan, the Byakugan is the bloodline, and the Samsara Eye is the one that mutates by eating the fruit of the sacred tree.

The problem with the Hyuga family is that the caged bird has gone bad. It has changed from protecting the Byakugan to being a means of enslaving the clan and dividing the family. Moreover, what did the protagonist get after working for a long time? How many people are separated? The Zong family kills only one person in a thousand. It is better to go directly to the branch and trade directly on the grounds of releasing the caged bird.

I want to know which Dragon King it is?

There's no story, it's all setting. Dozens of chapters are not interesting at all.

I feel that the ones after they are released are not as good as the free ones. These chapters are a bit boring.

One planet and one world. Pirates, dragons, Naruto, Bleach, etc. Can be placed on different planets in the same universe. Is there anything written like this?

The introduction is interesting, I'll save it on the bookshelf first

Tobirama calls his eldest brother Hashirama and his sister-in-law Mito? How about the author be more serious?

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

Wouldn't the problem of caged birds be solved by just putting caged birds on them all?

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