Zongwu: Our Jianghu

The first five chapters are unclear. There are too many characters and too many conflicts. The characters cannot stand up.

It was frustrating to read. The most important thing about martial arts is the feeling. This book starts with a waste of blood and the description is just annoying. Mu Wanqing, who is so mean-spirited that he used his Luck Kung Fu to heal his wounds and whipped passers-by, and the protagonist who was seriously injured on the road, healed his wounds on the spot but was whipped back after being chased. The key to the plot is that Mu Wanqing was plotted by Mu Wan and then they fled together. The logic of this protagonist's behavior highlights that he deserves it. Moreover, the story background of the protagonist has always been hidden, and the main background has been made a secret, which is very strange.

How can I put it? Shennong, who is not very skilled, will not come.

I can't stand it anymore

After reading the introduction, I wanted to ask, is Zhuo Bufan worthy of being compared with Ximen Chuixue and Xie Xiaofeng? ? ? Is he worthy? ? ?

The writing is messy, the author must be a primary school student.

The whole thing was confusing. The main character has two personalities. I felt like the plot was broken.

Do you know what exactly you are writing about? You haven't even figured out the identity of the protagonist yet. If you write a ghost story, do you think the reader is a fool?

I suggest you read novels written before 17 years ago. It doesn't matter. At least you should learn to learn from them.

Everything else is fine. The main character's name is too dramatic. It's fine in a fantasy novel. But it's a bit confusing in a martial arts novel.

Surnamed Long. . . . . . , Speechless

Empress

Are you a time traveler? Do you know the plot? You may know it now and not know it the next time.

I always feel that the mixed martial arts world you write is so small, and you always use a few worlds. There are many martial arts novels and movies, but some of them are not so famous now. Nothing new!

How can the rivers and lakes forces defeat the court forces? The protagonist should be ingenious and send people to infiltrate the court and take charge of the court's troops. This way, the rivers and lakes forces will not be afraid of the protagonist. The protagonist can destroy which rivers and lakes forces he wants to destroy.

Come on, come on, it's pretty good-looking, don't be a eunuch

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