Doomsday Disconnected

Dear author, as a reader, here are a few small suggestions. There are so many settings in the first three chapters of the novel that it made me dizzy. For example, for game professions, except for the one chosen by the heroine, the others can be briefly mentioned by name. The plot is well written, but it is often interspersed with settings. There is no need to describe too much, just choose the important ones. The character design is okay. Nowadays everyone likes this kind of cool girl who is ruthless and doesn't talk much. If you don't want to sign a contract or get results, then you don't have to worry about anything. Just write whatever makes you happy. Really, power it for love!

A second creation will do, but it has to be in the same world as the original heroine, so no matter who steps on whoever, it won't look good.

In fact, I don't really hope that the heroine or the protagonist group will appear in Doomsday Online. After all, I have almost forgotten the original plot (dog head). And if you only draw on a background, you can play more freely. One more thing, the update of the original work is so slow, no one wants to drag down the second one, right? 😏

After reading Golden Chapter 3, tell me your thoughts. First of all, I rarely read fanfiction, so I was a little confused when reading the first three chapters. However, I have experienced a lot of system streams and unlimited streams, and I can roughly understand the direction of the plot and read on. Secondly, the first three chapters are basically an infinite flow routine. The protagonist fights monsters and upgrades the point panel. There is no conflict, no eye-catching settings, and it cannot arouse readers' interest. Moreover, there are a lot of settings in these three chapters, and the settings have no highlights and are very boring. The best way to deal with it is to write the plot in a cross-setting manner, step by step. Writing a book is not easy for newcomers, but they also need to continue to hone and improve, so work hard.

Author! You write doomsday online fanfics, and when you update, don't be like scumbag Zero! At least I can't ask for a day off! 😆

I'm so surprised that Doomsday Online is actually a fanfic

It's good to create a second creation. Why is he the second one with a thousand years old in the same world as the original protagonist?

Lin Xi-Predator Form

It is recommended that the author add a few more characters, so that they can post character pictures later and set them as highlights (◦˙▽˙◦)

Erchuang, I like it. It has been delayed online for a long time. It is obviously very popular but it is not updated.

If you want good grades, you must keep updating without procrastinating. Come on, hold on.

Everyone, it is really important for the author to catch up on the new book. Even if he fails to finish it, I hope he can read the latest chapter and complete this reading. Nowadays, new books are easy to read, so it shouldn't be difficult for book lovers to spend a penny to read them during the new book period. The main purpose of talking about this is to tell everyone how to support an author's dream. Some people may think that I am a bastard, but I am not, because I am just an ordinary reader in this discussion circle. Finally, no matter which book you read, I wish everyone a good reading experience (◦˙▽˙◦)

It was recommended by others. I heard from the author that it is very difficult to finish this book. I don't plan to read it. Also, there is a new magician in the profession and I am scared by Doomsday Online.

Well? Yueyue, why can't I see these thirty-six chapters? The latest is the Easter egg chapter.

6666, I never thought that I would actually have a second creation

I hope it won't be like Doomsday Online, it's just too uncomfortable Gee, I've changed my accounts several times🤣

Alas, it must be updated stably. (Afraid of being cheated)