An Arms Empire Built on Cutting-Edge Technology

Dude, let's just say, when I read the title, I thought you were going to write about an arms dealer. Although I didn't read much after I came in, I felt like you were writing about a mercenary, you know? If you really plan to write about an arms dealer, you have to understand that even if you are involved in arms, you are still a businessman at heart. You can be cold-blooded, bloodthirsty, and sell wars. You can sow discord, and even let your subordinates participate, but you should not go out in person. This is not a businessman's job. Red wine, beautiful women, and Hawaii are the standard ingredients of a truly big arms dealer. No matter how miserable it is, you will not go to the battlefield with a gun.

Is the author a masochist? It feels good to have the protagonist be tortured? Damn it, everyone wants to see how the protagonist kills everyone after getting the ring, not to see him being tortured! Can you write a book? Abandoned! I can't stand it!

This Goldfinger is so rubbish. He only started to officially become a mercenary after more than eighty chapters. The protagonist is also a bit of a virgin. He has become an arms dealer and a mercenary and is still such a virgin.

Remember not to write a protagonist who is too indecisive, be cold-blooded, don't engage in betrayal by his subordinates, and don't write a heroine. This kind of thing will basically not be cool.

I really can't help but say that the pace of the book is okay, but the main character is written to be mentally retarded. Shouldn't you research the ring first when you get the gold finger? Getting the gold shouldn't be to recharge the ring. Otherwise, why did you write it? It's just creating trouble just for the sake of writing it.

The beginning was so funny. Others were kidnapped and it was too late to hide. He actually wanted to move forward. Under the premise of having a golden finger, he claimed that the $50,000 was his and he didn't want to lose it.

The protagonist is not very strong and likes to wander around. Why don't you get up and figure out the system first? And now only gold has a role, what about other metals? If only gold is useful, then it will be difficult to grow. Dozens or hundreds of kilograms of gold are of little use, and gold mines are controlled by powerful people. Standardized gold is also controlled by big forces, unless the protagonist obtains a treasure on his own, which contains a large amount of gold for the protagonist to absorb.

Alas, after reading it for a while, I felt that it was neither a black technology nor an arms dealer. It was just a mercenary with some super powers. It felt aggrieved to go to the United States.

Let's change the name. How about mercenary war 😅? I want to write about black technology, but I don't dare to write about it. Isn't this just a mercenary with some special powers...

The main plot is okay, but there are a lot of poisonous points. I also got off topic, you know?