Martial Arts: a Man in the Desert, Learning from Seven Monsters

After reading the introduction, I wondered what the seven losers had learned. Guo Jing relied on himself to achieve the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms! How powerful are those seven losers? A second-rate guy like Qiu Chuji can defeat one against seven. There's still glory, why are you bragging?

I just want to say that if any modern person time travels to Guo Jing, then Guo Jing, a great hero, will be useless. Just like Yue Wumu, if he did not die unjustly, the history books would only pass him by with a few strokes at most. Don't you see Xin Qiji and Xin Jiaxuan? The Song Dynasty was like that. I don't think anyone with a little bit of shame would choose to travel through Baosong and Fusong. Every day, people brag about the richest dynasty in history, the dynasty with the highest war winning rate in history, and the best treatment of intellectuals in history. I can only say that meat eaters are despicable.

Generally, few people who travel through time travel become Guo Jing. The main reason is that the image he describes in the book is that of a human god in terms of character. It is possible to surpass him in other aspects, but no one will surpass him in terms of chivalrous character. The main characters in "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" are Guo Jing and Huang Rong. In addition, Huang Rong of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" lost more than half of her fans. So Guo Jing became the only protagonist. Who can write that Guo Jing can surpass Jin Yong? The author wrote that the person who traveled through time was Guo Jing, and his name was changed to Chen Zhao. It seems inexplicable, and the dog's tail continues. Can you write better than Jin Yong? Plus fans' episode memories. This makes this book very confusing. It's not that the author's writing is not good, it's mainly that Guo Jing really has nothing to travel through. What do you think he did wrong? At most, he has a stupid personality, but there is absolutely nothing wrong with him. What would you like to change in the time travel book? I'm afraid you'll make Guo Jing look less like a hero and more like a hooligan. So I think it's a bit thankless to travel through time and become Guo Jing.

In the introduction, Qiao Feng's talent is mentioned, the protagonist is called Chen Zhao, and in the book, it's Guo Jing

If you don't write about mixed martial arts, your book has the potential to become a god. It's a pity and I'm leaving.

The character chosen is not good. Guo Jing's character is already very good and successful. If you cross him, you will lower his lower limit... When you travel through a successfully created character, you will either be inferior to him, become him, or surpass him. Can I be the author of the latter two? It can only be worse than him.

It suddenly turned into mixed martial arts. I'm really speechless. Moreover, the protagonist is more adventurous than Guo Jing. His brain is a little better than that of Guo Jing in the early stage, but he is not as sincere as Guo Jing.

What kind of mixed martial arts is this? Mixed martial arts doesn't look good.

Why don't you review it? The author, sometimes Guo Jing and sometimes Zhaoer are too dramatic.

Harem? Or is it a master stream?

I have always had a question: How many people think that Hong Qigong cannot beat Qiao Feng? Why do some people always say that Hong Qigong was younger than Qiao Feng, so he couldn't beat Qiao Feng? The idea in online articles that the reduction of aura leads to a decrease in the overall strength of the Jianghu is simply nonsense. The original article does not mention this anywhere at all. There is only one reason why the martial arts in general has become weaker as the gold system ages: the martial arts is lost! Only this. The subdivision is that the protagonist or the people in the entire world are all magical powers that cannot be passed on to others. There is also a sect that cherishes its secrets. Once the sect dies, the entire system of martial arts will not survive. This leads to the fact that the further you go, the fewer powerful skills you can practice. There are even no advanced techniques to practice later! ! This is the reason for the decline of gold martial arts. Then back to the comparison between Hong Qigong and Qiao Feng. In terms of martial arts, Qiao Feng's twenty-eight palms for subduing the dragon were later changed to eighteen palms, Shaolin internal skills, dragon catching skills, and long fist. No more. Hong Qi Guild's Eighteen Palms for Subduing the Dragon (the original text is stronger than the twenty-eight palms), the Nine Yin Sutra, the 🐶 stick method, and you can travel freely. . . The martial arts he has practiced is much stronger than Qiao Feng's, and he has practiced for longer than Qiao Feng. There is no difference in talent. Qiao Feng's only advantage is that he becomes braver as he fights. But enough to make up for the huge gap between the first two.

The writing is so vicious, I guess I wrote the good ones myself!

They have all passed through Guo Jing and are not Zhutianliu. Why should they be called Chen Zhao and bring in private goods?

The character setting is really uncomfortable to watch, especially the part about Huang Rong. Guo Jing's performance is just like Ouyang Ke. There is also the character Ouyang Ke who can advance the plot of Guo Jing and Huang Rong. It's really a bit poisonous to just disappear.

Let me tell you this, with Qiao Feng's talent, you can practice the martial arts of the seven monsters to a level comparable to the Eighteen Palms of Subduing a Dragon in three years. If you travel back in time, you still can't defeat seven people. With Qiao Feng's talent, you are abusing the master!

Very good. It would be better if the author updates it quickly.

The author's knowledge is not extensive and there are some poisonous points. The biggest key is that the author has not understood what Qiao Feng's talent is at all. The author thinks it is a calligraphy practice. It is said that once you learn it, you will master it in a while. In fact, Qiao Feng's talent focuses on the word "war". Jin Yong's book makes it very clear.

Author, please change your sentences after you finish writing. There are a lot of language problems. Junior high school compositions are better than this. Almost every paragraph has problems. Hey, I came here for Huang Rong. I was poisoned before I finished the second chapter. The friend below who said Platinum Beauty, when did you become blind?

I haven't read the book, but just reading the title seems awkward. The Seven Monsters of Jiangnan are nicknames, and the nicknames are not missed in the Golden Book. They are just monsters, not heroes.

Hurry up and learn the Eighteen Palms of Subduing the Dragon

It's such a mess, no wonder no one is looking at it

Keep up the hard work and you will eventually become a master Few people are writing about martial arts now. I hope the author will do better in the next book. I have also tried to write it myself. Although no one has read it, as a martial arts fan, I still hope that the author can continue to work hard!

It's pretty good, but it's a bit sparse. I hope the author will update more, come on😯

I have been looking for martial arts fan novels to read recently. To be honest, I was quite pleasantly surprised when I saw this one. After reading a few chapters, I felt pretty good. The author is also humbly accepting the readers' suggestions. However, there are some language problems that the author may not have noticed when writing. However, when a sentence suddenly pops up, it is still very funny. I think some readers have pointed it out. I hope the author will consider it again if he has time.

Don't make any noise. Let me take a look first.

Does this wizard author not even remember the names of the seven monsters?

The changes were messy, and the beginning of the chapter deviated from the original work.