Traveling Through the World of Tian Long Ba Bu, I Became You Tanzhi

Out of 100, let's give it a score of 35, for primary school students' composition.

This persistence alone is no worse than those eunuchs who rush to the street and sign contracts with authors! ! ! You are better than them!

The author shaped the protagonist into an image similar to Wei Xiaobao, which is really unpleasant. Wei Xiaobao cannot endure hardship, does not know martial arts, and is greedy for beauty. You have written all the shortcomings.

Ding Chunqiu, the four evil men, forget about killing any of them. It even allowed Ye Erniang and Xu Zhu to recognize each other happily and spend their remaining years in peace. The scandals in Buddhism were not exposed. And Xiao Feng is your father-killing enemy. You are so licky that you even said that even if millions of people died in the Song-Liao war, you would not want Xiao Feng to be wronged. He even almost turned Xiao Feng green. Shenma ntr plot. 🪖

As You Tanzhi, licking Qiao Feng is ridiculous.

Friends, don't read it. This novel is rubbish. Those who don't have enough poison resistance will be poisoned and die.

It's amazing that you can write such excellent online articles before you even enter junior high school. Come on!

The protagonist is very annoying, being played around by A'Zhu, and the character setting is not likable.

The beginning is extremely poisonous and makes readers think they are fools! !

I don't know what the author thinks. I am convinced that Su Dongpo can be written about the world of Tian Long Ba Bu.

It's hard to imagine that this is a book written in 2023. Even if you say it was written in 1993, I would believe it.

Rubbish novel, what the hell is written, nothing serious at all

I beg the author to satisfy my hobbies and write the novel that I like. If you are a fan like me, please like it. If you are not a fan like me, please ignore my articles and don't curse. Last time, someone scolded me and I was banned for 3 months.

It's true that not everyone can write.

Rubbish, not even a basic card, modern people are selfish, don't write so philanthropically, parents don't listen to advice, isn't there a way to do it? If you can live with Ah, you can't live with your parents.

I feel that the writing level has improved a lot, and the later reading is still quite smooth. However, the protagonist's image is not very positive, otherwise the results should be okay. Why have there been so many updates suddenly in the past few days?

It's strange, it's the first time I've seen Level Zero's work at the starting point. Obviously there are many worse ones that can get a first or second grade, and get more comments.

Super rubbish! ! ! Wu Da brought Chaotang and Su Dongpo of the Northern Song Dynasty along with him. The border line of Dali State can reach Xinyang. From Xinyang to Luoyang, it goes around Hengshan. It's too slow to go. Why don't you go around Hengshan and come back? There are also "Wei Xiaobao Passing Through You Tanzhi" and "Wei Xiaobao Passing Through Yang Guo", especially the one by Wei Chuanyou that is really well written. It is good for modern people to wear the ancient "Da Song Toutuo", and modern people wear Wu Song. There is also a picture of Xiao Feng wearing Linghu in the junk book, which is really weird

This is rubbish, and the protagonist has no halo. .

I wrote hundreds of chapters but didn't put them on the shelves. It's such a pity that I was given away by Qidian for nothing.

The writing is very good. Lao Baiwen can write about the heavens. It is recommended to set up a good character at the beginning. After all, not everyone can accept the good character of a skilled girl.

Unique and unscrupulous. Not bad, interesting!

I'm damn worried that if I spoil the plot, the whole world will collapse and be destroyed. If it collapses, how can you make other fan fictions embarrassed?