Wow! the Explosion Rate Is Really High

I saw that the protagonist in Chapter 300 has never been to other cities, or even entered the city within his own city. The world view has not been developed and there is no main line. He has been leveling up. The meaning of the player's existence is to brush up attributes. . .

I lost my mind during time travel. I implemented the word "peace" throughout the process to return old players to time travellers.

The biggest taboos for beginners at the beginning: Brainless text (massive system prompt text, unless you play this set in the later paid chapters, you will be very stupid. There are many ways to fill in the details, but you use the one that makes you feel the worst) No distinction between priority (I don't need to say anything) Strong subjective consciousness (readers don't care about what you think, Lao Bai only wants to hear the story) These problems have been committed over and over again.

Generally speaking, I don't really like this kind of slowly warming up, but still overwhelming the protagonist.

The group portraits are not well written. Many of the more than 200 chapters describe other protagonists who never appear once. I thought it would be similar to The Super Mechanic, which was too detailed in the early stage and then faded in the later stage. The more you write, the more you write. It is written purely to promote the plot. Apart from this, I still like this novel very much.

Actually, I feel like the plot of this book is pretty good. But, how to say it. There is too much data. A weapon or even an object requires very detailed data. Sometimes it takes about 2 or 3 pages (my font size is relatively large). It is 2,000 words, and at 19 and a half, there is basically nothing valuable. It is all kinds of data, and then I finally see some plot advancement in Chapter 2 or 3, and even when your interest is highest, suddenly the next chapter starts to write about supporting characters. How is this different from starting a new book out of chapters? Then there are several chapters of data plus plots from the perspective of supporting characters (this kind of writing is called a group portrait). Then it cut to the protagonist again, and I suddenly felt like I was missing something. It was an indescribable weird illusion. The first reaction is, what is this written? It's so silly? The second reaction is, who is the protagonist? Is that Xin or Bai E? The feeling of confusion is particularly prominent. Having said that, I am just too tired to watch. This kind of group portrait writing method, coupled with data flow, is a burden for readers with low educational level like me. But I found that many people still like this book. Maybe you have a relatively high level of education and are able to understand this writing technique called group portrait.

The book is quite good, but too watery. Every time you add a little experience, you will have to pull out a bunch of settings later. If a piece of paper has 3,000 words, at least 1,200 of them should be this.

This kind of cheating and development flow, it feels good to not forcefully pretend to be a slap in the face, and the rhythm of the plot is also good, come on

It's awesome and beautiful. I'll grab the first place by the way

The subject matter is good and to my taste The writing is readable The characterization is average I personally think it is the bread and butter in the book shortage The update is slow The protagonist has a good outlook The description of the supporting characters and players is average In general, the flaws are not concealed

It's so good. I haven't read such an appetizing book in a long time.

Not enough, gkd update

Looks good, come on! It would be better if more chapters could be updated every day. 😁

All in

Why is there so much hostility in the book club circle? The latest comments are all critical. I am currently following the latest chapter. I feel that the protagonists and supporting characters are well described, the writing is also good, and the atmosphere is great. I feel that this book is currently a bread and butter. The author writes well. Keep up the good work ^0^~. Attached is my monthly ticket record, please help me improve it!

The author reads with me: Starting today, it will never be updated. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. I will burst into words, life and death. I am the keyboard in the dark, the guard on the Great Wall of Internet; I resist the cold and endure the scorching heat, and I dedicate my life and glory to coding in the light of dawn, today and every day.

It's not bad at the front, but it gets serious at the back. It was originally a game world with data panels and players participating. However, when it encountered an evil god, it was completely mind-controlled. The data panel had no response at all. In the end, it could only rely on spiritual victory methods to fight the evil god's apostles. In the digitalized world, how does the spiritual victory method make the data panel feel? Those who want to be mentally invincible rely entirely on mental cheating, and those who want to create data panels rely entirely on data panels. First the data panel, then the data panel is useless, and then relying on the spirit to win the battle against the evil god, overthrowing all the previous ones, would be disgusting.

I've always been a fan of the author, but aren't you a bit off the mark in these new chapters? The protagonist is not an ordinary person who accidentally fell into the game world, but his true identity is the self-enclosed first human emperor in the world? Is there any mistake? Hard work ahead of this is useless? Tell me, it's poisonous!

Poisonous, use love to influence one rebellion, two rebellions, three rebellions, the saint is here, please Shennong taste it

The game I mentioned earlier was a game that the protagonist made a reservation for, but as soon as the protagonist traveled through time, the players came in right behind him! The games you need to reserve can be played as soon as you reserve them. So why do you need to reserve them? Isn't it possible to just do a public beta? Then the rest is all about the players. For five or six chapters in a row, nothing happens to the protagonist! From the introduction, I thought the protagonist was invincible. Then Shuangwen interacted with the player, but the golden finger could only be used once. I just helped the protagonist get a position, but it can no longer be used. There are players behind you! The introduction is right in one sentence: the protagonist is a cannon fodder. The author himself is unwilling to write about him.

The protagonist is so upright, so high-sounding, majestic, without any negative impression. I want to give people a perfect character, an artificial person. I write it like a saint or a god. But the most annoying thing is this, because gods are the farthest away and the most unrealistic thing. The more holy you write, the more disgusting it becomes.

The boss has few rewards, the players act irrationally like the natives, and it completely serves the plot that the author wants. The choice of the protagonist is inexplicable, and the number of words is repeated on strange values. The plug-in is delayed, the plot is procrastinating, and the slap in the face is cliched. All the problems can be tolerated. But! Shuangwen is unhappy, the upgrade is so slow! What else does it mean!

Let me tell you a very scary joke: It's almost a hundred chapters already, the game timeline is only 4-5 days old, and less than a week has passed, and less than ten players have appeared in it, so I'm asking you if it's scary or not. Guys, don't waste your money.

There are 20 chapters, one chapter is about the protagonist's time travel, one chapter is about the protagonist's assessment, and one chapter is about the protagonist getting to know his teammates. I want to ask what the remaining 17 chapters are about? It's all nonsense. There really is no best, only more water.

The latest chapter is about preparing to evacuate. It turns out that it is about the author himself.

I can't understand that in a Warhammer worldview, or a Warhammer-like worldview, the protagonist would actually choose to save a believer of an evil god, even if this evil god believer is already an anointed one. In this worldview, perhaps only the ancient saints are qualified to have compassion.

The protagonist of the Holy Mother, who was a cannon fodder at first, still wanted to survive, but then drove to recruit troops for no reason. She lives in Bengbu. Are you an artificial person who has taken your body, or you who has taken your body and made an artificial person 😰

The frequency of this limited exemption is too high. . Looking back, I only raised about 20 chapters.

It is true to kill the Virgin first in the last days. This kind of protagonist is the kind of person who encounters an early-stage zombie virus infected person and others want to kill him (because he is hopeless and marked by Nurgle) to protect mankind. The protagonist shouts that he has never bitten anyone, and then takes the infected person to the city for treatment. He only cares about himself and does not care about the life and death of other innocent people. As for the followers of Nurgle, they really disgusted me. They were equivalent to those infected with the zombie virus. The Arbitration Institute wanted to eliminate them for the sake of human safety, but the protagonist came out and complained, saying that he had to carry him and carry a ghost? He doesn't know anything about demons or believers of evil gods, so he just intervenes in the professional department's solutions. He is really the kind of person who leads zombies to a safe base in apocalyptic novels.

It's so embarrassing. Bugs all have long-range missile weapons, but humans have to rush into minefields to fight... They can't compete with physical fitness, and they also lose with technological force? That's a lot of fun!