Dou Po: Obtain All Yao Lao's Memories at the Beginning

The best training-themed single female protagonist I have seen so far. The brother-sister setting is very interesting.

I like this fanfic very much, but the quality of the first 300 chapters is obviously better than the last 300. In the last 30 chapters, it can be seen that the author wants to finish it quickly, and the plot seems very rushed (I can't help it, the author is still in school, so the plot is rushed). At the same time, the interaction with the little medical fairy in the last 100 chapters has become less. The character setting of Cai Lin is very good, but the sense of presence is very low. Maybe the author focused on pure love so he neglected it. Qing Lin's slightly humble feelings make people feel pity. Compared with the original work, the number of scenes in the Black Corner Domain has increased and the number of scenes in Canaan College has decreased. Because the protagonist has superior strength, many fighting links have been avoided. In the end, he lives in Zhongzhou instead of Wutan City. I personally feel a little regretful. Finally, my favorite part of the book is the setting of a brother and sister who are in pure love with the Little Medical Fairy. The most memorable thing is the teenage life of the protagonist and the Little Medical Fairy, a brother and sister who depended on each other in Wutan City 😢.

At present, there are more than 270 chapters. The author's plot conception and use of various humorous jokes are excellent. The experiences of several female protagonists in the original work have been modified, and their characters have also undergone significant changes (such as the only heroine in the book, the little doctor). In addition, the rare pure love plot is also eye-catching. Considering that the author is still a college student, such writing power is really terrifying.

Don't give Medusa a good look. Seeing that other fans have accepted Medusa. She is not very talented and has low cultivation. It feels like she is pretending to be a fighting saint. She punches hard internally and saves the protagonist externally. She dies speechless.

It is impossible for Yaochen to not have heaven-level fighting skills. In the original work, the 8th-grade elixir from the Space Trade Fair can be replaced with heaven-level fighting skills.

Personal opinion: In fact, according to the golden finger of the protagonist, after obtaining Yaolao's memory and the residual picture of Jinglian Demon Saint, staying in Wutan City has no meaning. With the identity of a fourth-grade alchemist, wouldn't it be nice to move to a larger place to develop resources? It would be great to prepare for Qinglian Earth Core Fire as early as possible or go to Jianan Academy. Let's talk about giving favors to Xiao Yan. Xiao Yan himself had no value at all in the early stage. He had already squeezed out everything that should be squeezed out, and this favor was changed... I don't know how it will come back later. If it is just to reveal the secret at the end like "I am your father, are you surprised?", It will not only be a bit awkward, but also easily make people suspect you have ulterior motives. Well, that's probably it.

A cool cheating fan fiction about pure love.

Let's update Ma Liu. It's well written so far. My suggestion is that after the protagonist fights the spirit, he can leave Utan City and go to the desert to plot the Qinglian Earth Core Fire. Although the protagonist's cultivation level is low, it is still necessary to plan in advance. Don't have those bloody plots. There are also other ways to get to know and capture Medusa. Don't be as bloody as Xiao Yan in the original novel. Keep writing, it's pretty good.

Overall, this novel is quite good and refreshing, and it suits my taste. But what's the use of anti-inflammatory when the protagonist has a cheat? How do you explain it to Yao Lao when I use Bone Spirit Cold Fire in the future? Or does Yao Lao even have no memory? Besides, the Xiao family also has a Nine-Star Fighting Emperor. Have you ignored him? Think that having a leather mask is enough to make a fool of yourself? Eleven-year-old Nine-Star Fighter, are you afraid that others won't know you have cheats, right?

I chased after the single heroine when I saw it. The pure love party said that it was very enjoyable to watch.

You don't have to have Gu Xun'er, but Queen Medusa must understand everything😎

Little Medical Fairy (White Clothes)

Dear friends, today this book is recommended on QQ Reading this week. This is the first round of new book pk I beg you all, if you have recommendation tickets or monthly tickets, please consider this book. I really beg you. In addition, there is also follow-up reading. Please don't keep the book, and it is not good to keep the book. After all, if you don't read it right away, some chapters will be deleted in a day or two. Please, data is really important to the new book, please.

After reading more than 200 chapters, the biggest advantage of this book is that the Little Medical Fairy is almost a single female protagonist. In my opinion, it is very successful, and it does not try desperately to suppress Xiao Yan, although it still appears later. I still hope that I can write longer and reach 3 million words😁😁😁

To be honest, most people who like to read fanfiction when they were young like to see some Yi Han being made up for, but as Fighting to the Sky is a very popular and refreshing novel, he actually doesn't have many regrets. In fact, the only big regret is that many of Xiao Yan's confidants did not have some good characters, and there were no distinctive female characters. It's a bit of a pity that I didn't receive a harem, so most of the fandoms who like to watch Dou Po hope to have a harem. At least I hope that many personalities in the struggle will sign your female characters. Well, I can receive a harem. Otherwise, if it feels like it's just an ordinary cool article, it's better to read the original work. Really

It's a very good book. It would have been perfect if it had more female protagonists.

I originally saw more than 200 chapters and left, but after browsing around I found that this book is still well written. In fact, it doesn't matter if there is only one female protagonist or multiple female protagonists. The main author has a very good grasp of the emotional line. It is not the kind of book that can be picked up by just meeting once or twice, and there is no poisonous point to reduce intelligence. Moreover, the Medusa episode was particularly enjoyable to watch. There were no surprises that seemed very blunt at first glance. For example, what kind of treasure did Medusa have that made the protagonist release Medusa and help her evolve? After that, there were two chapters of dialogue where Medusa fell in love with the protagonist. This was an unappetizing plot. Overall, it's a fine piece of fan fiction, pretty good. Come on, author👍

It stands to reason that it is extremely easy for the protagonist to get rich easily. If he can extract possessions from dead objects, then Warcraft beasts will be...

Such an awesome plug-in, it actually mentions Dou Po but not the Great Dominator

I've read more than 200 chapters, and the rest are pretty good. This is a fanfic, so it would be a pity to leave this beauty alone.

The writing was okay, but the ending was too hasty, and Otoya's token was not written.

Pure love party🙂🙂🙂

Is there any similar pure love fanfic? It's so well written.

The author's writing is really great, but it's a pity that the end was a bit hasty. I really like the unique brother and sister setting. I hope the author can publish a new book.

After reading it, the ending was a bit rushed, but the whole story was very smooth and can be regarded as good food.

Dear author, how many heroines are there?

You can check it out in the early stages. The emotional scenes are very sweet and well written. I was so scared that I went out to read it. It was a Dou Po fanfic. Unfortunately, it was rushed in the end because I was anxious to finish it. The heroine tried so hard and couldn't even conceive a child. Maybe the author doesn't know how to write.

"Crow flies on a plane"😄😄😄😄😄😄, are you serious about your fighting skills?

? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Finished

The pace of the early chapters was okay. It would have been nice if there were more childhood experiences of the protagonist and the little medical fairy. But after the beginning of the next 500 chapters, I felt that the pace was too fast and many things were not described in detail.