Kamen Rider: Starting from Planting Trees in the Underworld of Helm

The sewing is pretty good, nothing too abrupt, but the plot transition is a bit fast.

I was wrong, I originally thought this was an excellent knight fanfic, but unfortunately, it was rubbish. The protagonist, a time traveler, is reborn as a native Hokage at the beginning. His IQ before time travel has become wise, and the plot of the armor is written as a piece of defense. Is fifteen years old immature? Just like a three-year-old. Defense in defense.

Although Levis is not good-looking, Akilela is super pretty, Superman Kadoda and Master Lou are really handsome. If you can consider bad girls, Poppy, and Sister Blade🐶

It's okay to turn the protagonist into a native It's as childish as a minor's words

How can it be just Aguilera? With so many wives, what else do you have to choose from? Of course I want them all.

My mother-in-law

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It's a bit like a self-pleasure article. Don't read it with your brain.

To be honest, am I the only one who thinks Aguilera can only say that she looks good in red? Isn't Ninglun's appearance as good as Zhenyu, Xia Mikan, Poppy, Aura, Sister Blade, and the bad woman? And even Hongyi is about the same as Tsukuyomi, Little Secretary, Zimli, Mei, Miyin, Ali, and Wu?

How can I put it? It looks very messy. I don't know why I feel like this.

Just write about girls. Why did Levis write about it? I don't want to read it anymore.

It's very messy, the writing is too messy, and there are some anecdotes

The introduction is unstoppable, a tree world has arrived, and there are Heim fruits on the trees. Do you still need to plant trees? When the tree world comes into full bloom, what kind of fruit cannot be grown?

Let's talk about it, some people really like Sakura's face, she is too popular and is even inferior, but there are many female protagonists Sakura on other sites. I feel like even Ikki's mother is far behind. .

In general, the protagonist is actually almost developed. You can just continue the rhythm of the invincible and cool writing. You can pretend to be weak by fishing, but don't force your combat power to reduce your intelligence. Otherwise, you will really collapse. Author Sang, you don't want no readers to read your book, right?

What I wrote after 30 photos is really not that good.

After reading Chapter 27, I felt that it was relaxing and novel. There is no conflict in the combination of Naruto and Kamen Rider. In short, this book should be popular. Come on✊

Isn't it ridiculous that the male protagonist, as a character who has jumped out of the Kamen Rider universe, is still recorded in the book of the Holy Blade World?

If nothing else, there are a bunch of typos, missing words, and missing words. I don't know what I'm doing.

Coming

Will he return to Hokage? I think I should be able to be invincible in Naruto (I can also beat the Six Paths)

When will we write Naruto, Wood Release--Heim's arrival in the underworld?

Brothers, please post some special photos and posts, whether it's Persona or Ultraman.