I Can Give Birth to Martial Arts Clones

"I Can Breed a Martial Arts Clone": Multiple improvements in personal strength + clone strength + power management [Recommendation] The protagonist has basically maintained a certain level of progress and strength commissions, and the rhythm is well controlled. Another attractive point is what type of next clone will be, and readers will have expectations. The description of the fighting scenes is also quite good. In addition to personal strength, power management is also constantly improving. Overall, it's a good astronomical book. [Theme] Fantasy, Oriental Fantasy [Author] 24k Little Golden Pig [Number of words] 302,100 [Story background] Weiping traveled to the world of Gaowu and became a fourteen or fifteen-year-old boy. According to the memory of the original owner, he joined the Golden Mantis Gang to earn a living and will fight to the death in the "Mantis Trial" a year later. The original owner had been training hard for ten months in the Golden Mantis training technique, but he had not even mastered the first level. Now there were only two months left. After Weiping tested it, he found that his martial arts talent was still very poor. Just when he was disappointed, a ball in the sea of ​​​​consciousness suddenly glowed, and then the attribute panel appeared in front of him, and he was reminded that he could condense clones. He had an idea and captured a mantis giving birth to a clone. From then on, he made rapid progress in practicing the golden mantis training technique, and successfully passed the subsequent trials. From then on, he embarked on the path of giving birth to various clones while becoming stronger himself. [Comment] The protagonist's golden finger is actually not outstanding in creativity. After all, fantasy themes have been popular for so many years, and similar golden fingers have been written before. However, the author has a good sense of rhythm. Basically, every chapter can improve the protagonist, allowing readers to visibly feel that the protagonist is getting stronger, and can make full use of the current strength in the subsequent plots. In addition, one thing worth looking forward to is what species the protagonist's next clone will be and how much it can improve the protagonist's strength. From the mantis, to the scaly beast, to the merlin, and the clones conceived before can continue to evolve and become stronger, this forms two ways to improve the strength, which supports the readers' sense of expectation. As personal strength improves, the forces controlled by the protagonist become more and more powerful. This is another development line. Up to now, the protagonist can be said to be relatively stable among several paths, improving his strength and influence step by step. Overall, this is a novel that can be used to pass the time. Recommendation Index★★★ {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial Reading"}

You wrote before that someone practiced as well as you in a month and still hid his talent.

I would like to give the author a suggestion. If you use pretentious dialogue during the fighting scenes, especially when describing the fight, it will only make people feel that the punch is too slow. This is also a common problem of many novices. They just use dialogue to set off the protagonist, without thinking about whether to strike faster or speak faster. Try it yourself. How many words can you say in the time it takes an ordinary person to punch? What's more, is he a warrior, or can he speak faster than his hand speed? Comments can be left behind, at least don't say them during the move

Eunuchs are not allowed to die😡😡😡

The character of the male protagonist has changed since it was released, and the plot is not pleasing to the eye. If your life is not in danger, don't become a gang leader. If you don't want to eat, why are you throwing the bowl?

Please improve the author's writing style. On Chapter 10, let's see what's written? Weiping was stunned. Wei Ping was slightly startled. Wei Ping was slightly lost in thought. Wei Ping raised his eyebrows. The bathroom color is wonderful. Character! Character! Character! Think clearly about what kind of character design attracts readers, what words and descriptions should be used to enrich the character, and which descriptions will destroy the character and cannot be used. Have time to think about it more.

If you have any good suggestions, you can leave a message here. I will check it often, including but not limited to the following: 1. Suggestions for subsequent clones, it is best to state the characteristics and growth direction of the clone; 2. Suggestions on martial arts and martial arts; 3. Some exclusive plots related to the protagonist's clone abilities;

The book is good, why don't I write it again?

Two suggestions: First of all, instead of hiding a clone, why not hide your martial arts skills and become a fake beast master disciple? Secondly, instead of simply thinking about how to increase the number of clones, it is better to choose the opportunity to kill the clones that cannot keep up and make room for new ones.

Now you have defeated Mystery 2. You are number one on the new book list and he is number two.

Aren't you afraid of being infringed upon by your cover?

Why do I not want to click on it when I see the word "clone"? .

I also want to see the protagonist cultivate a clone (sea, land and air) and dominate the world! The proud ninth heaven! Now tell me it's gone!

Want to curse. So sudden! ! !

Taking Mantis as the first clone feels quite innovative. Write well, come on!

Such a beautiful novel has come to an end. What I like most is this process of practicing alone. Hey

You are a good storyteller, don't you feel guilty?