Wouldn't Anyone Be a Taoist Priest in Japan?

As the author of the first book, I need to work harder. It's best to think about it again. There are many places that need to be complained. If the author doesn't like it, just delete it. I won't mind. . First of all, the writing style, which feels a bit naive and not exciting, is a factor that is difficult to follow in light novels. It does not require the writing style of a famous writer, but it is still necessary to be above normal level. Otherwise, the description will be too simple and readers will not be interested in investing at all. Compared with thousands of novel updates on the Internet every day, if you cannot catch the readers in one reading, it will cause a lot of attention loss, and the final result will be clear at a glance. As the focus of light novels, the coolness can be suppressed first and then promoted, but it must not be eliminated. Too dull daily life and battles will become more and more boring, and the beginning of the subsequent battles will be less exciting; The second is that the character creation is weak. Whether it is the male protagonist or the female protagonist, after reading for a long time, even the character design of the second disease is better than that of the male and female protagonists. This is outrageous. What are the impressions of the male protagonist and the female protagonist now? Basically no, there is no clear description of either character or appearance, which is very bad, especially for the female protagonist. Goodfellas established the relationship in just twenty chapters. This is really one of the fastest light novels I have read in so many years to establish the relationship. Most of them are still with each heroine after hundreds or thousands of chapters. It drifts uncertainly, and even ends up in a harem, and the heroine doesn't have much to like, and being empty and unlovable is the biggest flaw. If you really don't know how to create characters, then label them, such as oral fetish, street idiot, giant X, tame dye, slut, eldest lady, cuteness, etc., Find a few and bring them in directly and describe them. Write some cute or cute chapters, I guess the image will be much better, and they won't be dating out of nowhere like they are now; Finally, the plot is too ordinary, and it feels the same whether the protagonist is involved or not. The upper limit is too high and the facial makeup is too repeated, such as the scene with the red ghost. The combatants, since they have all turned out to be moles and failed once, but still do not mobilize high-level backup, this is Tokyo - the largest city with the largest population dares to take it so lightly. The battle is neither fierce nor exciting. Although it shakes people, it does not appear handsome at all - whether you are strong or not, whether you are handsome or not is a matter of life. There is no main line in this book so far. It seems that I just follow the trend and write whatever comes to my mind. In a plot without daily multi-line romance, the only things that can be described are battle scenes, which invisibly reduces the points a lot; Anyway, let's make a complaint and add the author's book review. Please forgive me if I disturb you. .

The protagonist is a bit useless. When he is sure that there are demons and monsters in this world, and he has a top-level inheritance, the first thing he thinks about is not cultivating and becoming a god, but fishing for three days and drying nets for two days. In every fight, he relies on the help of gods and masters. Logically speaking, if a normal person has this condition, shouldn't he focus on cultivating the Tao to achieve immortality? I can only say that I don't understand the protagonist's thoughts, and some of them feel tough if they have a backer. Also, it is too low of the protagonist's combat power. A top-level Taoist priest who has been cultivating for more than ten years is still the lowest level in A, B, C, D, and W. He can't even compare with the younger generation of other shrines in Japan. Shouldn't it be used to coerce Japan's younger generation? That's outrageous. In my opinion, creativity is good, but logic really doesn't make sense.

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The protagonist is a bit useless. What the readers want to see is a battle of skills similar to Uncle Jiu, but in the end, there are just a few moves over and over again, and there are no soldiers or brilliant Taoist techniques. Shenxiao sect? Doesn't it only play thunder?

This place is pretty good. Amaterasu Tsukiyomi Susana in the Heavenly Palace can be refined to be a protector, so many monsters and imps can be trained to be portable soldiers and horses, and then use Gao Tianyuan as a magic altar, Yata mirror as a magic mirror, Amancongyun sword as a magic sword, Magatama as a sacrifice, summon a certain deity or emperor to send down a little spiritual consciousness, and you can pass the level directly. If the protagonist has such a big relationship with Lei Zu, he can directly summon the Lei General, Marshal of the Heavenly Army, or the Five Thunder Emperors from the Lei Department, and the level will be cleared in an instant.

I watched an interview with a real-life Taoist priest before. What should I do if I encounter a big demon that I can't defeat? Answer, shake the phone and call everyone, master, brother, apprentice, apprentice, uncle, etc. This doesn't work. There are other views, such as cult hunters coming out to fight, national power and so on.

The pace is really too slow, and it still doesn't have the kind of excitement that makes people want to keep watching.

This heroine feels like a failure, and the author's emotional description of the characters is not very good, which makes it look a bit awkward.

Yes, the writing is not bad. Nowadays, novels with no brains and invincibles are popular. Such novels with brains and enemies are rare.

The name of pig's feet is quite good - the name of the great god is Ye, meaning: wild god.

The portrayal of this heroine is a complete mess

Not bad, it fits my impression of Taoist priests. There are younger ones and older ones. Some of them are bold and domineering. Cross it out. Ahem, I mean they are more casual and free-spirited.

I feel like it's average. I'm not very satisfied that I can't penetrate the Japanese leyline at the beginning.

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The male protagonist is a bit weak at the beginning. In a fast-paced era, it is difficult for anyone to calm down and read a slow-paced novel.

Except for the fact that the protagonist in the previous plot is too bad and makes me a little nervous to watch, I think the rest of the movie is okay. Come on, author, I'll update you soon when you put it on the shelves

If the world of dust and sand is upgraded to a small world, then why not cut down mountains and destroy temples here? According to the settings in the book, the corresponding monsters and ghosts in Daxia and the West will also be greatly improved, and there will also be corresponding plots, right?

It's a pity that there are no female ninjas in history where female ninjas were invented in literary works.

If you have any interesting character settings, move settings, or suggestions from some Taoist scriptures, you can tell me on this floor. Thank you all!

I feel pretty good👍Are you planning to write a female protagonist?