Holding the Supermarket in Hand, Wearing the Era, the Rough Man and His Wife Are Beautiful and Sassy

Come on! Hope it will be more exciting in the future!

I was puzzled when I saw the male protagonist, the overlord, forced himself on the bow in the first chapter. . . How could the introduction include such a plot as a rough guy and a spoiled wife? . . Lovely Wife Literature I really. . . Is there really a reader who falls in love with a man after seeing a forced rough guy? She really loves it.

The subject matter is very, very good, and the author's courage is commendable, but I can't read three chapters at the moment. There are three reasons: First, the author is not careful about punctuation and sentence segmentation, which makes readers very anxious. Second, the author uses many sentences inappropriately, often making people unable to help but add or subtract words for you. Three, the details are rough. I hope the author can revise it. After all, an author who can write millions of novels must be able to eliminate these shortcomings. Keep it now and look at it later.

The three golden chapters at the beginning of the book are indeed very dissuasive. When I read the reviews, they all said it was bad and too poisonous. If you don't like it, you can skip the first three chapters. The heroine is a person who is not too high-profile, not too intellectual, and lives hard. By the way, destroy the enemies as much as possible and collect materials and ammunition for our party. Very positive energy!

It's quite new, I look forward to the follow-up. It's hard to find an article from this era, don't be fooled.

She was raped at the beginning, persuaded to quit, and said goodbye... By the way, you took your sister to the supermarket for time travel, did you abandon your sister?

Long March? It's been 47 years since the Japanese surrendered. Author, please figure it out.

It's well written, but I hope you won't be fooled and support it.

I tied it in one breath, please give me more

Keep writing, it's too little and not enough to read. If you keep it, you will forget it.

If you like this kind of period writing, don't be fooled.

Nice! ! ! Come on, author! More

The time travel setting is quite novel, come on

It's so well written and very beautiful! 👍👍👍

It's great to strive for self-improvement and live a wonderful life through hard work

The stories of this era are so heavy

The first 300 chapters are okay, with feelings of family and country. Later, the heroine is quite pretentious towards her children and the hero, and then she buys, buys, and gives various gifts. Every time she comes back, she gives them gifts. What era is she? She is so generous and not low-key at all!

I read more than a dozen chapters: Farming, Weeding, Farming and Buying Donkeys. There is no plot and no real drama. So many of them are used to make up the word count.

It used to be three chapters a day, but it was less in the past two days. Make it up quickly