Naruto: Six Paths Asked Me to Save the Ninja World

A very difficult book to read, Lightning Protection

Re-reviewing Naruto's childhood, the author's previous evaluation of the third generation seemed a bit too positive

Good: I have a lot of imagination. For the first time, I saw in Naruto that it is not only on the ninja continent, but also not limited to the decades of the plot. It has its own ideas. This is good. This must be admitted. Poor: There are problems with the writing, writing style, conflict, excitement, and rhythm. Ultimately, it is the author's lack of ability and writing power. I just started to read this kind of fanfic that is too original and has no sense of substitution. It is still unsustainable. You have also consulted editors and bosses about other authors, so I won't go into details here. So, a suggestion to the author: If you have problems everywhere, and you still want to start a new book, it doesn't necessarily mean that the new book will be very good. In this case, why not finish this one? First understand how to write a novel, and practice the shortcomings. It seems that you don't want to change the front part, so write the back part better. Come on, it starts like this.

The Immortal of Six Paths is so kind, why doesn't he end the war as soon as possible? There are many people like Naruto in the Hokage. The naive and brainless Virgin longs for peace. If he can directly give Naruto the power of the Six Paths in the later stage, why can't others? They are all people who yearn for peace. And judging from the settings in the later stages of the anime, the extent of the Six Paths Sage's intervention in the human world is not terrible. The chakra he shared came to the human world whenever he wanted, and the power of the Six Paths was given to him. As the reincarnation of Indra, I don't believe that I didn't pay attention to Uchiha Madara, and I was still deceived by Black Zetsu. I didn't stand up to speak after awakening the Samsara Eye. I feel that the Six Paths are the biggest mastermind behind the ninja world, cutting off the people of the ninja world one after another.

I've always wanted to write a book about a country in another part of the ninja world, but I'm afraid I won't be able to write it, but it's good to see the author write it I don't think the ninja world can be just that one continent. I feel like there is another continent similar to South America, but I haven't found it yet.

Apology post and thank you post, thanks to the editor Liu Xingda and Ye Xining, the author of "Escape from Konoha", for their criticisms, corrections and suggestions.

First of all, it is said in the Book of War that 1 tael is equal to 10 yen The release date of the Book of War is 2002. The author did not find the exchange rate of Japanese yen to RMB at that time, but it can be calculated based on the exchange rate of Japanese yen to US dollar. The author found that at that time, 1$ was equal to 125.29 Yen, and 1$ was equal to 8.2770¥, So 1¥ was about 15.14 Yen. The price of Hokage cannot be known, but it can be obtained indirectly from the menu list of Ichiraku Ramen. There was no price on the Ichiraku Ramen menu at the beginning, it was added later, and the prices fluctuated in the middle. The fried noodles that are available before and after here are 40 taels each. In this case, the menu price in the picture below is of great reference value. Then it can be concluded that the price of ramen without side dishes is basically between 60 and 80 taels. From the above exchange rate, it can be calculated that a bowl of ramen cost 9.08 Yuan to 12.11 Yuan in 2002 Looking at the big bowl of noodles, the price is very conscientious, and the hand-made noodles are made by a real person.

No nonsense, just go directly to the setting map, Book of War, so it's not wrong to write a shadow level in a Naruto fanfic. Also, in the setting, people can be directly recruited from the Ninja School to go to the battlefield, which is in line with the plot of the Third Ninja War. Then there is the 589th episode of the anime, at 17:50, Hashirama talks about building a village so that the children can live to the age of drinking... There is also the book of Zhizhi, which is also a setting episode, it is really 🌿. This setting gives you Kishimoto something to eat. Just for this reason, Yuan Fei and Rizhan can't even think about it in vain. It's really fucked up by you.

Go directly to the setting book. The location of the previous map of the Kingdom of Vortex is wrong. Adjust it again. There should be no big problem now. The reason for the demise of the Kingdom of Whirlpool has also been given. Complain. Is this where the word "wisdom" changes its flavor? Yes, the better the person, the sooner he will leave. You two are still old and not dead. It is not an exaggeration to say that you are dead trash and idiots.

It's a pity that I don't have a monthly pass, otherwise how much would I give you?

The second to last one on the first line is Hatake's family crest

I won't write it anymore. Don't wait for the new book. I deleted it. I don't want to write it anymore

The Caged Bird Seal was planted when he was three years old, and there was a swastika in the middle of the forehead. I don't know why it was changed to a ❌ in the anime, maybe just to be lazy.

Opinion collection post: If you have any opinions, please submit them here. I will read them.

The location of the Kingdom of Waves in the setting post is wrong Combined with the location of each Ninja Village in the setting book This is the corrected map. As for whether the Kingdom of the Sea will be written about in the future, who knows, it won't hurt to mark it. There is also the Country of Whirlpool. Whether it is the pink square island on other versions of the map or the peninsula on this map, Konoha is fully capable of supporting it within three days. Since it was destroyed in the Second Ninja War, and Tobirama was gone during the First World War, and it took nearly twenty years from World War II to the First World War, then the argument that Hiruzen came to power too soon and could not give orders is untenable. So the reasonable inference is that either Konoha attacked too hard and no manpower could get through, or someone refused to let him send men. Only these two reasons. (Actually, it's Kishimoto's fault, the story arrangement is a mess.)

Should Minato go to the New World Continent or with Kushina?

What is a live slug? Not a slug?

The author can use drawing software to draw some plot characters

This is the original Hokage map. According to the section where Kakashi led a team to support Sunagakure to rescue Gaara, it was said that it could be reached in three days. I didn't know where Konoha and Sunagakure Village were, so I roughly drew them. The green circle is the three-day trip starting from the red point. —————————————————————— This is a map of the Ninja Continent during the Ninja Sect period set in this novel.