The Ball Soared with One Man's Move

It's really uncomfortable. The protagonist is the creator god of the fairy world. At first, he said that people with evil intentions should not be allowed in, but then the whole family compromised after being forced! ! ! He actually compromised! ! ! Ang, does this mean that as long as someone is close to you, even if it is the biggest devil in the world, the kind with unforgivable sins, you can give him a road to heaven as long as he forces you? ? ? ! ! ! This is not funny! God of Creation, for being so emotional, I am not afraid that your world will be ruined by you! Let's not talk about the parents. They want to enter the fairy world. You want to express your gratitude to your parents and enter the fairy world. OK, I think there is no problem. But for others, relying on their blood relationship, they let people with bad character enter the fairy world they dreamed of without any effort. It really made me laugh 🤔🤔🤔

Comment: In fact, there is nothing wrong with reading these explanations, but I am still looking forward to seeing how the story will turn after the explanation is over. I hope it will not disappoint me.

I don't like people who are sloppy and can't take care of themselves.

After seeing the second volume, I feel that I still need to support it, otherwise it would take at least a dozen chapters just to make people believe in the authenticity of this post.

Okay, okay, tomorrow will be the real text, come on

These thirty-six people are all talented people who speak the truth, and they have some understanding. At first, their own skills improved by a small section, a few small sections, and a large section (Elixir Change), but only eight of them were sublimated. This is not balanced.

I have only read the Luotian Dajiao alone, so I am not very clear about the background of some stories. This book just gave me an overview, which is quite good.

The writing is very good, unlike other one-person novels where you just want to grab eight unique skills when you enter. The shortcomings have all been written out. When I watched the anime, I felt that the character of The Heir of Eight Wonders was weird.

I haven't read the novel, but I saw that the comments on the homepage were all positive, and then I clicked into the comment area. A lot of them said they were poisonous weeds. Can you have some basic trust between people? Will it not hurt your conscience to read comments like this?

I guess the author got so bored watching anime that he wrote a book specifically to complain about it.

The Eight Wonders Techniques are exaggerated. The flaws of the Eight Wonders Techniques are huge. First of all, the threshold for learning is ridiculously high. It's not that people with outstanding talents cannot learn them (just look at Lu Linglong and you will know, if Tongtian Lu is so good, why didn't Lu Jin teach her)? The practitioners are all people with extremely high talents. Even if they don't have the Eight Wonders Techniques, they are not passers-by. Second, the speed and power of the Eight Wonders Skills are indeed high, but the upper limit is locked. After reaching a certain level, the probability of breakthrough is much smaller than that of orthodox practitioners, but the danger is much greater. What sects seek for development is sustainability. Things like the Eight Wonders Techniques cannot shake the foundation of a large sect at all. As for saying that the martial arts of each sect is rubbish compared to the Eight Wonders Techniques, it is even more unreasonable. On the contrary, for the inheritance of the family and the sect, the Eight Wonders Techniques are not that important in their hearts.

This opening part is actually an alternative interpretation of the original work that is different from the mainstream perspective. How can I put it, since the Nathan chapter came out, when I look back at the previous plot of Under One Person, many things have changed. Just like in The Deer and the Cauldron, Hong Antong from the Shenlong Sect was able to trick the Queen Mother with his extraordinary powers. So what kind of conspiracy was there? Why not just drug the emperor and the ministers of the Manchu Dynasty with Baotai Yijin Pills? Another example is the Tianshan Child Mother in The Eight Parts of Demi-Gods who visits the Xixia Palace as if she were back home. She even captures the princess and warms Xu Zhu's bed every night. The ugly monk also sends the princess back after he is done. It can be seen that the super masters want to pick off the emperor's head just for fun, but those heroes who care about the country and the people would rather analize thousands of troops on the battlefield than assassinate the notorious treacherous minister in the court who has brought disaster to the country and the people. We readers can all understand and accept that this is a trade-off made by the author for the plot of the story, a kind of reverse intelligence that is helpless but very silly upon closer inspection. There are actually many such situations among one person. Not to mention the many, even the lawless and fearless people who are afraid of the world will cooperate with the will of the world and not expose the alien's methods to the public. I want to kick these thunders off first to add drama and humor. Just like a friend left a message saying that I copied the original work. In fact, this is really a question of the soul, which makes me feel ashamed and embarrassed. Although I have tried my best not to quote the content of the original work and focus on interpretation and complaints, I know that doing so is embarrassing and inappropriate. Actually, my original intention was to "over-interpret" the past events in Jiashen through the personal perspective of the protagonist who has not yet officially appeared. In a way that "goes against the general trend" in the atmosphere of the original work where everyone rejected the thirty-six thieves, it sets the tone for the entire story and triggers conflicts. It also expresses the characteristics of this fanfic that does not take the usual path. I thought about advancing the plot while complaining about the revelations about the Jiashen Rebellion, but I didn't have enough writing skills. Choosing that method would make the content too lengthy and spread out too much, and it would mess up the rhythm of the story. If I simply released it all at once, in fact, there would be no more this program this time. Please bear with me, readers. The first 80,000 words are an alternative interpretation of the original work (I think it is actually worth reading). After that, the plot of the original work basically disappeared. The story officially unfolds from Chapter 36. It mainly follows the route of Dihua sand sculptures, with little violence and a behind-the-scenes farming style. In fact, in the previous part, I followed the interpretation and complaint videos of film and television animations on website b. Those works are really interesting, even more exciting than watching the original works. I also know that this is an inappropriate way for Internet literature writers to promote, but I have really tried hard and sincerely not to touch the original content. I'm a little worried that the previous paragraph is too hard-core, and the explanation is not clear enough, leaving readers who have never read the original work confused. I hope that my weird operation will not make it too niche. I hope all readers will be more tolerant and patient with me, a little newbie. I believe it will be very interesting after officially entering the plot.

Maybe the Eight Wonders are shortcuts to the south, not as good as the grand road. But many people have been stuck at the foot of the mountain all their lives. If there is a shortcut, you should have fun. Why do you still think it is not the main road? Not everyone can have the talent of Lao Tianshi, who can reach the top of the mountain step by step. The Eight Magic Skills were really as bad as some book friends said, so they wouldn't have attracted so many people to pursue them.

The description in the front is vague, but the background of the protagonist is revealed in the following. Two words are incredible! For such a big guy, it's okay to be kidnapped by the morality of the tribe. And the protagonist described really looks like a gourd! There's really no wrong name. As long as you take the initiative to take your tribe's chickens and dogs to heaven, I can still understand.

Against the odds, the aliens are a hundred times stronger. Human technology is nothing, the aliens have already controlled everything.

It's not good to watch, and I don't recommend watching it. I would say that the person who can watch it has the strongest poison resistance.

Is this protagonist's character a normal person, or a time traveler? Author, what do you think, setting it like this?

Brother, for the sake of the plot and the self-consistency of the logic, it is normal for the protagonist to be frustrated, but you should pay attention to the writing. What is the moral kidnapping? To put it bluntly, you can be so wronged by such a big mistake. . . . . . Don't you have an elixir? No one will die anyway, just follow the three disasters and nine disasters in Journey to the West.

The writing was pretty good at the beginning, but when it came to revealing the background of the main character, it was a complete mess.

The main text starts after chapter 36. Anyone who has read it already knows the plot. What does the author think? After copying more than 30 chapters from the book, will anyone read it? ! ! !

If you have read the original comics and animations of this book, just skip the prologue. The prologue is the author's reflections and complaints written by the protagonist. Many of the views are deliberately intended to provoke controversy, so if you have read the original work, skipping it will not affect the rest of the book. The main text at the back is really exciting. The original plot also attracted me, a reader who hates reading originals and only likes to read fan fiction. It can only be said that the author has really worked hard, and the characters he wrote are generally in line with the impression of the original work, and there is no drama or OOC feeling that conflicts with the original work. But this book is also very tiring for me to read, because the protagonist is a lazy guy, and he can't get any pretentious plot. He can only find pleasure in the various fictional plots of the original characters. In addition, I really don't like the original plot. Although it is wonderfully written, I don't like it because I don't have the pleasure of destroying the original plot (because the plot has long since disappeared due to the collapse of the protagonist). I can only say that the highlight of this book is that after the protagonist changes the world, the original characters have wonderful plots in the changed world. Of course, as a group drama, there must be priorities. I watched it with the mentality of watching a fan, but I was too tired to watch it, because I just wanted to see the plot of more familiar characters such as Zhang Chulan and Feng Baobao. As a result, if these two were not the protagonists of the original work, there would probably be more scenes cut off in this book. Finally, the reason why I feel tired is probably because the author's setting is too broad. Originally, a group drama had to take into account a lot of things. Once the author's setting of the fairy world was released, he has only revealed a corner of it. Personally, I felt that the writing was too complicated. When I read, I felt like I was throwing a hammer here and there, so I felt tired.

I have never seen such a disgusting protagonist. You can just give all the Lu clan members immortality and everyone will be their slaves. This will save the family members from being killed later and the creation god will come to destroy other people. All crimes are only slightly punished, and all non-family members can just flatter themselves.

I was shocked when I read this book. . . The good reviews are that it really doesn't hurt my conscience. I thought it would be enough to describe it in two or three pictures, but after seeing more than a dozen pictures, I still got the same feeling. I clicked on the table of contents and saw, "Hey boy, after reading novels for more than ten years, I realized for the first time that I could write like this."

It is recommended that the country end, then popularize the Eight Wonders, build a spaceship to go to the universe, the materials are not good enough, the physique is not good enough, the Fenghou Qimen cannot tell the direction, there is no tool to connect to the sky, encounter aliens who cannot speak with both hands, explore the ruins and the spirit guide will directly lead the owner of the ruins, and other functions of the Eight Wonders can serve the universe. Finally, I want to say that the red line between the aliens and ordinary people is a joke to the universe←_←

If you want to read the plot normally, it is recommended to start reading from the end of Chapter 35. The first 35 chapters are the author's complaints about the manga Under One Person and the personal conjectures of the period of the One Person plot prequel, namely the Jiashen Rebellion! I have read Chapter 368 so far. Let me share your opinion. After the protagonist traveled to the past, he regarded both the real world and the world he created as a game. Do you know the opinions of ordinary people when they play games? They are all NPCs, what are you talking about? At first, I thought he had other reasons for refusing to allow his fellow racers to enter the world he created. It turned out that he felt that the entry of his racemates into the world he created affected him from playing the game "Creation God". The author arranged for Lu Ci to lead his racemates to kneel before him and die, forcing the protagonist to agree to let his racemates enter the world to extend his life! I don't know what to say when I see it, it doesn't feel very comfortable anyway! Then there was no problem with the plot. I read more than two hundred chapters in one go and it was okay! It feels like a masterpiece among one-person fandoms! As a result, after Xia He was forced to Europe, the uncomfortable feeling started, and it was very strong. Maybe it was because of the audience and censorship, not writing in China. When he arrived in Europe, Xia He began to deviate from the character of the original novel, and began to become a queen, transforming European dignitaries into aliens, fighting between the underworld and the white, and many innocent people died. Xia He actually didn't care, what? What is the protagonist doing, you ask? Playing games, just playing games, what? You asked Xia He Luliang why he didn't ask the protagonist for help? The question is that the protagonist is playing a game and cannot be contacted! After finally getting in touch, the protagonist pretended to be a big boss, which was a bit cool, and then accepted the four crazy ones and let them rule the world as their younger brothers (to give themselves territory! The purpose is to make others dare not say bad things about themselves!) The kind and honest Ma Xianhong persuaded the protagonist, but was educated by the protagonist in return, focusing on one point of view, the world is unkind, and all things are treated as stupid dogs! No matter relatives or friends, no love! Oh, after writing this, I probably know why I feel uncomfortable at the end. In my opinion, it is a wonderful novel. This novel is not the kind that crushes everything, but it is packed with laughs, passionate plot, and the protagonist who is first, second, and third in all, is both intelligent and full of evil! The supporting characters have distinct personalities, but they are also smooth in their dealings! Looking back at this novel, first of all, I want to say that the author grasped the personality of the original character very well. There is not much to say, but grasping it is one aspect, and not writing it is another aspect! The protagonist in the author's works somewhat regards himself as a superior god. He does not participate in any plot, does not comment on it, does not speak, and just sits in the room alone. You beat the other characters while I play my game. Without the participation of the protagonist, everything is a bit boring. That is, only when I see the occasional Heavenly Master Zhang Chulan and Feng Baobao can I become more interested! Personal opinion, fan fiction, writing style aside, getting into the characters is actually very important! Very important! But this novel has 400 chapters. Wang also appeared in one chapter, which was published earlier. Zhuge Qing published two chapters, but they were also hurriedly introduced. Feng Baobao published more than 30 chapters, Zhang Chulan more than 20 chapters, and Zhang Lingyu more than 70 chapters. (I'll talk about why Zhang Lingyu is over 70 later), what I'm talking about here is this name, and there are almost no plots related to them except Feng Baobao taking the protagonist to Qinling 24 Solar Terms Valley, and Ma Xianhong giving Feng Baobao a roe deer! Xia He has more than two hundred chapters, and Lu Liang has more than one hundred chapters! The entry point of the protagonist is Xia He, but Xia He's plot has nothing to do with the protagonist. This is not a daily novel, which makes people less motivated to read it! It's a bit tasteless, tasteless, and the plot is too confusing. It's a pity to abandon it! The author's question about the original character's character is very good! The author's writing style is also wrong!

I have read Under One Person's suggestion and start reading from chapter 35 to chapter 36. The front part is full of water.

Should we proceed with the main storyline or not?

Quanxingmiao

In the original work, Guo Liang laid a foreshadowing in the board of directors, but his death was too ordinary. I noticed that Guo Liang's eyes were very similar to Gu Qiting. Here I was guessing whether the owner of Daluo Cave might be Guo Liang. First of all, the self-cultivation furnace is also inseparable from Qu Tong. So, is the first experimenter of this so-called self-cultivation furnace related to Qu Tong? For example, there is a partnership between the descendants of the Eight Wonders, and then the holder of the Daluo Cave Temple disguises himself as a confidant and stares at Ma Xianhong, and Ma Xianhong fakes his death after his identity is useless when he is not outside to return to Qu Tong. My personal opinion is that the one who has always been suspected of Daluo Dongguan's manipulation of Wang Ye is probably Guo Liang, because he does not want an owner of the Eight Wonders with a conflicting attitude to affect Ma Xianhong (this may be the reason why Bilian in the official background was chased by Qu Tong). At least the first two of the three attacks on Wang Ye were consistent. The first time was when Ma Xianhong noticed that Wang Ye asked Guo Liang to talk to Wang Ye. The second time was when Wang Ye was preparing to deal with Ma Xianhong. The third time was when Bi Lian went to Tangmen and Wang Ye was trapped on the island to escape. There is no particularly good explanation here. It is a bit far-fetched to only target him when he is alone. But I still think it is reasonable to guess that Guo Liang will visit Daluo Cave.

The previous part is mainly to reveal the plot for those who have never watched it. After all, not everyone has seen it. Those who look down upon at every turn. The three golden chapters are quite addictive.