Survival in the Wilderness: Even the Barrages Don't Know I Have an Explosion Rate

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I feel very uncomfortable with the male protagonist written by the author (I can tell from the first chapter and the first female player I met), could it be the author himself? If you make the main character more interesting, even if you drive a car or something, it will be better than this. Also, there are a few places where you write that the protagonist even dislikes the pet fox when he sings. I found it quite embarrassing, but I don't know if you felt embarrassed reading it yourself. Also, even if the protagonist has a tenfold explosion rate, if you write about using soul crystals to trade with others and then buy them at a high price, it feels like a big fat sheep in the eyes of other players, which is very disgusting for readers! Because you yourself also wrote that the outside of the safe house is poisonous, so you have to wear a gas mask, but it wears off quickly! You also wrote that it is survival, not a game, and death is real death. You are the dominant party, but you want to be slaughtered, and you say you are not the one who is the one who is being taken advantage of.

The dialogue doesn't make sense, I might as well change Goldfinger to a narration.

Suddenly I received a system prompt that the first round of new book recommendations will begin at 0:00 on the 12th. It feels like the new book has not been included in the library at all. Why are you recommending it? I definitely have to pounce, but I still want to keep some memories~ ≥≤

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This introduction is awesome and very attractive.

What the hell, it's just a boss's skill being robbed by a mount, and it's also robbed by a knife!

The worst thing about this kind of book is that it forces others to participate. People who don't fail will basically have a hard time surviving.

If the hang-up is too big, either there will be a live broadcast or it will be doubled, otherwise the data will be greatly expanded.

I can't understand it, it's too fragmentary, the narration and the dialogue are too fragmentary.

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