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Are you serious, orthopedics? The setting of this thing is very real. I am a little scared. I was planning to give up the role of Naraku. I need to think carefully about how to write it. This book cannot be seen by people in my family. I really have a biological sister. Damn!

I was watching short videos in the middle of the night and got to Obito Uchiha. There is nothing good to say about this character, he is just a villain. I think the whitewashing in anime is a stain. Obito is a pure person. His world is very small and there is only one Lin. If Lin dies, his world will be gone. But this is a fanfic, I still hope to give him a good ending. I don't know what readers think.

Uchiha Iori character picture, this picture fits my imagination quite well.

Do you now use the same strategy for traveling across the Uchiha? Open a kaleidoscope (or have explosive force value), become the clan leader, rebel and threaten, engage in Danzo, smear F4, choose the fifth generation? I've read several books and it's all the same routine!

Danzo's arms were cut off and showed to everyone in Konoha. It was obvious to everyone in Konoha how Danzo could not be killed. Who dared to speak for Danzo at this time? How about the Hokage? He really thought he could cover the sky with just one hand. At this time, Danzo could not die. This was either a child of destiny or the defeat of everyone. I really can't accept this.

The weasel kid is about to jump.

I thought I was dragging people from all over the world😓It turned out to be Shan Hokage, so cool

The previous chapter was pretty good, but when it came to protecting Danzo, the author didn't have that kind of thinking. In that case, Danzo couldn't be saved. After that, it didn't matter if he delayed the execution and replaced him with a scapegoat. The author's thinking is relatively immature, but the casual approach does avoid some unreasonable scenes, but the too sharp questions cannot be read even if they are treated as jokes.

It's best to change the habitual long-winded writing, especially the chapters about Uchiha's reform. It starts with a point of view and then expands into 500 words. One sentence cannot say much.

Many people think it's a little bit poisonous, and indeed it is. But I think the Third Generation will definitely protect Danzo to the death. There are too many scandals in Danzo's head. If we don't protect him, the Uchiha clan will definitely be able to unravel the things in his brain. Once the Uchiha clan gets rid of all these After the explosion, the Third Generation couldn't even sit in the Hokage's seat. He would definitely step down directly. He must keep it in his own hands, so the strategy he gave was to keep Danzo in the ANBU. He would rather lose the impartiality of the Hokage, alienate the ninja clan, and publicly deviate from Danzo even if he wanted to keep it. This wave is about abandoning the car to protect the commander, and protecting Danzo is to protect yourself. And there are some ninjas present at this time. Konoha has become a world of civilian ninjas (second setting). Although they are not strong, they are the largest in number. The general trend of people's hearts is Sarutobi Hiruzen. He has controlled Konoha for decades and has the same prestige as the emperor. I don't think it's particularly poisonous.

I think if you write a fanfic about "Taiman Ninja", you will definitely become a master.

I don't know if you like the role of sister. I plan to add a role for her. If you don't like it, please tell me.

Every time I write a branch plot, I can't stop. I originally wanted to make a transition, but the more I write, the more enthusiastic I become. This is an old problem. Alas, I will end this branch plot as soon as possible and return to the main plot.

Why did you cut it off? You have a good idea. Just don't do gender reversal.

If you go to Hokage, you must run away first, then print the training method, find a way to kill the big name, and then take the opportunity to issue a book. Only when people have hatred, and the ninjutsu is available, you can find a place to have fun. After the chaos is over, you can do things according to the situation. Of course, you may be directly chased and chopped by Liu Dao.

The eyes for saving and reading files are too uncreative. Don't you think this category of game novels is boring?,,

? Is it done? Will it be updated in the future?

I suggest you cancel the two chapters and combine them into one. I feel like not even one chapter has a thousand words.

I haven't read it yet, is there any incest?

I only ordered one chapter but ended up clicking on all subsequent chapters. Forget it, I voted monthly to get an apprentice.

Don't worry, just write the main plot and use your imagination. There is no market for traditional ones now. Everyone knows the plot, so copying them won't be interesting. You have already written the Heavens. For the main line, you will use the magic transformation as your base. For the branch lines, you will do things. For the parallel lines, you will write various other development models to see if there are more possibilities. Then the Heavens will link up, such as world tasks and so on. Later, Otsutsuki's combat power has exceeded the standard. You can invade others, others invade you, and then develop a new training system.

It's written like a mentally retarded person. No matter what character he is, he is trying to reduce his intelligence. The third generation and Danzo only have the IQ of a three-year-old, so the protagonist can crush them both with an IQ of a seven-year-old.

One chapter a day is enough for what you're doing, why don't you break it down?

I suddenly discovered a very buggy thing. Hashirama and Ban went to the future through the dragon vein, and then Hashirama and Ban were reincarnated in the future and had no memory. . . Even if the memory is sealed, it should be cleared when you die. . Dragon Vein does not have the power to parallel the universe. So how did the author solve this bug😂😂😂