Douluo's Ice Winged Angel

It doesn't matter if the system is conscious, there is a second time traveler, and he is also a lesbian time traveler. The two systems still have bodies, and they know each other I can only say that they are awesome

My evaluation of Bibi Dong is that Qian Xunji originally reported that the child bride was a child with better talents born in the Qianren family and accepted Bibi Dong as his disciple. No matter what thoughts he had, there is no doubt about Bibi Dong's good qualities and various resources. However, Bibi Dong used the resources of Wuhun Palace to fall in love with Da Shi. You must know that Da Shi's Blue Lightning Overlord Sect is not compatible with Wuhun Palace. If you have any brains, you will know that you can't be with him. If you have a brain, you will like Wuhun. A genius in the palace, Qian Xunji is not feeling well but he is also his own force, so he will let it go. At most, he will reduce the resources given to Bibi Dong and be more indifferent to Bibi Dong. But Bibi Dong is seeking his own death, falling in love with a person from the opposite force, stealing information to others, and running away with him. What do you think outsiders think? The Saint of the Tang Dynasty Wuhun Temple let the hostile force abducted and trained a top master for the hostile force. Isn't this a joke for outsiders and other forces? Wuhundian is still shameless? Isn't this asking for death? Not to mention Qian Xunji, if it were me, I would have had a cerebral hemorrhage. It was me, I could kill Bibi Dong with one knife.

After reading the first chapter, I knew this book was going to be scrapped. Seraphim are martial souls given by God. There are no angels that mutate into other attributes😓

Damn, this book is really poisonous, even Shen Nong couldn't stand it. It's okay if there's a second time traveler. She's a lesbian and I can barely bear it. But I can't stand it when she takes advantage of the Snow Emperor and sets her sights on the protagonist's woman. If it were the other person, I'd kill her if I didn't.

System consciousness is a routine that has been used for many years. In fact, it would be better if there was no system later (only personal opinion)

I've only written a few chapters, but the main character is already out of character. A lesbian time traveler appears out of nowhere, and then hundreds of chapters are filled with stories about this lesbian and the original little sisters. Disgusting people are really good at this.

In the end, it was too poisonous. That lesbian soul was an adult, and her strength was not as strong as yours. She was just a fairy tool person. She was gone without the protagonist to save her. She told the protagonist about the fairy grass, and the protagonist also gave her the fairy grass. How could she still miss the protagonist's partner? This is nothing more than a white-eyed wolf. The protagonist can still endure it and says it's for the sake of the plan. There is no chance for the rest of the plot. Apart from having a system, how can this lesbian help the plan? The protagonist is a real ninja who can endure being bullied. Originally, I wanted to pursue a novel about a single heroine, Snow Emperor, who tortures Bibi Dong. However, she was bullied as soon as she and Snow Emperor confirmed their relationship.

Fortunately, I took a look at the comments after being tricked by the heroine. There are many time travelers with bodies in both systems. The other time traveler is a lesbian. I can only say good luck to you.

Can compete with Ultra's son-in-law 👍

Rebel against the Tang Dynasty every day, Douluo fandom appears - if you don't fight Tang San's death syndrome

You died from the poison, and another Lily Traveler popped up in the middle, so I endured it. But you want to write a bunch of time-travelers later, and I can't stand it anymore, author

By the way, can you change that lesbian fetish, that woman? If he has this fetish, let it go. He stares at the protagonist's wife, giving people a very awkward and angry feeling, especially holding her thigh and rubbing her there. The protagonist doesn't get angry. This is a bit unreasonable. Even a man won't tolerate it. Even if he doesn't kill him, he will definitely teach him a lesson. Otherwise, he will not be able to justify it, and it will not look good if it is spread out.

Author, look at what so many people have said and why don't you change it? This second time traveler, he can have this hobby, but shouldn't he go towards the protagonist's wife? Moreover, his fetish is directed towards Qian Renxue, and it is still Qian Renxue when he was a child. I feel very awkward and disgusting. Now it is directly directed to the protagonist's wife, taking advantage of all kinds of things. I can only say that this protagonist is simply useless. Either this should be changed, or this book does not need to be updated. A lot of people are criticizing the author and not coming to read it.

I originally wanted to book all of them, but it turned out that such a disgusting thing came out. I didn't even want to watch it. I almost didn't want to watch it. As soon as I saw it, I felt very uncomfortable and couldn't accept it. In those harem dramas, at least the protagonist's wife will be protected. At least in the ones with single heroines, the protagonist protects the heroine. Now this protagonist is simply useless. It can be said that he is a useless machine among time travellers.

The protagonist doesn't know the plot. If you write a fanfic, how is your behavior different from that of the master?

Is the second time traveler a patch made by the author? The protagonist doesn't know that the plot can't be continued?

I was watching so well, but suddenly another time traveler came and ran away for me.

It makes me so embarrassed. What kind of writing techniques are you picking your toes?

The lesbian time traveler is really the biggest flaw of this book and it made me not want to read it.

Self-celebrity article. Complaints. Say something when something happens. The author complained for a long time. Sometimes the whole picture is just about making fun of myself.

In fact, if so many time-travelers hadn't invaded, the score of this book would probably have doubled or tripled.

If I were the great worshiper of Wuhun Hall, I would know the plot. I would be so torn apart. The labor and management will directly disband Wuhun Hall and run away with the worship hall to the Sun and Moon Continent. No one will control the two empires to directly go to war and care about the life and death of the civilians. No one will control the ferocious beasts who hunt for soul rings to riot and humankind will perish. Bibi Donghu Liena, the Shrek Seven Monsters, whoever he loves, no matter what the flood behind him is.

How did you write the extra in the past two days? Don't you want to continue writing the original one? Didn't you just send someone to the Sun and Moon Continent? There is also a battle between gods!

Am I the only one who thinks this book has strange sentence fragmentation and lots of typos? This is too uncomfortable to read. The leader of the thief in front of me told him to quit immediately. Never see you again🥱

Overall, I feel like it's a lot of nonsense and too much brain-filling.

The two time-travelers are really poisonous, and the protagonist has a very low sense of presence. Junk article

Let's see how this book and the author were criticized🙂

Some people read Tang San's books and some are fans of them.

In fact, this is a reference. Douluo: Shocked, I traveled through time and became Bibi Dong, but I could finish that one, but I couldn't stand the title of this one. I complained about the original work for a long time at first, and then the second one who traveled through time actually said that he didn't know anything, and I was speechless. Since I don't know the first few dozen chapters, I'm a caterpillar. It got messed up after about 25 chapters. You can read the full text by reading the title later 🤭

I read it twice, and each time I only lasted about a dozen chapters. The main reason was that the early stages were too tedious. I have also read the hydrology, but there must be a main line, not just a hammer here and there. Before I finish here, the perspective has shifted to another place.