Leisure Life at Hogwarts

This book is so good. Come on. Come on.

The first one with the ancestral wand eats meat, the tenth one licks the plate, and the 100th one is garbage. No matter how good the work is, if this kind of bad routine is added, it will become garbage.

The heroine should be an original one. It's already 2023. Give Hermione a holiday. Hermione has had enough boyfriends over the years that she almost vomited. For example, create an original Ollivander family

I have some ideas about the heroine's character. How about her natural and stupid attributes?

Nicoléme lives in France. Is there no wizarding shopping street in France? I'm still going to the UK. Isn't it true that the only place in the world that sells stuff is Diagon Alley?

I have read almost 50 chapters, and I have a feeling that after the plot with Harry started, the focus of being the protagonist itself has deviated. I didn't see the protagonist's leisure life, emmm, at first I thought it was the Hogwarts version of magical farming life. Nicholas Flamel's Godson started the story, and I was looking forward to it, wanting to see how the author would write about alchemy. As a result, he transitioned extremely quickly to Hogwarts, and entered the story of Harry. I was a little disappointed, but I held it back and watched the follow-up. Actually, I was a little bit looking forward to how the protagonist would use alchemy and the Unicorn Holy Spirit talent to live a leisurely life when he was in first grade. However, he was disappointed. Like many HP fans, there are a lot of original descriptions, the protagonist is with the group, the protagonist's many things are covered in a few strokes, and he makes a scene, and then there are the original descriptions of Harry and his two friends. It is often seen that in the content of a chapter, half of the chapter is about the protagonist doing something, and then half of the chapter is about the original description. In fact, it's not impossible, but the author's division is very rigid. At present, it seems that the main plot and the title of the novel are not relevant, and it does not express its own characteristics. In order to live a leisurely life, it leads to a life that is not leisurely at all. The main plot is already contradictory. At present, the easiest part for HP fans to excel is the campus life at Hogwarts. After leaving the campus, many fans become dull, gradually boring, or even unfinished. So does the author plan to mention at the end that everything is settled and then start a leisure life?

What's not good is that the plot is very forced and forced. It clearly reminds the unicorn family not to come out, otherwise they will die. Then for the sake of the plot, a unicorn suddenly comes out and is killed, just to cater to the plot. The protagonist of Yingyuan hangs out with the three protagonists every day

Enter the Eagle Academy with your front foot and wander into the Forbidden Forest at night. If you are not good enough, just enter the Lion Academy. You have to be unique. The four major academies originally focus on the description of lions and snakes. It is easier to write from these two academies. So since you have chosen the Eagle Academy, why not follow the character design of the Eagle Academy? Isn't it easy to start the story? But this is your choice. In a novel, storyline and characterization are the most important, but you see, the two are already conflicting because you are not good enough.

Can you... Don't always read the original text? After entering the plot of Azkaban, look at how much original text was used

The ancestral magic wand with bad routines and weird names is not the same as the Japanese protagonist. It will not become stronger unless the people around it die.

The protagonist has no role. The protagonist creates the appearance of planning something, but actually does nothing... The plot of the secret room is exactly the same as the original work. The protagonist is soy sauce, and then what the characters did and said in the original work is still done and said here. Who was petrified in the original plot is still the same here. There is no difference whether there is a protagonist or not. There is no difference at all. It is like watching the secret room again through the perspective of a passerby.

Can't the protagonist be a nanny? There is no protagonist in the original work and nothing happened to Harry. This is obviously inconsistent with the introduction. You tricked people into killing him. Slipping away.

According to the setting, the protagonist is insulated from black magic, and the unicorn represents light and sanctity, so we shouldn't mess with it in this regard. Dark magic has powerful fire, Dumbledore has Vulcan to clear the way, Laoge gas stove, the protagonist can make a bright holy flame. With light as the core, coupled with Gublé's fairy fire (the original work is called the eternal fire, a flame that can burn forever, so many fans seem to ignore it), the principle of dementors sucking happy emotions, etc., Create a holy fire fueled by negativity, evil, sin, and dark power. (Refer to Red Lotus Karmic Fire) When the time comes, set fire to Azkaban. Those who are not burned to death will be the pillars of the righteous path.

Pure running account

It's okay, but it really still focuses on Harry Potter, as if they are the protagonists. I hope the protagonists have more scenes, and the writing is okay.

Pig's feet are inconsistent in character, behavior, and thoughts. The title of the book has been changed. Is this called leisure?

Pig's Knuckle has no strength, it's too bad, and the writing is not attractive.

Eunuch?

How about the heroine Furong😍

The last dozen or so pictures are really hard to describe. I copied them directly from the original work. Then I might as well go watch the movie. The protagonist you wrote is Edith, not Harry Potter.